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08 August 2005, 07:51 AM
I inspired to make this scene from a game name called Monster Hunter and just use pencil... I need comments about it , Thanks :)

08 August 2005, 10:34 AM
I like the detail level - very impressive.

But the pose of the front character is a bit "out of balance" imo - the bending of the legs makes it seem like he is leaning/sitting but with no support behind him. The right arm seems too short, especially the upper arm which is also on "armor plate" shorter than the left arm.

It may be that some of this can be "fixed" simply during colouring by adding more depth.

Good work! Keep it up :thumbsup:

08 August 2005, 11:15 AM
Thanks for the comment Overchord , that would help me :)

08 August 2005, 11:46 AM
Np :)
Really looking forward to seeing progression on this one!
Are you planning to colour it as well?

08 August 2005, 12:49 PM
Thanks ... Actually no , I just plan a Pencil Artwork on it ... I will add some more monster victims , background and after that will add some more shading :)

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