View Full Version : Need crit for a pencil portrait

12 December 2005, 11:11 PM
Hi everyone,

this is actually my first post in the 2d section :arteest:
I put the mouse away and picked up some good ol' pencils
to start practising more drawing again.

Well, it took pretty long due to lack of practice but now i've looked at it for too long.
So please take a fresh look, your input is very much appreciated.

Thank you!

12 December 2005, 12:02 AM
Hey, this is very nice and beautiful. I think her nostril need a bit of work though.
Who is she?

12 December 2005, 11:02 AM
i saw her in an ad, but she looks a little bit more contempt on the original,
on the drawing she looks more suffering, but i like that expression on the drawing.

thanks for the tip concerning the nostril.
i also figured out the lips are a little bit asymetrical i'm going to correct it.

Any more ideas?
Thank you

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