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08 August 2005, 12:28 AM
hey y'all,

this is my first time post on this forum!! i thought i would share my latest piece. its slated for a homage of a comicbook called wondercity. this is just the ruff and i will eventually clean it up and color........ hopefully!!

08 August 2005, 12:43 AM
My eyes get strained if I try to look at this too long, but not because it's bad drawing. It's because of the compostition. It's real hard to distingusih what's part of what, and your eye doesn't just flow over it. I wish I had a good composition tutorial. Maybe someone else does.

08 August 2005, 12:46 AM
I think it's the zebra lines. :)

I fyou colour it wisely, not too bright on the zebra girl I bet it'll turn out great. Very ncie and consistent style.


08 August 2005, 12:24 PM
Yes I think the lion-ish girl in the front should be darker to get some contrast!

08 August 2005, 12:26 PM
Hi there!
Hmm I wonder why my last post didnīt show up here...
You should give the picture some contrast, so one knows whatīs in front and whatīs behind.
Additionally I would darken the lion-ish girl in front


09 September 2005, 09:48 PM
thanks Y'all!!!

here is the cleaned up version!! soon to be colored!!!

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