View Full Version : 'greener pastures' 2 min cgi

02 February 2006, 10:26 AM
alo alo ,

this be me cartoon all be it 2 minutes and eight seconds long.
it be a fanciful tale concerning the lives of sheep i hope it is enjoyed.

hope it works,


so long me harties

ari panzer

02 February 2006, 08:15 AM
cool. I'll try to start this off politically correctly, and against any obvious "observations"... I like most of the animation. A lot of it is too fluid, flowy, and slow. It's a good story, so you have that to your advantage. I can say I didn't care for the render style, and perhaps you should study lighting techniques. The facial expressions in the sheep were great though, and you did a good job keeping all the motion together. I especially enjoyed the slow motion thing, and although slow, the way the sheep climbed over the fence. Anyways, look into better styles of lighting, because it was rather bland. Good job though. ***/*****

02 February 2006, 10:57 AM
Hey man,
Good to see your posting your work. Be good to see more of what youve done so far this year. If you got time come enter some of the animation comps at Simply CG. See ya round.

02 February 2006, 11:44 PM
hey m0o g0o,

thanks for your reply,

yeah i have a long way to go in all aspects of cgi but it's a steady road to improvement from here.

03 March 2006, 12:23 AM

poor little greener pastures no one cares

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