LC #42 Pipers Alley

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04-06-2006, 12:48 PM
hey everyone!
been working on this for a few hours, thought it might be time for some critique! anyone?!

04-06-2006, 12:56 PM

i like the concept of the whole refuge-tranquil-thingy!!
i would try to create some more depth in your image. more detail close-up, and try to define where the light comes from!
keep it up!

04-06-2006, 03:04 PM
Gread idea, it should come out very nice. Add more lights and shadows, more particulars, and go on :thumbsup:

04-06-2006, 04:11 PM
thankyou very much everyone!

the problem with using parallel perspective is it looking flat :(
I was going for a cloudy/rainy day (chinese rainforrest style...), so the shadows etc wont be so defined! but I'll add some shadows for the lanterns!
I'll work on the details and add a proper background tomorrow, I've got basketball now

thank you again for your critique, this forum is so great for that compared to!

cheers, n.

04-07-2006, 02:25 PM
hey everyone!
update, as promised
tried to work on all your points:

04-08-2006, 06:33 PM
I updated the above photo pretty pleased with it now!

04-08-2006, 08:44 PM
final, unless anyone has any suggestions!

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