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11 November 2005, 07:15 PM
Hi guys, This is a concept sketch that I'm going to try and paint. Hopefully, with your help I'll get there. (

11 November 2005, 07:18 PM
Starting to put the colours in.. (

11 November 2005, 07:21 PM
More colour (

11 November 2005, 07:25 PM
Little detail.... Lots more to be done.... Please do comment and tell me how to improve.... (

11 November 2005, 12:19 PM
Do comment on it you guys, I'm still learning!

11 November 2005, 12:33 PM
I like the Tornado :thumbsup: Good going ... I think you are good at this thing ... I think that one would be good piece after all colourings :)

11 November 2005, 01:11 PM
more colour (

11 November 2005, 03:35 PM
the subspirals and the details on the tornado do really look great already - but I must warn you. The better it gets, the more detail you have to put in to cope with the level you set yourself:scream:

One or two things though

- the colors of the grass as well as of the volcano are much too saturated. Considering the clouded sky the green schould be much paler (not lighter, but less saturation)

- the volcano schould be less saturated to indicate distance. Distant objects get less and less saturated and tend to blueish hues.

- compositionwise I would do without the volcano eruption. The Tornado is big and impressive, don't steal the viewer's attention with another much less impressive action in the background. Also, I mean, man... that's somehow too much, hope there's no dam nearby that's about to burst:D

so: am anxiously waiting! Let's see more!

12 December 2005, 12:01 PM
Mr. Moo thanks for the comments..
Here's a little update.. Some more detail... (

12 December 2005, 07:09 PM
What's happened - Did the tornado suck in the landscape?:scream:

Or are you reconsidering the composition in general?

Tornado: I think you will have to apply at least the same level of detail to the tihng as a whole as in the subtube on the left.

Also, you should figure out a clear form at the upper end. It looks to amorph, lacking a clear form...

12 December 2005, 09:56 PM
Thanks mr.moo. I'm very busy at the moment and trying to get another project finished. I will try to keep you guys updated as soon as do add something more to the composition.

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