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11 November 2005, 10:14 AM
Barack! yeah I know lame name :D couldn't think of anything!
anyhow here's my work in progress, I'm just about done with the basics of the head, going to add more detail and tweak as I go on.
any C&C would be much appreciated
11 November 2005, 10:25 AM
great work. You can barely tell a difference between the low and high poly.
Design wise I think it could use a little work. Its essentially a human face with a few extra bumps and an extended back of the skull. I think you could push it to a more alien face without too much extra effort. Even something cliche like a third eye would probably help make it a lot more interesting. My advice: go look at some pictures of animals and try to incorporate pieces of various species to make it look a little more alien.
11 November 2005, 10:41 AM
technically good, but design could be more interesting, very trekky at mo.
i reackon you should create some more surface detail by creating a bump in PS and converting to normal, perhaps a scaly skin or patterning.
11 November 2005, 11:54 AM
you got it man trekky :thumbsup: all input noted
tweaked some, trying to get the shape of the head right, also I shrunk his eye sockets dropped his jaw a bit and made his head more plate, I think he looked a bit dorkish before.
11 November 2005, 12:08 PM
yeah thats better i like the way the brows come to a point above the nose
11 November 2005, 12:46 PM
At first glance it look like a cross between a Cardassian and a Klingon.
Very nice model.
11 November 2005, 03:27 PM
He he . Nice design dude. Your normals are better and better. I have no crits at the moment other then that it looks superb.
U rocks dude ;)
Edit -> I take look a bit closer, and I have small suggestion. Maybe u will make some little horns on the top of the head. Will look more interesting in my opinion.
Take care mate.
11 November 2005, 07:37 PM
I really like the design...especially in regards to the profile...a very strong profile..it's just the details when I look at it in the 3/4 view as you posted it looks kinda lost...I don't quite understand the bulges/indentations on his head?...if they are part of the skull formation then I would suggest making them more significant...all the same...solid start man..:thumbsup:
11 November 2005, 01:03 PM
hmm, all good stuff here..
from what you guys are telling me and as I'm working with ZB more I know I can do better on this head, add way more detail and make it more interesting so I'm going for a re make ( at least on the high poly normal mapping mesh )
anyway update in a bit :thumbsup:
11 November 2005, 05:16 AM
well another update, this time around I slapped in way more detail
I must say I like the expression on the first one better :shrug: what should I do :argh:
11 November 2005, 07:26 AM
I'm having lots of fun with ZB, here's my latest update on Barack :twisted:
11 November 2005, 08:24 AM
i think he looks like bruce in the second last pic :D:D:D:D
11 November 2005, 08:24 AM
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