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03 March 2006, 04:43 AM
Omari is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (

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03 March 2006, 04:59 AM (

A group of young hunters venture out into the forest in search of food. They leave behind the youngest of them all, the newest hunter's little sister. As they begin to pick up on a trail on some strange animal they hear a loud cry. Instantly the rush toward the sound to see a pack of creatures snapping at the newest hunter's little sister. The chase begins and so does the journey for these characters.

I am open to any comments and suggestions so happy challenge hunting.

03 March 2006, 05:10 AM (

They franticly begin to chase after these spider bat creatures and the suddenly realize that they have entered to far into the forest and nobody ever wants to get to far into this forest.

I wanted to get a better view on my scene so I did some pre-visual work. Red guys are the creatures and the blue guys are the hunters. These are rough poses but I think they are affective. Leave comments and suggestions please.

03 March 2006, 05:26 AM
Wow, seriously, you have a great scene there, nice character pose, too. You posed them in foword k, right? HaHa. Yeah, great idea. Hope the character design and atmosphere are what i'm imagining them to be. But, damn, those some big ass spider/bat/thing-a-ma-jig are huge! Bump.

03 March 2006, 11:25 PM (

Decide that the other batspider looks like a really smart human hehehe so heres the update on that one

03 March 2006, 11:37 PM
Much better. I take it ZBrush is gonna come in handy for these duys?

03 March 2006, 03:43 AM (

just a little work please leave suggestions

03 March 2006, 08:02 AM
good start on the spline. need to see more! Dang, that's creepy!

03 March 2006, 08:25 PM (

Bat Spider Update....please leave any suggestions

03 March 2006, 12:53 AM (

i decided that the nose was a little too im gonna keep the face more like a spider..can wait to see the ears on it

03 March 2006, 12:55 AM
The front on view looks a bit like a playstation :)

03 March 2006, 01:02 AM
Nice start. Keep going :)

04 April 2006, 12:14 AM (

Just a hair test didnt get to do that much work last heres a little update

04 April 2006, 04:24 PM
Kick that thing's ass! Squash it! Augh!

Lookin' good, bro. Lookin' forward to seeing your ZBrush work. Keep it up!

04 April 2006, 04:33 PM
Very interesting. I think you are pretty right on as far as the hair goes. Creepy little thing. My only coincern is that the head looks larger toward the neck region than it does in your sketchs. If you look at the sketchs, he has more of a triangular shape and the model has an oval shape. Nice work though, keep it up! :wip:

04 April 2006, 02:41 AM
Yea I see what you mean, i think that i just might put the nose back on what do u think?

04 April 2006, 09:58 AM
I like your original sketch. If you can keep the 3D model consistent with it I think you will have a very interesting looking character.

I guess what I am trying to say is I want the nose back. :wavey:

04 April 2006, 02:23 AM (

I didnt get that much done...I was out of town...and im working on the shaoe of its head and the ears so here yea go

04 April 2006, 10:31 PM (

just a small update

04 April 2006, 10:35 PM
and yes im am working on the shape of the face, dont worry about that..just have a little hard time thinking of a very creepy effective body type for this creature..i'll keep yea posted

04 April 2006, 08:11 PM
The hair is lookin good. See, little things like that catches peoples attention. Imagine what'll happen if you had the whole thing done, with texture and hair and all. money!

04 April 2006, 04:33 AM (

small fixes...just wanted to get feed back

04 April 2006, 07:50 PM (

i think its coming along.

04 April 2006, 04:31 AM (

Just more work...thanks for all the help so far.Leave any suggestions and comments please.

04 April 2006, 07:51 AM
I'm startin' ta see the whole picture here. Now go and do some more work, boy!

04 April 2006, 06:26 PM
Kickass, bro.

04 April 2006, 01:01 AM (

didnt do that much work....its hard having a girlfriend.

04 April 2006, 05:03 AM
are you going for that big of a height?

tsh...What a lame excuse...

05 May 2006, 10:53 PM (

these are the main guys....i need to pick it u

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