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02-28-2006, 02:01 PM
Brian Wong is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: angle sketch (

03-15-2006, 02:37 PM (

did a couple pages of thumbnails.. i sort of liked the funeral idea... sort of a journey into whatever happens after you die... maybe a group funeral? morbid? maybe?.. I don't know

03-15-2006, 02:39 PM (

forgot to mention in the other thread that i was also playing around with some ideas about a character going off to war.. maybe leaving his family behind.. and the scene is the sending off party. some more thumbnails about that, in this one as well.

03-15-2006, 02:46 PM (

Had a friend look at the thumbnails.. (alexi chabane) seemed to like the funeral thing.. scribbled a quick suggested viewing angle for me and i tried dropping some paint and value into it.. i guess the ship in the bg.. is like.. a funeral ship or something?

03-15-2006, 03:55 PM
I like the concept and I like the composition. Nice work.
The only thing that confuses me is why the entire thing is tilting down on the right... the platform, the ship itself.... It is just a funny cropping? The platform I could buy as tilted, but that ship has a stabilizer down or something like that! :)

I think it would lend to the serenity and gravity (ha ha!) of the piece to have it more horizontal. Good luck with it!


03-24-2006, 01:20 AM
like the atmostsphere a lot. Whats going to be the forground character?

i love the ship.


04-16-2006, 10:22 PM
hey, nice!

looking forward to seeing more

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