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veiled, I show you on what I bump in this moment... please comment :rolleyes: :D
03-02-2002, 07:46 PM
Please Roro, change this nose, PLZ !!!
I don' t like it, it' s not realist :(
But it's a good beginning for your head, i like the style of the head in general. Make care of your eyes and lips...
And, behind your head, it seems to be a plane, make it a bit incurvated ;)
I wait your update with changes :D
See you soon
03-02-2002, 07:54 PM
Yeah, Cédric is right: change the nose !
It looks like one of those heads, i´ve made after failed to model a human head ;)
Maybe make the nose the same way you did the ears... just two holes and some wrinkles around (skull-like)
Good work on teeth !
which is the version which you like more?
03-02-2002, 11:23 PM
The second one :D But don't forget to work more:) héhé
advance :rolleyes: :rolleyes:
03-08-2002, 12:37 AM
aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, he is so space :) mouhahahaha... But I think the head is too much rectabgulary!
Il a vraiment l air décharné ton perso, si tu veux faire peur, continues ...
03-08-2002, 01:59 AM
hm well ya know there's alot to say about your model, the problem is that you might have wanted to create exactly this... as it's unusual
otherwise... the head seems too boxlike, the seams on his forehead are a bit disturbing, well, and his nipples are strange :D :D
good work man, keep it up!
03-08-2002, 04:15 AM
if they to be muscles on his stomach, they ought to have volume and bulge out imo.
but keep it up, cheers :-)
03-08-2002, 01:40 PM
im amazed that this wip piece has aquired 4 stars i really am mystified.there is so much that needs to be done.i would like to see a concept sketch of the character if possible maybe than i could understand why all modeling does and donts have been thrown to the wind.
03-08-2002, 02:54 PM
Urmm, yeah at the risk of sounding nasty, I have to wonder along with Suethsayer as to how this post aquired 4 stars? There are so many errors in this model (which have been pointed out above - the nipples I think bother me the most).
But 4 stars should be kept for posts like that brilliant goblin (well, thats more like 5 stars) a while back.
RoRo, your model is off to a start, but needs a lot of work!
for a sketch, I do not know not drawn!!! I have all in the head even if if certain things were made without basic ideas...
I want that my monster is original, I does not want that it is concrete (head, muscles,proportions) ...
I puts to you nevertheless the advance of my monster, it will be can my last reply because I do not want to make me here of enemy!
scuse my english but i'm french
03-09-2002, 12:48 AM
how did you manage to make such brilliant looking hands, while having the rest of him look like a box?
03-09-2002, 08:46 AM
great hands..... but
03-09-2002, 02:20 PM
Ahhh! Buy an anatomy book!
chlywly > I worked 8 hours on the hands... while following this tutorial a little: ( http://3dvf.com/tutoriaux/lightwave/model/humain_subdiv/page5.php3 )
skunk184 > but...
Cgkoko > it is a monster, I base itself a little on the anatomy of human but I does not want to follow it perfectly
03-09-2002, 08:46 PM
but....i dont wanna rip your work to pieces but it just looks odd to me....sorry RoRo , no offence intended!
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