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04 April 2006, 10:24 PM
This image is finished for the time being, however, I am currently working on one for my mum (this image is of my dad) and when I put the two together I want to work more detail into them. Any critique or advice etc would be greatly appreciated, especially with regard to the skin texture. Thanks!

04 April 2006, 11:59 PM
I really like what you did here ! Just a little weak point where the skin meets the iris in the right eye and I don't know ... perhaps the teeth a slight bit too white ? But awesome stuff - can't wait to see your mother !

04 April 2006, 05:19 AM
You really shoundn't have done what you did to make him so mad!! Seriously, his tounge looks a bit too phallic. Can he really stick out his tounge like that?

04 April 2006, 05:09 PM
yup! i wasnt aware that it was an unusual way to stick out ones tongue......

04 April 2006, 07:47 PM
Great pic! I can't wait to see the mother! :D

As far as crits,I have to agree with thePhotographer, it makes the flesh in that area look too chunky as opposed to a thin eyelid. Also, the hair on the top of the forehead, needs some kind of shadow under it, it looks a little cut and paste as is.

Other than that, awsome job on the skin!

04 April 2006, 12:43 AM
if your interested, i've finished this painting, but i started a new folio under the name escapizm. go checkitout!!!

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