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03 March 2005, 01:32 PM
Alberto Gordillo has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

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This is the final one..:)

03 March 2005, 02:53 PM (

Hi fellows :)
Well , here is a quick sketch that I did in order to find the right balance on color and composition.
Thanks in advance for your feedback.

03 March 2005, 02:55 PM
ah more nudity for no reason.

i like it,looking great keep it up!

03 March 2005, 03:07 PM
Looking very nice! Great lighting! :)

03 March 2005, 04:04 PM
Nice to see a spanish guy posting around... good luck with your only comment is that you could go for a more dynamic composition, not so static. I've seen such in your drawings. Keep it up!

Btw, do you have a website or so to see of your works?...if don't you have to get one!

Un saludo.

03 March 2005, 04:13 PM

I like the longer vertical composition on the right. Good start!

04 April 2005, 09:07 PM (

Well,here is my baby..
Your feedback is welcome..(as usual) :)

04 April 2005, 09:13 PM
wow... the medusa...great texture, lighting m sure your stl workng on th bg's right? i thnk the guys neck in front a li'l out of proportion, i dnt know, mayb its my eyes... great job btw

04 April 2005, 09:26 PM
Love the colour scheme and the composition. The guys actually look like they're made of rock. Now when I draw figures they also look like they're made of rock, but I never intend them to so maybe it doesn't count.

You need a bit more definition in the background. I know the near wall's not meant to be square on, but because you've left it sketchy it half looks like the perspective's askew (good word that, "askew", I so rarely have the opportunity to use it).

And, haven't you missed out some milestones? Like, nearly all of them? :D

Anyway, love it, great job.

04 April 2005, 09:28 PM
great image.. powerful and mystical..
good luck with it

04 April 2005, 05:47 PM
I really love her image
idealistic of the master of all kinds
powerful and beautifully mysterious

great work!!

04 April 2005, 10:04 PM
I like the "hair" and the lighting a lot. The textures are nice too. Her left arm - the screen-right one - seems a bit awkward: The way it's posed, it looks like it should be resting on something, the way her other arm is, but it isn't. Also, it would have been nice to see some of your work in progress in-between a rough sketch and a totally-finished piece.
Anyhow, hope you'll keep refining this. Good luck!


04 April 2005, 10:09 PM
Nice image but I think that you went from start to finish way to fast.

04 April 2005, 08:40 AM
Fantastic... it is getting better and better!

only thing: the background is too dominant and coming to close to the main characters... little blur on it - it helps i think...

(sorry fo my english...)

best regards: KornÚl

04 April 2005, 09:42 AM
some nice paintings. only minor crits since its very early on... they kinda look like portraits! 'thats it ms. medusa, nearly done...'
...maybe you could add some movement with the snakes/hair and some birds/bats/running water etc... just an idea!

:thumbsup: good work!

05 May 2005, 06:42 PM (

So sorry guys,I completely forget to upload the line art.... it is then :)

05 May 2005, 07:21 PM (

I also forgot this one.....
Sorry again fellas :)

05 May 2005, 07:36 PM

05 May 2005, 08:17 PM (

I already post it as final image,
ovbiously isn't it :)

05 May 2005, 08:37 PM
Wow, I love the colors you've chosen for this. I like the detail on her dress as well. Very nice work! Good luck!

05 May 2005, 09:30 PM (

This is the final one..:)

05 May 2005, 05:59 AM
Alberto, very nice work on your final image, the stone effect is really nice and those snake are very nice, but what I like the most is that satisfaction look she has, great work dude. :thumbsup:

05 May 2005, 07:28 AM
Very nice work man!:buttrock: The woman looks very good and the background look very dramatic!!:thumbsup: ..So...ah..ah ...i ..i ...can't tell...te...tell'.....i'm...changing.... am changing me into

Good luck !!

05 May 2005, 08:20 AM
Hello Alberto, good luck, nice colours as always and i like the stoned bodies too much...

05 May 2005, 05:36 PM
good luck :thumbsup:

05 May 2005, 06:13 PM
very nice pic with a great strange atmosphere, good work and good luck for the end

05 May 2005, 06:16 PM
love ur color and lighting.
congrats and good luck to u.:applause:

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