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10 October 2002, 04:40 PM
Model & render : 3dsmax4-5
Textures : PaintShopPro 7
Hope u'll love her ;)

10 October 2002, 04:56 PM
That is amazing work bro!! You really got into details on the face. I love the little wrinkles around the eyes. Great texturing job. If you can, post some of your wires and what you did in photoshop. I'd love to see your texturing. She is very attracctive so GREAT JOB. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

10 October 2002, 04:58 PM
only problem i see is no shadows on the hair. Try faking it or something but right now the hair dosn't seemed to be attached to the neck at the bottom right.

10 October 2002, 04:58 PM
how did you do the eye lashes, are they a textured plane with opacity?

Very nice work.....great job

she IS attractive;)

10 October 2002, 05:01 PM
great job on the model.. it's tough to hit the curves of a face just right, but you pulled it off. the only thing that i would say detracts from the image is her hair--if there any way to avoid the stringy-ness of the hair simulation? it almost looks as if her hair line starts at the peak of her head..

still, great work.

10 October 2002, 06:20 PM
I'm not sure what you used for the hair simulation, I'll assume shag because that seems to be the most popular one for Max.
You should make some more control splines for the hair so that it looks slightly more messy. Right now it is a little too well combed to be real. If you have trouble with shadows, there should be a way to turn the hair into a mesh, then it might behave better.
Very nice textures, modelling and everything.

Frank Dodd
10 October 2002, 08:20 PM
Thats a great looking image great texturing work in the skin and especially around the eyes and lips. In critisim the top of the skull possibly looks a little too large? Definatly the construction of the hair looks very stylised, perhaps it should be shiny as if gelled and lastly the fibre on the jumper looks a little flat.

Otherwise its a great looking image the model has great structure, nice one :wavey:

10 October 2002, 08:49 PM
looks great, amazing stuff, the modeling and textures are really good. one little thing, try to use a displacement map for the ripples on the sweater:applause:

10 October 2002, 02:16 AM
very cute ;)

10 October 2002, 07:40 AM
Good work.nice some wires...:thumbsup:

10 October 2002, 02:10 PM
It looks good... good face, but there are 2 problems...

1. the hair
2. the comp

Hope you don't mind me changing your work (if you want it down, then just say) but if you change the comp so you are focused on what is good and take away what is bad then it'll make the overall picture better. Also a few little tricks in PS to add some realisim. Its now on the edge of photo real. (my little brother walked pass the screen and asked who it was?)

-Matt :D

10 October 2002, 03:26 PM
Absolutely incredible!:buttrock: :eek:

The only part that looks odd to me are the hairs on her forehead- they're a bit too high up/ thinned-out (it looks as if she is going a little bald), and on her neck it looks like there is hair growing out the side of it.
Other than those small crits - it's beautiful :) :thumbsup:

10 October 2002, 12:49 AM
very nice looking girl! a little bit of post-processing as 'Harrad' mentioned could make her look even better though..

keep up the good work and take care
// fellah

10 October 2002, 01:55 AM
looks very nice

There are a few things that I notice:

1. The bump map seems a bit low-res or too strong in some areas (around the eyebrows, the nose a little bit)
2. The intersection between the cloth of the sweater and her neck could use a little bit of work.

Great work overall, not as if I could do any better.

10 October 2002, 09:26 AM
reiv, I love your work. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
is thoes hair made by fur plug-in?

10 October 2002, 10:22 AM
wow that is just amazing how did you learn to model so well?

10 October 2002, 10:23 AM
ohh i forgot to ask what methoud did you use to model?

10 October 2002, 11:43 AM
Wow thanks for all your comments !
You're right, there's something wrong with the hairs. I'll try t o do something for. I've used shag hair to make it.
I learn to model by myself, by doing a lot of mistakes and observing womans faces :rolleyes: .To model her i starded with a simple four sided poly and then apply an edit mesh modifier(lot of extrudes, cuts.....)

Once again thx for ur comment and excuse me for my french-english :)

10 October 2002, 11:52 AM
I've forgotten something: Harrad, I realy enjoy what you did to my picture with PS :thumbsup: . So what have you exactly done to get that pliz ??

10 October 2002, 01:46 PM
reiv! rofl tu me kill la! :) tres jolie!!

10 October 2002, 02:34 PM
VERY nice !!!

but there's something about her left eye... It looks like ... i dunno... but it's wrong...

10 October 2002, 03:12 PM
I definitely love her:love:
maybe you can put her into an open air,i like to see sunshine on cute girls shoulder ;)
great job on modeling and texturing:beer:

10 October 2002, 04:14 PM
that is toooo freaking creepy dude she looks way to much like my X-girlfriend.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! RUNNNNNN:scream: :scream: :scream:

im serious i should find a pic and show you.

10 October 2002, 06:08 PM
Potato- She reminds me of someone i know as well.

Reiv- Thanks. What i did was....

1. First cut the pic to the new size (really?)

2. then copy the picture and blur it, then change the layer transfer to overlay. this takes the edge of the Cg look, gives it a bit of bloom (extream whites, going into deep blacks) and it also pushs the whites and blacks out.

3. Then added a hue-sat layer, changed it to a colourize type. and selected a yellow-orange colour. Then took it down to 50% opacity. which gives it a warm glow about it. (also change this to overlay)

i think thats it. the main problem i had with the your pic was the space around the head on the left and right. which took away from your wonderful (and very sexy) face.

hope this helps....
-Matt :D

10 October 2002, 10:33 PM
show us the wire
show us the wire

:bounce: :bounce: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

10 October 2002, 11:50 AM
Thanx Harrad and everyone :)

10 October 2002, 05:36 PM
Fantasitc job reiv! She's very beautiful.

10 October 2002, 04:46 PM
her is the wire

10 October 2002, 04:51 PM
and here is an update: same picture but photoshopised (tx to harrad)

10 October 2002, 04:54 PM
Aarg sorry for the pic size (wrong file selected :sad: )

The Magic Pen
10 October 2002, 07:23 AM
just hit edit and you can change the picture link in that message ..good work by the way

10 October 2002, 01:37 PM
thx for the tips :)

10 October 2002, 03:57 PM
Yeah that's a cute non-sophisticated girl! Love it! Can I have her phone number please ?

07 July 2004, 05:04 AM
amazing workkkkkkk

excellent job

07 July 2004, 06:13 AM
en~This is like real .Amazing work!

07 July 2004, 09:09 AM
nope, not cute at all

this is what you call: SEXY :D

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