View Full Version : Vehicle: Alfa Brera
12 December 2002, 11:00 PM
ok ive found some time to finish my first CG car (i posted the wires and shade some weeks ago)after..heads, monsters, orcs, trolls and etc
Let me know if u like the car and wanna buy it :D
or what do u think about my job!
alfa brera (http://members.xoom.virgilio.it/evilmaul/temp/alfa_brera.htm)
alfa brera1 (http://members.xoom.virgilio.it/evilmaul/temp/alfa_brera1.htm)
alfa brera2 (http://members.xoom.virgilio.it/evilmaul/temp/alfa_brera2.htm)
alfa brera3 (http://members.xoom.virgilio.it/evilmaul/temp/alfa_brera3.htm)
alfa brera4 (http://members.xoom.virgilio.it/evilmaul/temp/alfa_brera4.htm)
alfa brera5 (http://members.xoom.virgilio.it/evilmaul/temp/alfa_brera5.htm)
12 December 2002, 11:46 PM
but you need to put a reflection in the window of the building;).....looks awesome though!!!
12 December 2002, 02:13 AM
..Check the "nose". It's more round on the real one.
Hmmm about the roof, I would say the glas they use for the roof should be darker. Otherwise it would be strange if the sun is up :P
Why did U changed the COLOR? I only seen it in RED...Lets say Alfa Red ;)
Oh and the taillights should be a litle bit red'der. Just a litle.
12 December 2002, 02:51 AM
man the brera is soo cool !!!!
but make the color alfa RED ! this is the one and only color for this CAR !
(i drive a 147 ;)
i agree show us more front pix !
12 December 2002, 08:47 AM
:-) OK ...fixed the reflections....give to u a red version!
Alfa red (http://members.xoom.virgilio.it/evilmaul/temp/alfared.htm)
alfa red1 (http://members.xoom.virgilio.it/evilmaul/temp/alfared1.htm)
alfa red2 (http://members.xoom.virgilio.it/evilmaul/temp/alfared2.htm)
if u want i can render it in a more higher res.
12 December 2002, 10:33 AM
Great! I have the Car Design Yearbook here beside me, and your model looks just like the concept car!
12 December 2002, 12:01 PM
NICE MODEL :thumbsup:
reflection still not right.... too clean and glass need some thickness, maybe u could also put the reflection of the car on the glass door of the building, that should make the car looks more nature in the enviroment
12 December 2002, 01:44 PM
La versione rossa è molto migliore, il problema della tua immagine secondo me, a parte qualche dettaglio in modellazione, sono vetri e illuminazione, troppo piatta, quelle riflessioni fanno sembrare la macchina di plastica, non metallizzata. A parte questo lavoro ottimo, complimenti :bounce:
12 December 2002, 03:06 PM
excellent model, but you need to tweak the reflections a bit, as well as making the glas a bit thicker. give the surface of the car some grime, oh and the metal looks a bit plastic to me....:shrug:
12 December 2002, 03:08 PM
oh, and what software did you use? i appologise if im not paying attention and you already answered this one...:rolleyes:
12 December 2002, 03:13 PM
he used XSI potatohead
12 December 2002, 09:27 PM
Very nice model and renders. The very first one is still the best I think. Don't like the red - too saturated and makes it look... not right.
Widen/darken the door front panel gap a tiny bit, so it still appear in the (first) render.
The things that stand out most are the tires and lack of reflection on the background. Also the shadow is a bit too sharp.
Overall very impressive work! Cool car too :)
12 December 2002, 12:31 AM
Sick model dude! I love that car, but the wheels look a bit big, Personaly I would give it smaller tires that are more low profile.
Tis a bit grainy as well, would like to see one with higher sample rate on the lighting.
12 December 2002, 04:15 AM
you have one really nice model started, I like the scene Idea, gives the sense of realism, but some things are a little off, Mainly the reflections are way to strong, and maybe add some shadows or something dark in the upper sky area to add some more contrast in the surfaces,, just tossing out some Ideas I play with.
12 December 2002, 04:32 PM
thx u to all guys for the comments and suggestions! i agree with yours opinions.
ill try to fix reflections (car paint and environment) and the shadows (too dark).
The grain its not an render effect...i added it later in Photoshop.
PS: ThirdEYE_01: meno male che non capiscono l'italiano qui la maggior aprte; il tuo molto migliore devo dire mi ha scioccato un pò :p :D
12 December 2002, 05:53 PM
very nice overall. The red paint could use some tweaks to make it look less CG, but it does make it stand out a lot better in the environment that it is in.
I am glad to see a car in an environment as opposed to a boring white backdrop.
12 December 2002, 07:45 PM
whooO! :bounce: all these beutifull cars :) :thumbsup:
12 December 2002, 04:08 AM
very nice good job
12 December 2002, 02:06 PM
Bravo, la tua auto è veramente bella. Cerca però di diminuire la saturazione della carrozzeria per amalgamarla maglio con l'ambiente. I vetri sembrano molto sottili e troppo bianchi, devi darli uno shader più cupo e riflettente.
Great job. Your model is cool. Try to decrease the level of saturation of the red shader to blend more with the environment.
Change the shader for the glasses, because they look thiny and too bright.
12 December 2002, 07:39 PM
thx again for the comments and suggestions guys!
i make some changes about reflection and shadows...and lower the saturation in red version. Hope looks better now. :hmm:
here the link (sorry for the large images about 800 kb)
Brera new (http://members.xoom.virgilio.it/evilmaul/temp/breranew.htm)
12 December 2002, 01:27 PM
Very well done!!!
12 December 2002, 11:31 PM
Hey, nice, this is one of my favourite car designs!
Did you have some blueprints for modeling?
If yes, please tell me where I can find them.
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