View Full Version : The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: Jonathan Kui

03-01-2006, 03:48 AM
Jonathan Kui is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (

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03-02-2006, 11:30 PM (

Hi, this is my first idea, its like an adventurer flying on the back of a giant eagle. Im thinking of placing either a castle in the back or like a cave of death. so what do you guys think?

03-05-2006, 09:33 PM (

just did some sketches of the boy, it doesnt quite have the feel that i want for him but for some reason i cant quite place whats wrong. what do you guys think? any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

03-06-2006, 05:50 AM (

Took another stab at the main character, i like this one alot more, not sure if ill go with this one though. Id really like to know what you guys think. thanks.

03-10-2006, 06:41 AM (

I thought of another idea, its a little different but its similar, except in this one there will be more in the background than just a few birds. Ill have the lineart done as soon as i can. What do you guys think?

03-11-2006, 04:16 AM
Hey man,
Thanks for dropping by me thread. Glad you can join the challenge.

I like the first composition. The one with the birds. You can definately push the perspective there, plus it has a nice sense of journey to it. So i would play around with that more.

goodluck and will be checking again.

03-11-2006, 05:16 PM
the sketches are lookin good LhongJohn. i think both ideas have potential. i'd like to see you make some more sketches, just to flesh things out a bit more, still a long way to go till lthe deadline so i wouldn't finalize things just yet. i agree with Arc80 on pushing the perspective on both ideas. now that i think of it, i think your bird piece is stronger than the other one. wouldn't hurt to come up with more ideas and sketches though. good luck man! have fun with this challenge!

03-12-2006, 09:16 PM
thanks for the reply guys, i see what you guys are saying. Im kinda swamped with essays and assignments and stuff, who's ever heard of an econ essay? I mean really? never mind that. Ill try to post more complete sketches from now on, instead of just bits and pieces of one. thanks again.

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