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02 February 2006, 05:23 PM
Blaz Porenta is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (

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02 February 2006, 05:28 PM
Hey! Welcome to the challenge! I bet you'll do great this time too.. I wish you good luck and loads of fun!! :)

02 February 2006, 05:34 PM
bwahahaha... lets make some mess :buttrock: And thnx to u FrozZT for already replying to my thread when even I didnt manage to post something, hehe...

02 February 2006, 05:41 PM
Nice to see you for this new challenge guy, good luck

02 February 2006, 05:42 PM
So, the Ninja has come to knock us all on our ASSN? ;)

02 February 2006, 05:56 PM
:eek: I'm so excited! Good luck with your challenge!

02 February 2006, 05:57 PM
Best of Luck Blaz!

It's a fantastic theme and i know you'll give us something lovely to look at!

02 February 2006, 06:03 PM
yea go blaz!


02 February 2006, 06:16 PM
Hi NinjaASSN
Nice to see you again.
( what a theme he,he,:) copy and paste your SPECTACULAR, TOP 5 guarante )
Can't wait to see what you create this time! :bounce:

Good luck:thumbsup:

02 February 2006, 06:17 PM
Hey dude Welcome back
Cant wait to see your cocept
keep it up
and cheers

02 February 2006, 06:50 PM
Yeeaw good to see you again Blaz! looking forward to see what you come up with this time, good luck and have fun man!!!

02 February 2006, 06:59 PM
Hey Mr. Ninja.. can't wait to se what you come up with.
I Know it's gonna be good! Best of luck :thumbsup:

02 February 2006, 07:02 PM
Blaz, hey, great to see you around! I can't wait to see what you come up with this time..subscribing...

02 February 2006, 07:31 PM
Hi Blaz! More fun ahead! :)

02 February 2006, 08:19 PM
Hey, Blaz, looking forward to seeing what you'll come up with... as well as your always-insightful critiques! Have fun...!


02 February 2006, 08:33 PM
nice to see u again.. have fun!

02 February 2006, 08:57 PM
Wassup Blaz! I am glad to see u here, buddy, good luck!:thumbsup:

02 February 2006, 10:47 PM
Welcome dude. Glad you could make it again. Subcribing to your thread now, heeheehee.

Goodluck and lets have fun.

03 March 2006, 01:58 AM
hey blaz~its gonna be great to have u in the challenge~once again side by side dude~:thumbsup:best of luck

03 March 2006, 06:47 AM
Wow! Welcome! :thumbsup:
Good luck to you buddy! :bounce: Hi is glad to see you at this competition!
You already have ideas? ;)

Yours faithfully LexLe

03 March 2006, 11:41 AM
HI Blaz !

I welcome you on new Challenge!

03 March 2006, 03:59 PM
many thnx to all of u ppl, for such a warm welcome! :)

And now to the first concept... I was thinking about fairytale characters migrating from our world/imagination, coz we (adults) stoped believing in them.. so they r looking for a differnt place to live.. maybe they r leaving from an adult person, and r searching a child to settle in his mind/beliefs.

Donno exactly how would this concept look like, but what do u think of a story???

03 March 2006, 04:03 PM
yo blaž wasuup..where is da concept??? :bounce:

03 March 2006, 04:16 PM
welcome, blaz! glad to see you joining :)
concept sketch concept sketch!!! :bounce: can't wait! :)

03 March 2006, 09:31 PM
hey mate, good luck on the contest

03 March 2006, 07:38 AM
Hey Blaz! Got my eyes on your thread!

03 March 2006, 08:14 AM
yo ninja .. welcome & have fun :D :wip:

03 March 2006, 09:08 AM
good luck to you Blaz... Cant wait to see whats your initial idea! :)

03 March 2006, 04:58 PM
Good luck friend! Ready to next challenge :scream:

03 March 2006, 07:54 PM
still no entry from Mr. Ninja? :D

suspensiones... :eek:

good luck!


03 March 2006, 03:01 PM
Hi Blaz!
I'll have my thumbs up for you. :thumbsup:
Wish you luck and lot of fun!

03 March 2006, 04:42 AM
We are curious mate!

03 March 2006, 10:10 AM
heh, thnx ppl! I'm planing to post first sketches during this week, maybe even today, depends on the work (I must say that Im quite busy ~ lots of projects ~ last days and have some problems with time organisation). So stay around and I hope u'll be satisfied with results :) thnx again for stopping by!

03 March 2006, 11:07 AM
heyaaaaa blaz!! have tons of fun on this challenge:D

cant wait to see some sketches!! :D

03 March 2006, 12:43 PM
Good luck, Ninja :thumbsup:

03 March 2006, 02:43 PM
best luck Blaz, nice to challenge side of you and your work!

cya dude!


03 March 2006, 07:16 PM (

this is how will I start this challenge.. kids right after the school went to the nearest stream and put into the water their small boat they made. and the journey begins down the stream..

03 March 2006, 07:17 PM
nothing wrong wit that at all.. love it. unique idea and nice style... coud be a line art!

03 March 2006, 07:25 PM
Ahhh...I love cute and I can just imagine it wonderfully detailed with great colors and all. Please do this one!

03 March 2006, 07:34 PM
So it begins :thumbsup: I love the idea, sooo adorable and lovely, hope you'll stick with this one :D :thumbsup:

03 March 2006, 08:05 PM
very nice sketch! i like it :thumbsup:

03 March 2006, 08:54 PM
ahh finally some progress from the ninja! :thumbsup:

will be keeping track!


03 March 2006, 08:56 PM
Hey! Nice to see you've started something... You could put an ant or something on the boat. I remember doing stuff like that as the cruel child i was :p haha! Its fun to see your doing something with a more stylized approach than before, it'll be interesting... Hope to see more soon! Later..

03 March 2006, 10:05 PM
W!L: it could be lineart as well, but as its just a first idea let it be a sketch :) I think I'll develop this a bit further and also try to get some other ideas for this theme.. after all the challenge just started. thnx for stoping by!

paperclip: Im glad u like it! thnx, and if I'll go with this one there will sure be lots of details.

elgrozni: hi buddy! and thnx, I'll see about sticking to this one, coz there is soooo much time :) but its nice to see ppl like the idea.

Vahn: thnx man!

ragdoll: hehe, finally yea! Im glad I started doing something as well. thnx!

FrozZT: I was thinking of puting a small animal into the boat as well (a mouse, an ant...) but later than I realized that everybody in this challenge r drawing small cudly animals so I didnt want to blend into the croud. If I'll stick with this theme I'll leave the boat emty and a main "character" of the pic as it is. thnx for stoping by!

03 March 2006, 10:21 PM
Nice idea! I like faces a lot :)

03 March 2006, 01:43 AM
Hey, nice idea ,and there is a brand new style that u made so far, nice characters as well
keep it up mate

03 March 2006, 02:32 AM
u've started at last~pretty cool for the 1st idea~i see ur going with a different approach here~awaiting for more:thumbsup:

03 March 2006, 05:57 AM
Good to see you work again Blaz. I always enjoy watching you develop an image. Good luck. I like this concept.

03 March 2006, 09:50 AM
look's nice

03 March 2006, 09:59 AM
very original idea and lovely characters design, have fun

03 March 2006, 06:59 AM
Man, this one is great concept! Itīs kinda dreamy (donīt know if the word exists, hehe...)!

What i mean is, there is poetry on this one. I know itīs a first idea, but a great idea in deed. Think well about using this one for the final image!

03 March 2006, 08:38 AM
nice sketch dude


03 March 2006, 11:04 AM
If you do decide to give the boat a passenger, perhaps they could be looking concerned at the 'rapids' ahead!. Nice to see you Blaz. I'll come and see your thread again - once you've taken off your xmas hat :)

03 March 2006, 02:15 PM
Hi, Blaz! Looking good! I like the concept: It's original, and having been a little boy once I can totally relate! :) And I don't think you need anyone/thing on the boat: It's making its own voyage. If you're still concepting, it would be nice to see more ways to show that the boys just released the boat: Hands spread apart? Waving goodbye? Dusting the mud off of the hands? Just to show that they're not just innocent bystanders who happen to be watching this pass by...

Anyhow, good luck with it!


03 March 2006, 02:41 PM
Very nice concept! Can't wait for the coloring wip!
[OT] Maybe 'cause I knew I'm going to become an aunt for the first time,
I love a bit more everything about kids! :D :D [OT]
Cheers! :beer:

03 March 2006, 05:29 PM
bro that seems so lovely :) .i'm really looking forward to see updates...:thumbsup:

03 March 2006, 12:02 PM
nice idea!
nice scetch!

03 March 2006, 12:15 PM
Hey Blaz, nice to see alot of familiar faces again. :thumbsup: sweet sketch dude.

03 March 2006, 09:54 PM
excelent concept, i love it! :love:

03 March 2006, 11:43 AM
hello again.
love your characters, can't wait to see some colour.

03 March 2006, 01:48 PM
this is such a cute lineart!! i cant wait for more!! keep up the good work!!:D

03 March 2006, 04:30 PM
Many thnx to all of u guys/girls who r following this thread. Its been a really busy time for me till now, so Im sorry I wasnt there at ur threads yet.. will do that just now :) And then, after I'll be feeling much better to do so, I'll come back to mine thread and post some replies and new sketches. thnx so far!

03 March 2006, 05:44 PM
very very cute sketch, lovely! glad i found you too now, best of luck and of course lotsa fun mate, ant wait to see ya paint another kick ass piece :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

03 March 2006, 05:46 PM
Don't worry blaz, just keep the work coming, when u can! We'll be waiting!:thumbsup:

03 March 2006, 12:00 AM
Very cute concept & sketch:)
best of luck to you!!:thumbsup:

03 March 2006, 01:04 AM
Hey man, nice to see you again!;) Iīll be watching to your progress hehe I like your first idea, good luck Blaz!


03 March 2006, 03:54 PM
hey man.. i seem to have missed your sketch... anyways i found it now. this challenge should be interesting... and your sketch is very cool. :bounce:

03 March 2006, 06:56 PM
WOOHOO, finally got a chance to get a look at your thread :bounce:
Nice sketch. Very cool characters mate. I really dig them and the idea behind it :thumbsup:

be back again. cant wait to see what comes up next.

03 March 2006, 02:29 AM
The basic concept is excellent, can't wait to see more! Have no doubt that the final product will make history again:thumbsup:

03 March 2006, 03:48 PM (

my new concept about a flea going to a sea side for a holidays, hitchhiking a dog :) and sorry for not stoping by for such a long time here or in ur threads.. its been a really busy time :/

best regards!

03 March 2006, 03:50 PM
haha, what a cute concept

only crit is that i would really like to see the flea's face, because he could be such a great character

03 March 2006, 05:56 PM
mwahahah!The dog is coool!!:D Perhaps Iīd increase the angle and size of the main flea but itīs an excellent idea Blaz =)


03 March 2006, 06:06 PM
priceless :scream: ! hahaha, love the sketch!

03 March 2006, 08:39 AM
Yep, Nice idea Blaz, It will be interesting to see this get taken to final!:thumbsup:

03 March 2006, 01:06 PM
i agree this is a little gem you have going here...very original :)
love forced perspective :) looking really cool :)

03 March 2006, 02:11 PM
Has really made laugh:) it is class! - continue!!
At first has not seen that it is a flea...
Any bug thought
hitchhiking a dog :)!:bounce:

04 April 2006, 10:04 AM
hi blaz....long time no talk......just saw you've joind the challenge and came to see what you've done... :-)
very nice scetches..the DOG one is soooo funny and soo clever....good idea....hope to see more of you ....keep uploading:thumbsup:

04 April 2006, 10:11 AM
Excellent idea Blaz :thumbsup:

Perspective is great and the look on the dog is priceless.
I think that this also show the large proportions of the landscape and dog against small bug which is the whole point of the challenge..

Good luck keep it up :)

04 April 2006, 01:19 PM
so....long time no
just dropping in to check the progress :)

i still vote for the dog :)

looking forward to more....

04 April 2006, 07:02 PM (

This is my next step... for now Im sticking to the hitchhiking concept, so here is a start to develop a characters.. a dog, a flea, and a fleas pet. Replies to u great ppl that r sticking at my thread, r coming very soon! Thnx so far!

04 April 2006, 07:40 PM
It's such a funny dog!! :applause: And I like that flea to, it looks alot more like a flea now :thumbsup: Can't wait to see more!

04 April 2006, 09:01 PM
in your line art, (which is just awesome) , the flea looks really sweet, kind of like a flea with an evil temper , or something . real nice shading as well !

04 April 2006, 09:23 PM
What a beautiful line! And what a funny flea! Congratulations, you hit the spot with this one.
I want to see colours.

04 April 2006, 10:07 PM
Great sketch Blaz

Love the flea character- really unusual idea and love the latest developments.

keep up the great work :)

04 April 2006, 10:33 PM
gigantron2999: the crit about the fleas face being seen has been granted :) I'll change a bit its position, so the flea will be rotated to the viewer. thnx for a suggestion!

GonzaloGolpe: thnx buddy! I'll see what I'll do with the size of the flea in the final composition. I'll have in mind to bigger its size.

Cyberone: thank u :) I'll try keep it up!

LexLe: Im working on that flea to be more recognazible.. I hope that the latest concept looks better? thnx for stopping by mate!

kmest: thank u for such a warm welcome! I'll most probably stay with that dog concept, coz it seems everybody likes it :)

Falcor_: thnx buddy! Is the dogs face still ok now that its more caroon like? I hope I didnt loose that expression u mentioned it?

hexrex: thnx! Im quite satisfied with the flea concwpt as well.. kind of says what I wanted it to say.. it was a hard job though.

Nigio: Im most happy that u like it :) thnx!

MrFreeman: hi buddy! thnx for the support!

TheFirstAngel, beelow, elgrozni: and thnx very much for ur kind words as well.. they mean a lot to me :) stay in touch!

04 April 2006, 11:01 PM
Great sketch, Blaz. That face is wonderful. The body still feels imaciated to me, lacking muscles... Kind of like a real head stuck on a stick-figure body. I guess the blood-sucking fleas have taken this particular ride before! :D

Good luck with it!


04 April 2006, 11:53 PM
crazy amazing work Blaz!! funny and impressive!!:twisted: :bounce: congrats!

04 April 2006, 05:32 AM
Concept has very much liked, it is visible character of the character-dog :)
Drawing at the big level.. I Look forward to continuation! :thumbsup:
I still in searches of idea :sad:

04 April 2006, 03:50 PM
Now that you made the dog cartoony and eyes different sizes it feels crazier :) Works fine though. Its up to you if you want to use more realistic dog from the previous one or this one.

Realism |or| Cartoony take your pick :thumbsup:

04 April 2006, 08:00 PM
:) Super dog ,such unique but such homely. Also with temperament :)
Amazing scetch ! :)

04 April 2006, 11:01 AM (

A new lineart, this time for a Flea and its Pet in the pose that will probably be in the finnal composition. This way the face is seen, so its more personal and we can see emotions of the main characters.

04 April 2006, 11:02 AM
ahahahha! 1 word "awesome"

04 April 2006, 08:07 PM
Wicked man!!! Just bloddy wicked :thumbsup: Great style as well :D

04 April 2006, 10:27 PM
I really like the color temperature in this one, the flea-pet ( :D ) and I must :applause: your great sketching style. I wish I could sketch like that!


04 April 2006, 12:12 PM
What's up dude!! Nice stuff so far! :arteest:

04 April 2006, 11:43 AM
very cool your idea of the fleaīs holiday!! good humoured and great style up to now! good luck!:thumbsup:

04 April 2006, 03:54 PM
Wow Blaz, how'd I miss your thread?? What a fantastic idea, and very well executed... i love the perspective on the dog. And oh my, that flea's pet is just beyond adorable... amazing how cute a blob with feelers and two diddy eyes can be! Gorgeous stuff all round, can't wait to see it in progress!

04 April 2006, 01:25 AM
Hello Blaz,

Funny good sketch the little pet. Well I haven't see you from a long time and I'm going to crit !! Damn.. I think you are too close of the banner of this challenge with this last one, no ?

04 April 2006, 09:01 AM
hello Blaz!
Very good sketch!:thumbsup:
Character of a flea is transferred very well! :)
Very much it is pleasant to me.... wait impatience Lineart
Yours faithfully LexLe

04 April 2006, 02:32 PM
ooops ! I haven't see all your sketches, only the last one, damn me, shame on me, damn damn ..sorry blaz.

Well now I have to say you've got a great concept, and very good sketches, the camera focus is very interesting, go on friend ;)

04 April 2006, 06:40 PM
Very good idea! Very cheerfully! Bravo!
And sketches are magnificent!

04 April 2006, 09:07 PM
Hi there, buddy,

Needless to say, I like your basic concept and the character development. Wish you luck (I doubt you'd need it, though, as the illustration is obviously going to end up great). I'll be back later - maybe with a more useful comment or two.

04 April 2006, 07:53 PM
error post.. sorry

04 April 2006, 07:55 PM (

I posted same pic as before by mistake :/ this time is the right update..

I didnt update my thread for a long long time now. I wasnt replying to ur threads neither, for which Im very sorry and I hope I'll be fully back in game soon. This is an update I did in last couple of hours.. A black and white tone scheme, to make sure everything will work fine in the pic. And some element changes in the composition (bigger flea and its little pet in the first plan, a bit different dogs head position, and a traffic behind the dog for some action and dynamic). More to come soon. Best regards to everyone!

04 April 2006, 10:36 PM (

the flea and its pet r finished as well.. and now im going to search for some mistakes to correct before i go to the real color stage. good night ppl :)

04 April 2006, 07:02 AM
Really nice perspective! Nice tones aswell, good luck! :thumbsup:

04 April 2006, 10:06 AM
Very nice concept and realisation, good pic, i wait the next update:thumbsup:

04 April 2006, 10:59 AM
cool! keep it up!:thumbsup:

04 April 2006, 12:22 PM (

first color scheme test.. I also put some new elements in the pic (mountains, smoke...) but I have that strange feeling that something is still missing.. thnx for all the comments folx! :)

04 April 2006, 12:47 PM
Nice work Blaz,
Funny concept, well drawn and I really like the scewed perspective.
You might need to balance the composition a bit though. Itīs very empty in the top half, left of the dog. You just need something to break off that big bright area.
Great work this far, good luck!

04 April 2006, 12:53 PM
Norberg: u r right. Im thinking now about adding some clouds there (maybe just more interesting clouds), a plane maybe (right now its just a line that plane left), some leafs that were blown up by the wind that rushing cars r making.. thnx for pointing that out :)

04 April 2006, 02:42 PM
Hey dude, maybe a forest on the left could do the job :cool:

04 April 2006, 03:15 PM
Hi there Ninja!

Really nice perspective and excellent idea!!ha,ha

yehh,or maybe some kind of little roadhotel for this kind of insects(dont know their name in english)on the left(the motel he just has left) could be fun to fill up the halftop left...

Sunflowers,for some color or a picknick table like you see sometimes along the road,...

04 April 2006, 03:30 PM
Wahahaha, I love this! The dog looks so clueless yet adorable! Very good job on that! By the way, I agree with the others that the top of the bug looks empty and needs some suitable filling. How about a dustbin full to the brim with rubbish? In the far distance, some suburban houses? A plane and love birds flying overhead? The fish eye perspective is a nice touch. Is the passing vehicle (in motion blur) a lorry?

The highlights at the underside of the Bug, I think it shouldn't be there because the sun is at the top not directly in front of it..

Keep it up, Blaz and looking forward to your next update!

04 April 2006, 05:58 PM
Fast progress, man! :thumbsup: I like the motion-bloured cars - they realy emphasize the feeling of being trapped in a moment. Agree with others - add something in the top left... what do you say about a storm clouds... ?


04 April 2006, 06:24 PM
I love this :) Keep it up man. No crits, except for what's been mentioned by Norberg.

04 April 2006, 06:54 PM
awesome man! i love the dogs expression so far =) looks grea,t totally your style too. if you think something is missing, id say behind the bug it seems a little empty, why not add like a little "bug bus stop" or some little buildings in the back,. more mountians etc?

but anyways, awesome!

04 April 2006, 03:24 PM
taz23: thnx for suggestion.. But I dont wanna to fill that space too much. Trees in the back as some dark silhuette could destroy some of details in the front. I guess.

OKMER: nice idea with sunflowers.. they r thin but tall.. I'll have that in mind :) thnx!

jeromoo: its not a lorry, but its not defined what it is yet also. There will be some cars with luggage boxes on their roofs. But they will stay blury as they r now, coz they r not so much impoortant for the whole image.. just to give an impression of a rush hour. planes and birds will probably appear in the image yes, dustbin or even dustbin bag is a great idea as well. I'll see what fits best into that place. And thnx for pointing out about the light under the bug... its just that looks so fine :D thnx for stopping by!

elgrozni: yea, the time is coming to an end, so I better be fast :) I dont wanna paint storm clouds, even if they would be a good element to fill the sky with, but this is a trip to the sea, so it must be sunny weather. thnx for poping into my thread again!

ahbeejieh: thnx man! :)

adonihs: that blue dog sign behind the flea is a bug station sign :) I was thinking about all that.. buildings, mountains, but everything fills too much that space and make it hard to read, so I'll put there something for sure, Im just not so sure what will that be. But I have some ideas. Thnx for stopping by!

Some ideas to put behind the bug, to fill that space:

trash bag:

04 April 2006, 04:38 PM
Very good painting, the angle of vision is terrible, good work

04 April 2006, 06:23 PM
I think I figured out what might be your problem- the dog, when you look at him, appears to be the subject of a fisheye lens, which is great and fine in itself, but when you look at the rest of the landscape, parts are in fisheye and parts aren't distorted, so the whole thing is sort of thrown off....if you get my meaning?

Great colors though! :thumbsup:

04 April 2006, 06:39 PM
ooo dude some flowers would look nice! try that man, maybe even if theyre not fully engrossed by us, but it does add some nature elements to it, none the less a kick asss image!

05 May 2006, 07:36 PM
A really unexpected style from your part. At least one that I wouldn't expect!

Can't really bring up any idea at this moment for your BG fill-up...

But as I saw your subject... I thought you may have some use with these (If nothing as for influences for his little pet :) );

You can find much more of this kind of material on a fantastic site dedicated to
=>LINK (
(Even has an English version! )
For this particular specimen you would have to browse through to the Sphonapetra which is under Insects that you should be able to find under Zoology.
I thought that with the scale you are looking at things... these can influence some aditional ideas.

The whole composition is VERY cute!

Good Luck!


05 May 2006, 08:50 PM
It looks really nice, I look forward to the next step. Good luck.

05 May 2006, 10:12 PM
I like this concept a lot ! Very funny and the style is great. Go on in this way !

05 May 2006, 08:58 AM
wow... nice coloring... you're progressing fast :)

I think telegraph poles would fill the emptyness on the left just fine!
keep it up :thumbsup:

05 May 2006, 09:26 AM
Hi Blaz, this is look fab! I love your colour choices so far, the sky and the left hand side of the image look touchably real, and the hitch hiker is adorable! It's kinda hard to tell whats going on on the right behind the dog right now, but I'm guessing it will be streams of traffic!

The dog is coming together nicely, though, even for the distorted fish eye lens effect, his back legs make him look like he's about to topple over. Just shifting the back right leg (as we look) might help stabilise him. But he's fantasticaly well done, I admire the fact you've got to grips with the camera distortion so well and still having him recognisable as a dog, and one that's full of character at that.

Can't wait to see how this progresses!

05 May 2006, 03:34 PM
this is looking great. Is that a head from another bug in the bottom left? Maybe it to too close the the edge of the composition? Looks a bit cut off. anyway, other than that tiny nit pick, this is brilliant. Good luck

05 May 2006, 06:54 PM
Cool concept and character!

05 May 2006, 05:39 AM
Hey Blaz very fun image! Love the perspective. Looking forward to seeing more. Good luck!

05 May 2006, 05:43 PM
whoaaaaa this looks great!! wee nice work!!

05 May 2006, 07:25 AM
Beautiful idea and picture ;) . It pleases me very much.
Flea on the way :)), cool.

Good luck.

05 May 2006, 10:15 AM
Great work! Winning stuff :) Flea power!

05 May 2006, 10:36 AM
I'd suggest to adjust the look of the sky elements as they don't follow the fish-eye look and feel of the other elements of the scene. Take a look at some fish-eye photographs featuring large areas of partly cloudy sky: you'd probably notice that sun appears as a tiny point or even just a star-shaped flare with slightly curved longer rays, instead of a large circle/globe - and the clouds are usually sharp and well defined (as opposed to using a normal or a telephoto lens). I know you're not aiming at some ultra-high-photorealism here - but the skies as they are now are partly ruining the otherwise excellent fish-eye effect.

Also, a much darker blue tone of the high skies, with much more contrast between the sky and the white clouds might add to the "fish-eye" feeling and would definitily increase the dramatic sensation in an observer.

Can't wait to see the next step(s).

05 May 2006, 07:17 PM
maybe the main character could be a little closer to the camera - so he's a bit more prommenant in the composition ?

other than that absolutely wicked! excellent characters and theme.


05 May 2006, 11:51 PM

First of all, once again thnx a lot for all ur great comments and critiques. Some of suggestions u pointed out would really help! But Im not sure anymore if I can finish this piece in time :/ Im really short on time, I have to finish the school and all the other payed projects, so Im just not sure anymore how to continuing here. I think I still have a week or so of work on the image and thats a lot comparing the time I have left till the deadline. Ok, enough of whining... I wish to all of u good time and lots of luck and great final images. If I dont make it in time, I'll finish it later than and submit it to the finished image gallery.

Best regards,

05 May 2006, 11:43 PM
hey blaz to redeem myself from the inevitable title of being the worst visitor of all time i decided to stop by and check out your thread fully. nothing to crit but to let you know that you should finish. soon :wip:.

05 May 2006, 05:34 AM
coool!!! now the poor dog is already scared good concept man

06 June 2006, 10:50 PM
had to drop in and say good luck.

as always, loving your work,
see you on the next one !


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