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12 December 2002, 04:45 AM
Hello, this is my first post in this forum.

This is my first art from my "dark series", so I hope you like it.
any comments are welcome.


12 December 2002, 06:14 AM
Looks great dude. My only crit would be about the environment fog. Maybe make it more uniform? it looks too 'cloudy'. If it were a light haze instead of thick smoke, this scene would get 5 stars from me:) instead, i give it 4.9 heh:cool:

12 December 2002, 01:32 AM
Tex, thanks for good comments:thumbsup:

but i can't believe , that from 212 viewings whole 1 commentary

Helloo????? anybody?????

12 December 2002, 01:56 AM
ok, maybe this will be better

make art in: 3dsmax, final render and videopost.

12 December 2002, 01:57 AM
Very Very Very creepy image! In a good way.
I love the atomsphere you've created.

You should animate this scene... with lots of wispering sound fx.
Would scare the sh*t outta me if that were my POV.


12 December 2002, 07:39 AM
awesome! I really like what you did to this. And yes it IS pretty creepy lol. Really sweet tho. keep up the great work!

I'm looking forward to the rest of your dark series! hurry up already heh!:D

12 December 2002, 09:26 AM
thank you guys for comments

i want to do animation and insert into my demoreel.
(thanks for idea DivideByZero)

12 December 2002, 04:24 PM
I love it. I am a bit dark myself...

12 December 2002, 04:52 PM
:twisted: very cool:thumbsup:

12 December 2002, 06:13 AM
Hey Igor, I like the contrast between the sun rays and the dark room very much :thumbsup:

But I personally prefer your last rendering where there was a person on the stage, facing the rest of the people. That way, the scene tells more story.

But the problem was, the 'preacher' was not visible enough, if only you can fix the lighting a bit more, I think it's going to be better :)

Keep up the good work, I'm waiting for your next post! :wavey:

12 December 2002, 01:43 AM
hi mawashi, welcome aboard:cool:

thanks for your words
ok, I will think about it. Maybe you right.

I'll try do my best

12 December 2002, 02:09 AM
You have a good sense of photography and composition. I dig it.

12 December 2002, 02:23 AM
Its jsut a little dark for me thats all, but thats what the the scene is supposed to convay.

12 December 2002, 03:37 AM
Creepy.But looks good. A little more light I think would be better. Plus a center piece to focus on. But still a good shot.:)

12 December 2002, 01:52 AM
something change, like volume light, and some highlights.

what you think?

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