View Full Version : First post, would like some critique please!

02 February 2006, 11:35 PM
Hi all... I'm currently a junior in School of Visual Arts computer art department. I haven't painted much (as in... one oil painting during high school, that was my highlight back then) but lately I was encouraged by an instructor to try to paint me. I dropped a humanity class and enrolled in the digital matte painting class. This is the first assignment I handed in, I am looking for ways to improve it, any input is appreciated!

02 February 2006, 03:07 AM
I've got to say I quite like it. the blue is a bit too bright for my taste, the green clouds are lovely. The forground lava is rally nice, I'd drop the intensity of the red pillars down a bit to somewher halfway between the foreground and how they are now. Actually make them so they look like they are extrusions of the lava rather than flames.

my two cents. Definitely keep going !


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