View Full Version : Spectacular 3D Entry: Ramtin Ahmadi

09 September 2005, 11:04 PM
sorry friends .really want to excuse .But I`m bussy with another job and can not continue the challeneg . I should cancel this term .So don`t wait for my proggress please .but I watching ur progress always . hope to see ur finished works . (Again excuse me) .

09 September 2005, 11:12 PM
this is a 3D sketch that I`ll use for my characters body conditions .

09 September 2005, 12:29 AM
Cool concept! like the effect, captured very nice.

09 September 2005, 12:30 AM
good luck, i really really like your idea and sketch

09 September 2005, 02:17 AM
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thanks alot .

09 September 2005, 02:21 AM (

the story is about two guys from old timeson playing chess .actually they are chess lover . both on badest cases , can`t leave their playing . two guys are sticking on just one play part since hundreds years ago .years pass years are gone .but they does`nt have any determine to continue theire game .
on the playing time two train on both side moves but can`t make confuse their mind .
I drawed this sketch with the color pencil .Its so simple and my characters will changes alot .but it can help me so much .

And I mdoeled this view at 1 hours for my characters figure .

09 September 2005, 02:30 AM
Interesting view. I likethe bullet fast trains moving. Looking very cool.

09 September 2005, 02:36 AM
ok thanks alot to my friends . So now I can go to start my character sketch drawing . :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 03:20 AM
that's an interesting concept, are the trains going at the same direction? I guess it wouldn't matter that much.

09 September 2005, 04:10 AM
Very Cool idea!:thumbsup: Im Realy liked!
I will be waching here
good luck for u!
c ya

09 September 2005, 10:05 AM
I dont choose the direction of train moving yet . But I just know that it`t not same .

Oh thanks lauro . I`m watching ur spectacular now .hope to see U more and good luck ....

09 September 2005, 10:18 AM
Cool idea. It would be cool if you could convey the look that the two guys have been playing chess for centuries at that same place. The Table is rotting and Trainstation and all the other things have been build around these two fellow during centuries. They are the only relics from the old times.

Well It's just some thoughts that I had when lookin' that concept and 3D sketch. Magnific...hmm..I mean Spectacular! :)

09 September 2005, 10:20 AM
heheee....i liked your idea...looks fun..Goodluck:thumbsup:

BTW you realized my Number of post???:p

09 September 2005, 10:34 AM
nice concept ... good luck:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 10:41 AM
really like this idea! nice thought, good luck to you!

09 September 2005, 11:56 AM
yes I agree with U , actually that is my reason too .
Thanks Alot to U my friends .

09 September 2005, 12:34 PM
Nice idea, I like the blur in the sketch, and nice 3D work too. :)

09 September 2005, 01:30 PM
wow! I felt the wind passing in my body. hehehe.

Nice Concept and illumination very good.

09 September 2005, 03:52 PM
I think about my characters model .what Do U think about caricature Style . Hah ?
and It is the first model of my spectacular part , hope to like it ...

09 September 2005, 03:56 PM
Great idea Ramtin_moom, and kind of funny too. Good luck.

09 September 2005, 03:57 PM
Ramtin karet khaily aliye....:thumbsup: Well Done

09 September 2005, 04:04 PM
Ok guys .I`d like to put out the any greet to us and lets go to start critique , ok ? what Do U think about this kind of comment ?

09 September 2005, 04:07 PM
man thats a speedy concept..:) . funny too heheh nice idea and like the stylized chess board !

09 September 2005, 07:06 PM (

I have done the chees board and mans .

09 September 2005, 07:32 PM
Nice work till now, keep working.. :)

09 September 2005, 09:07 PM
great design on the chess board.....

chera enghadr keifiate imaget paieen ...niazi nist ke enghadr keifiatesho biari paieen ! ! !

09 September 2005, 10:09 PM
Nice idea. I hope that none of trains would suck any of the players ;)

09 September 2005, 04:46 AM
Oh yes yasser
I was wrong . hope to take the better quallit for images next .

I agree with U .it can give the stronger effects .thanks for ur guide .

09 September 2005, 04:51 AM
cool concept! how did you render the chess-set and the train scene pre-viz stuff?

09 September 2005, 05:07 AM
I rendered the chees scene by "Mental ray" and my sketch drawed by color pencil on the paper and alittle editing in Adobe Photoshop (like any blur and assign some filters) and for take the motion blur effect I used the "Radial blure filter .

09 September 2005, 05:35 AM
WONDERFUL idea. Very good. I liked especially the ones with the pencil drawing and the basic 3D modeling.

09 September 2005, 07:17 AM
Hi,Buddy! nice 2see u on this challenge! nice concept! rock on!:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 08:09 AM
Hi Ramtin Your Idea And Sketch Is Nice .
I Hope You Luck In This Challenge.
your train in this sketch have very speed And This is Nice Idea For tow men
which those playing chess becuase chess is a game which will centralization.

09 September 2005, 10:28 AM
Nice idea and sketches as usual dear Ramtin:thumbsup:
I always like your art works.
Can't wait to see the last work.:bounce:

09 September 2005, 12:19 PM
thanks for ur greet .

Hi my friend and nice to see U again .

thanks my dear friend.

I like ur artwork too .( az mallezi vasamoon begoo ali :D )

09 September 2005, 01:30 PM
another cool idea here.:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
me love playing chess a lot.:bounce:
good luck

09 September 2005, 06:56 PM (

Oh yes , my dear frined "Mohsen Zaman daraie done the faces concept sketch .(like theire self emotions .A cool man on the left and the hot and sad man on the right )

09 September 2005, 07:54 PM
super-expressive faces!

09 September 2005, 09:22 PM
Woooow, Man I'm crazy with you,
Keep up, I want more & more as U can !

09 September 2005, 10:38 PM
love your idea man! the faces look very interesting too, but i can't think of anything to crit.

09 September 2005, 10:44 PM
Hey Ramtin,

Your color sketch is very nice, these chess players are in the "Zone" as they say. I also like the posture of the players . The Character faces look very cool, very different from each other . Look forward to more .

09 September 2005, 11:19 PM
Oh thanks for ur point .
bahman , I wish to see U in challenge too .Anyway goodluck ...
first thanks for ur comment and Viewpoint , But sorry , I dont understand U .anyway goodluck ...
ok , I`m so happy cuz of whatching ur point and ur greet to me .It just make me strong to do that faster .

09 September 2005, 11:42 PM
The images are looking very nice but I'm confused. The spectacular aspect of this image will be the fact that these two people are able to concentrate on their game despite the fact that the trains are going by? I don't know, maybe you can push that idea further. Maybe have it be raining as well? And maybe something or someone behind them doing something that would distract them even further? This would make their concentration more spectacular I think. If someone chooses to play chess in between two train tracks, they probably are very familiar with trains and wouldn't be distracted or in awe of seeing two at once per se. I don't know... Just some thoughts.

Great posing and sketching so far!

09 September 2005, 07:27 AM
i like it very Matrix:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 01:21 PM
yea U`r right .Cuz I did`nt expression my true cocept before . two guys are sticking on just one play part since hundreds years ago .years pass years are gone .but they does`nt have any determine to continue theire game .
thanks my frined .

09 September 2005, 08:13 PM
nice desgn ramtin....

rami call me tomarow at 1:30 pm i am at home ;)

09 September 2005, 10:05 PM
Nice sketch ...=)

09 September 2005, 02:11 AM (

I have done the table with chees board and it`s chees mans .hope U like it .

09 September 2005, 05:58 AM
i was always at the neer the bottem of the chess club.. lol.. but i love the poses you have for your people.. and the modeling and texturing so far is supurb

09 September 2005, 06:24 AM
Man, I loved the the faces, they are Very Expressives! I also liked the the chess boad and the textures.
And keep going with your great job:thumbsup:
c ya

09 September 2005, 08:53 AM
Absolutely top-notch models and textures here! But the best part is the first concept sketch, with the motion-blurry trains... that is one VERY effective image :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 09:00 AM
nice story and table :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 09:23 AM
Very nice models and textures but as james said.... the concept really really ruled...

09 September 2005, 09:41 AM
i realy like the expression of your char sketch. hope you can make this sketch alive in 3d... :thumbsup:
i will watch you :cool:

09 September 2005, 11:33 AM
this is a really original and spectacular idea !
The modeling progress is great!
Love the design of the table and chees board !
And cool texturing!
no critics so far sorry Good work :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 11:42 AM
Nice concept, Ramtin. I think the men playing chess could look very old and ragged/dirty, while the surroundings could be futuristic or just modern. Good luck, and nice table!

09 September 2005, 01:14 PM
Hey Ramtin,
The Chess table is looking excellent, the textures are superb. :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 03:43 PM
thanks and I agree with U about the characters poses .I think my skinlls on the allo of 3D parts job is character animation and poses .anyway thanks for ur comment .
I was roking on the table and its texturs for 3 days .thanks alot .
I`m alittle wory about the final image .hope to get somthing strong .
Maybe U`R right.
thanks .Yes I`m just thinking about final result .I really need ur help and helpfull comments .
U`R said work make me trong to keep my trying .thanks for U`R points and greets .
thanks .acctually that`s my determine too .goodluck ...
thank U , so let me see ur spectacular progress .goodluck ...

09 September 2005, 08:49 PM
Ok guys , now I`m working on my character face model .so wait for progress .
goodluck ...:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 08:57 PM
Original concept and amazing modeling so far! I'm really curious to see your characters.


09 September 2005, 10:54 PM
VERY Good textures, Old style ,
I like the way that u made it Old like.
Specialy Broken peace make it unmirrored.
I think it's a little specular that make it fresh.
I'll wait for your detailed faces.:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 07:34 AM
Well Ramtin... very good and original concept :thumbsup: I like the 2 guys drawing... lot of personality... surely a very good thread to follow... keep it up guy :bounce:

09 September 2005, 09:14 AM
Wow, great chess table and board Ramtin_moom, it almost invites me to play :) Good work.

09 September 2005, 12:47 PM
thanks bahman .I think it need alittle specular highlight to show its origial materila .
I put hard pain to take this texture .hope to see u more here bahamn :D :thumbsup:
thank U very much .yes I thinked alot of about idea to take spectacular thread .
so wait for more progrees .
I`m so happy cuz of listening this expressions from U .hehehe :scream:

09 September 2005, 01:33 PM
Great concept here! And you have some real nice textures going too I see, good job so far :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 02:39 PM
Thanks Alot "Gunilla" .:)

09 September 2005, 03:08 PM
Another good Work!
Best Wishes for your Challenge!:thumbsup:
i think i need time to take part in these kind of challeges:scream:

09 September 2005, 05:55 PM
nice ramtin
i c it know
the sketchs are fantastic
but the chess table looks like too classic
anyway i like it

09 September 2005, 08:14 PM
Amin mahpour
thanks so much . I with to see ur thread too soon .goodluck ...:thumbsup:
mamnoonam . vali khob fekr mikonam ke lazeme mizha ghadimi be nzar berese .chon oona taaloghi be in zaman nadaran .mer30 azizam .

09 September 2005, 10:26 PM
nice to see the cool and beautifull updates u have made to the chess boards. keep up the good work man!

09 September 2005, 11:22 PM
GRAET idea man .......... ANG GREAT WORK ................ GOOD LUCK MAN :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 12:15 AM
yes , so wait for character face .:D
samer salame
thank U .

09 September 2005, 09:48 AM
really like this concept ! waiting for the next picture !! :) very good idea !

good luck !!

09 September 2005, 10:21 AM
The chess table looks really nice and well made..what a texture ;)

09 September 2005, 01:41 PM
Monks & Yongkiat
thanks for Ur points .I`was alittle busy cuz of working onm another job .But It`s many hours that I started my character modeling again . anyway wait for progress . :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 07:05 PM
Wowww:Excellent progress!Ramtin:thumbsup:
Look forward to seeing other stages!

09 September 2005, 07:50 PM
Oh U made me happy by posting here .nice to see U again adel .start ur 3D spectacular soon again. goodluck ..

09 September 2005, 08:02 PM
Hey very cool idea taking one of the first things most people ever build in 3d and making it part of a very complex scene. I really like your concept so far.

09 September 2005, 08:06 PM
thanks .acctually the finla result is , my confuser mind too . I dont know . hehe :rolleyes:

09 September 2005, 08:34 PM
nice design.:thumbsup:
will wait to see next step.

09 September 2005, 08:36 PM
Your idea is looking cool Ramtin, Nice modeling and great texturing :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 08:54 PM
Just found your thread. Nice idea, and I like the table so far.

09 September 2005, 10:44 PM
thanks for ur point.
thanks so much .Also I think ur face is like mine . hehe

09 September 2005, 12:00 AM
I like the sense of adrenaline in the scene. Very cool idea. I really think the sketches of the character's heads are very imaginative. I'm very interested. Not only that, but the chess board is something I'd like to own. Keep this going! :applause:

09 September 2005, 05:21 AM
Nice concept dude:thumbsup: Very good progress on the table model
Keep up the good work dude waiting for updates:)

09 September 2005, 01:30 PM
se7enthchin & madshooter
thanks for ur helpfull points .:)

09 September 2005, 05:16 PM (

ok , I hve done alittle character head model on left og the scene .remember it`s not complete , so wait for more progress .

09 September 2005, 05:43 PM
I supposed there will be something original and I'm not disappointed. I like the style of your head :thumbsup: . Waiting for more.


09 September 2005, 06:01 PM
Very nice consept and so exiting keep going Ramtin I`ll follow your work.
Daset dorost.

09 September 2005, 08:49 PM
I think you've made it a challenge in itself to make a chess game
look spectacular.

So far your textures are helping and looking preety good.
Interesting the spline modelling.


09 September 2005, 08:57 PM
Hey Ramtin

The characters head model is looking nice:thumbsup: , look forward to the rest of it.

09 September 2005, 09:06 PM
I like the style of your head me too its gr8 ... and Suitable 4 this concept :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 10:01 PM
Great , concept so far, old men playin' chess that is so cool, LOL! I am really interested to see what you do next!:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 10:10 PM
U did it nice, Wahhh ! Nurbs Pathces are Scaring me.
Why didn't U choose Subdiv, I think It's better?
Anyway U know better than me to what to do on characters.
I will wait for next.:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 11:23 PM
great Ramtin_moom! It's very nice the technic that you use! :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 07:29 AM
Bahman , If I use subdivision surface , then I can`t use it on the mentalray rendrer .It`s a simple .

in the end I dont have any to say .just thank U very much . and thanks for ur helpfull Comments .goodluck ...:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 10:06 AM
very Cool head,buddy! eyes need so much attention! keep it up,mate:)

09 September 2005, 11:17 AM
Excellent concept, i really like those caricature sketches, looking forward to seeing more.

09 September 2005, 11:31 AM
Hey Mate, good to see your wip are coming along nicely, im always intreged how other people model... im a box modeller myself and i am mystified on how poeple model the way you do, but i can see it works for you. so keep it up man....:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 02:49 PM
sure it`s surface modeling curve in maya . But if U use 3D`s max , U can use the surface modifier and then convert the ur surfaces as poly and then attach them to theire self as a unit poly mesh . now U can strat ur mergeing ( weld or colleps ) . I think this method cand give U a strong model on minimum of project time .

09 September 2005, 03:04 PM
"Spectacular" story conseption.

09 September 2005, 05:09 PM
nice progress..good to see it forming in 3D:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 09:13 PM
thanks my friends . MY MATES . :D

09 September 2005, 04:21 PM
hi ramtin i waiting for other progress.:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 05:43 PM
hey man! cool style head! :) updates updates!:D

09 September 2005, 07:08 PM
nice skills in NURB modelling
the concept is cool
but the compose is a little wrong
think more about it
good luck

09 September 2005, 08:31 PM (

ok , so now I added some details . hope to like it

09 September 2005, 08:58 PM
nice details on ur character, Ramtin ...

i saw ur idea late .. but i realy like it .. :)

good luck my friend .. :applause:

09 September 2005, 09:05 PM
Very funny head that is! Original style, and the somewhat ornamental nature of the curves and so forth make it quite interesting. The sideview looks best IMHO.

09 September 2005, 09:42 PM
Wahhh Dude your my favorite GUY, I love u and your face!!

09 September 2005, 10:33 PM
Oh thanks alot my good friends . now I`m working on my character body .

09 September 2005, 01:49 AM
hey man,
thanks for the compliment! your concept and character are really cool! very interested to see this turn out! keep it up! :buttrock: :buttrock:

09 September 2005, 02:59 AM
:eek: I like the head
the details are very nice
waiting for the txture...

09 September 2005, 05:46 AM
I can't laughing... really good funny design... an incomparable face... you found a good way mate :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 09:02 AM
Fantastic style Ramtin... excellent work on that left character's head... I wonder what you'll do with the right one!

09 September 2005, 09:10 AM
Amazing job Ramtin, Head model looks very good. Very different and original
Keep up the good wrok dude:thumbsup: Waiting for more rocking updates:bounce: :bounce:

09 September 2005, 11:28 AM
great modelling, only suggestion is that he needs more of an upper eyelid. Keep it up :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 11:32 AM
Good luck man:)

09 September 2005, 01:22 PM
ur wellcome . sure I waanna folow ur work at future too .
yes , so wait for texture :D
thanks for ur helpfull comments
thans alot mate .
thanks , wait ...
I agree with , now I`m eorking on the eyelid .
Ahmad hosny
U tooo . :D

09 September 2005, 01:49 PM
Love the concept. The head you have modeled right now (no facial hair, large nose) I would make it a slightly bit more thinner, but that is just me.

09 September 2005, 02:59 PM
Zenithscope (
yes I agree with U .I edited the nose .:)

09 September 2005, 08:30 AM
your concept is very cool/
goodluck :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

09 September 2005, 02:01 PM
thanks alot , But I wanna know more about my progress also about my modeling !!:deal:

09 September 2005, 02:38 PM
Continue like this !! Concept is great and your style will rock !!!

Good luck:D

09 September 2005, 03:38 PM
Hey Ramtin,

The characters head is looking great, its got character:thumbsup: . To me the eyes seem a little too far apart but this is just a personal thought of mine, your character is cool.

09 September 2005, 11:59 PM
lovely meshing!!nice progress.....
keep it up man :)

09 September 2005, 02:26 AM
The excellent character!:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 03:58 AM
Hello Ramtin!
That's new character's very good modelling! Kepp going, I'm waiting for more!
c ya

09 September 2005, 12:10 PM
thank U very much mate . alot of greet for ur helpfull comments.goodluck ...

09 September 2005, 04:20 PM
Nice modelling, but one little crit. If these guys are chess players, their foreheads should be a bit higher. Or, the height of their foreheads is the reason why they play so long:) ?

Good luck.

09 September 2005, 05:38 PM
hey ramtin... your modeling is very cool ... good lock:thumbsup: :bounce:

09 September 2005, 08:27 PM
sur ur Idae is so cool . But I think theire higher is enough big :D maby u`r right .

09 September 2005, 09:15 PM
hi ramtin...when exactly are we going to see new picture?:rolleyes:

09 September 2005, 09:16 PM
Good work on the details! I still like this guy and now I'm curious to take a first look on his compagnion.:)


09 September 2005, 09:20 AM
oh pooya , wait alittle man , take it easy :D :rolleyes: :D

09 September 2005, 03:04 PM
Cool idea. It would be cool if you could convey the look that the two guys have been playing chess for centuries at that same place. The Table is rotting and Trainstation and all the other things have been build around these two fellow during centuries. They are the only relics from the old times.

I haven't read through all the crits, but I like ElFuego's thinking. The two chess players should also look like they've been there forever -- really long beards, fingernails, toenails, etc. Really unique concept, like the've been playing since the dawn of time. I think you could push the concept, though. Make it obvious that the train tracks were lain down AROUND the players. Having the players in very old style clothing and spectators in modern clothing would add to the effect.

Part of its being spectacular is that society allowed the game to continue rather than plowing through it. Very cool!

Good luck. :thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 08:54 AM
hi. nice consept.and cood luck......:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 09:22 AM
realy cool faces.:thumbsup:

09 September 2005, 08:26 PM
Hi Ramtin I`m Samoel-666 In Majidonline . See You

09 September 2005, 10:26 PM
I love those character design sketches! Youve made that guy into 3d pretty damn well. Looking good so far, and i like the idea too.


09 September 2005, 10:22 PM
thanks alot samoel_666
yes I rememder U , sure . nice to see U here , well come .

U surprized me by wqalking on my thread , U gave me a strong power to carry on .

10 October 2005, 07:49 PM
nice ramtin
go on

10 October 2005, 09:38 PM
hey dude,are you ever going to post another image or u are going to keep thanking?:) C'mon ramtin....we need more:thumbsup:

10 October 2005, 09:02 AM
Hey Ramtin,
You were so fast at updating.what happened!
Hope to see more good work of you.

10 October 2005, 03:58 PM
Sorry guys . I was doing another work . anyway now I comback ;)

10 October 2005, 10:18 AM
Yeah updates updates please:bounce: :bounce:

10 October 2005, 02:43 AM
Hullo there. Too bad I didn't come here sooner. I really dig the concept. It somehow reminded me of that german movie The Seventh Seal in which that crusader plays chess against The Death. This one brings back really good memories :cry:

Keep it up!

10 October 2005, 05:34 AM
Great progress so far!

10 October 2005, 11:50 AM
hi ramtin .

i see your concept . its realy spectacular . i wating for you to complete this . hurry up man .

good luck .:thumbsup:

10 October 2005, 06:48 AM
Greate Job!!! Intresting character!

10 October 2005, 07:58 AM
ramtin kojaieeeeeeeeeeee ! ! ! :sad:

10 October 2005, 08:18 PM
hey ramtin!

what going on with u?
what are u doing man?

10 October 2005, 02:29 AM
ramtin ???:rolleyes:

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