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11-29-2002, 09:32 AM

11-29-2002, 06:19 PM
Wow awesome modeling job, you just owned the car i've been working on. The only thing i would change is the 'speckle' or the dots all over the car. I don't know if thats a photoshop filter after the render or what. I think you might be able to pull of the speckler if you only did it on the body and not on the windows. I"m not sure.. Anyway, great car!

11-29-2002, 08:59 PM
very very cool:buttrock: but it's too noise...rendering again!

11-29-2002, 09:58 PM
the door handles are a bit erm... flat!
the wheels need more detail, i.e. some way of attaching

11-29-2002, 10:15 PM
Your car is really different from the original one but it's cool too! :thumbsup: less grain please :p

11-29-2002, 11:08 PM
I think he used brazil car paint, so thats why it has some noise from the flakes.

11-29-2002, 11:19 PM
by looking at the second picture, it looks like someone kicked in the door sill.. seems to be dented in a bit..

the rest is pretty nice.. the doorhandles are a bit 2d... but it shouldn't be too hard to fix those...

nice twist to the original car... would also suggest lowering the noise level to get a more clearer picture.

11-30-2002, 12:14 AM
veery nice! :bounce:
but like the others said, a bit too heavy on the grain...

11-30-2002, 06:44 AM
Looks like someone sandblasted the whole thing and put little pits in the glass and the paintjob. And i agree with the handles being to flat.

11-30-2002, 02:24 PM
Oh a Mercedes SLR!

But need more work....The kind of car surf. U tried to do is very hard!!!

Hmmm the door handle look like a 2d bump map :rolleyes: that realy the finish?

11-30-2002, 04:16 PM
Cool car again!
Mindphaser - cool guy:wavey: :thumbsup:

11-30-2002, 04:48 PM
Heh guess I am the only one who likes the grain. Sweet model.

11-30-2002, 07:27 PM
too noise but i love the tuype of render exept the noise
great work

12-01-2002, 12:49 AM
I nether saw, nor heard asnything about this Mercedes SLR before and so I asked mister Google for some pictures.
I must say, that you did a great modeling job! Your model indeed looks like it should look. (Even if I personally don't like the front -it's rather untypical for Mercedes :rolleyes: )
And for those who didn't like the handles:
It doesn't have any! :surprised Do not ask how to get into this car :D

Here's a link with lots of pictures of the SLR:

Keep rocking! Great work! :airguitar


12-01-2002, 12:57 AM
...sure there are handles!
They look like the one U have on a Fiat Barcheta (if somebody know it ;) )

The "real version" looks longer...or not that high!?
That concept is now... around 4years old?! I have it in any car mag ;)

The side View of MindPhaser's Car looks like a Panoz :rolleyes:

Regards, Daniel

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