View Full Version : Need some good criticism.

03 March 2006, 10:49 PM
Hi everyone,

first i want to say thats a very nice place. So much people and beautiful artwork.
I have watch now for a long time. I have seen so many styls and techniques and i think its time that i need some good criticism to get even that better. Here are some of my last pictures. Hope you like it and give me some imprints.


03 March 2006, 02:30 AM
Hey, welcome aboard

thats some nice work :)
Little suggestions i could make (tho im no genius by any means),
in the first one you could put some stronger rim lighting on the foreground elemnts. and maybe a bit more detail on the closest buildings and that window frame, even if you keep the details tonnally shallow, i think it might help.

The second one the same - those fg trees need some highlights from the moon light. dont have to compete with the focal point but they dont look right in complete silhouette.

The third one is fantastic. nothing i can really add to that one.

keep up the good work :D


03 March 2006, 12:29 PM
Hi matty,

thanks a lot. I change the second one, givem some more rim light. Now the tree part has a nice volume.

At the first one you are right too. There had to be more detail in the fg and a rim light is missing. But about the detail im not sure now. I have some probs what to draw there, also during i have painted it. :hmm:


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