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02 February 2006, 02:01 PM
Brian Wong is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: angle sketch (

03 March 2006, 02:37 PM (

did a couple pages of thumbnails.. i sort of liked the funeral idea... sort of a journey into whatever happens after you die... maybe a group funeral? morbid? maybe?.. I don't know

03 March 2006, 02:39 PM (

forgot to mention in the other thread that i was also playing around with some ideas about a character going off to war.. maybe leaving his family behind.. and the scene is the sending off party. some more thumbnails about that, in this one as well.

03 March 2006, 02:46 PM (

Had a friend look at the thumbnails.. (alexi chabane) seemed to like the funeral thing.. scribbled a quick suggested viewing angle for me and i tried dropping some paint and value into it.. i guess the ship in the bg.. is like.. a funeral ship or something?

03 March 2006, 03:55 PM
I like the concept and I like the composition. Nice work.
The only thing that confuses me is why the entire thing is tilting down on the right... the platform, the ship itself.... It is just a funny cropping? The platform I could buy as tilted, but that ship has a stabilizer down or something like that! :)

I think it would lend to the serenity and gravity (ha ha!) of the piece to have it more horizontal. Good luck with it!


03 March 2006, 01:20 AM
like the atmostsphere a lot. Whats going to be the forground character?

i love the ship.


04 April 2006, 10:22 PM
hey, nice!

looking forward to seeing more

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