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jadecilcleton
03 March 2005, 03:08 PM
Bruno Hamzagic has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6913)

Latest Update: Final Image: its done!!!
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116465353_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116465353_large.jpg)

well... that's it... today I'll sleep like a bear, my girlfriend will has to excuse me... my shower too... I'm kidding (lol)... tomorrow I'm sure that I'll change my mind of many things and will be late, but it's ok... that's life.

sorry my english and good luck to who came visit my piece! :- D

jadecilcleton
04 April 2005, 06:55 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113332109_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113332109_large.jpg)

this is my first sketch to this challenge. My idea is to pass the sensation of a son of an eletronic technical that want to be like his father, but not ever make the things right.

Sorry my english. :-D

NOOB!
04 April 2005, 06:58 PM
nice sketch,keep goin.

toobi
04 April 2005, 07:14 PM
i like the idea of the father and son relation, but maybe you should have them more in the foreground to have their facial expressions more detailed. keep it up!

jadecilcleton
04 April 2005, 03:28 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113362894_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113362894_large.jpg)

I´m not so happy whith this rough yet, but I tried a little more.

Sorry my english again. :-D

jadecilcleton
04 April 2005, 03:43 AM
thanks the advice toobi! I´m defining the layout of the image yet, but is very helpful the opinion of the fellows! tks :-D

soory my english toobi! I'm tranning. :- D


i like the idea of the father and son relation, but maybe you should have them more in the foreground to have their facial expressions more detailed. keep it up!

jadecilcleton
04 April 2005, 03:49 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113407366_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113407366_large.jpg)

now i'm starting to like of my piece, the narrative of the action almost got the way that i was looking for.

jadecilcleton
04 April 2005, 04:28 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113496095_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113496095_large.jpg)

there are many things to decide yet, but I`ll walk in this way.

Maidith
04 April 2005, 04:30 PM
very nice sketch so far ^^ The expression of the kid is great.

jadecilcleton
04 April 2005, 04:52 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113540748_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113540748_large.jpg)

I'm just making the final tests to see if i'm sure about my draw.I tried to put the scene in a perpectve space a little more "correct". I'm almost there to define the line art.

Sorry my english again and again and...:- D

jadecilcleton
04 April 2005, 10:05 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113559503_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113559503_large.jpg)

its walking...

:- D

element5
04 April 2005, 01:32 PM
Nice sketchwork Bruno, Waiting for colour now :thumbsup:

Samuraikuroi
04 April 2005, 01:46 PM
Dia bom Bruno, bonito artwork!!! Love to see how this develops. :thumbsup:

My Master & Servent (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=226306&page=2&pp=15)

jadecilcleton
04 April 2005, 07:07 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113721658_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1113721658_large.jpg)

here is the beginning of the lighting of my work. I trying one place to the main light.

jadecilcleton
04 April 2005, 02:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1114396185_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1114396185_large.jpg)

i know that isn't business of anyone, but i back and i still definning the light.

sorry my english again. :-D

Arc80
04 April 2005, 02:44 AM
Hey, that's a pretty nice piece you got there. I dig the concept and the story. Will be checking back later. Goodluck

cheers

the-mighty-m
04 April 2005, 08:10 AM
Your lighting is awesome!

arLutiK
04 April 2005, 09:32 AM
Very nice start you've got there, the lighting really sets the mood :thumbsup:

Tariq12
04 April 2005, 10:31 AM
Hey bruno, this is looking sweet. Love the lighting. Keep it up man,
Cheers,
T.

ilusiondigital
04 April 2005, 11:02 AM
Reminder me the pinocchios tale, grat lightning, and hope to see the colouring version

Vectorius
04 April 2005, 11:15 AM
It's a good concept!:) I hope that you will durst background ( like staircase or the rack)..it's looking too perfect for me...keep it up and good luck:)

calisto-lynn
04 April 2005, 11:27 AM
great lighting.. i love the luminance from the window on that kid!!:thumbsup:

Ilikesoup
04 April 2005, 03:01 PM
Looking good! I like how you switched the composition so the focus is on the boy and having him surrounded by broken toys and appliances is a cute idea. Really good perspective drawing, and I never thought of laying out the perspective grid like that and upsizing like you've done. Something strikes me odd about the stairs, though. Anybody walking down the stairs would bump into the shelves on the left wall. Dad's arm looks a bit too long, and he shouldn't be wearing shorts and bare feet if he's soldering electronics. A bit of hot metal dripped in the wrong place, and :scream: !

Looking forward to more.

AirbORn
04 April 2005, 03:56 PM
Looks great. I like how the light from teh window reflects onto the childs lower body. Great composition. Once you start tightening up the details I am sure it will look even better :)

xric7
04 April 2005, 03:59 PM
wow.
realy great painting.the lighting emotion and composition are excellent.
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
i'll wait to see more.

mybutterflyiris
04 April 2005, 03:58 AM
This is looking really nice, your lighting is awesome...keep it up! can't wait for more updates.

jadecilcleton
04 April 2005, 06:36 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1114583795_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1114583795_large.jpg)

I'm Trying to improve the relationship between the expression of the two characters. I'm add an level more of detail to have sure about my choices...

Sorry my english, my brother look my text and said that I write like the tonto of the zorro. :- D

Thank to you fellows by the incentive, you are very kind people!

W-I-L
04 April 2005, 06:58 AM
heh.. first time i have seen this.. really great stuff... the expressions do look better... the dad in purticulier looks very good... keep it up

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 03:31 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1115220709_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1115220709_large.jpg)

Now Im think that the eye relationship its ok with my idea... time is running!!! my God!!!! ahhhhh!!!

sorry my english...

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 03:44 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1115221464_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1115221464_large.jpg)

just to show how the thing is looking for now... the time!!! 14 days!!! my god!!! ahhh!!!

sorry my english, but if in the beginning my english was terrible, now....blargh!!! ahhhh!!!!

0-2
05 May 2005, 04:09 PM
Awsome use of lighting and perspective, I get the feeling you have some way to go still, but I'm sure its going to look incredible when yo are done.


http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=230444

melkao
05 May 2005, 04:17 PM
jhajajajaja man that's funny and original:thumbsup:
But put more details to the escenary to give more realism.....mybe a picture on the wall, a bug, or dirt on the walls and the floor....good luck:scream:

Zephyri
05 May 2005, 05:04 PM
This looked really impressive from the thumbnail! And close up doesn't disappoint either. It's a great piece of work, even this far, I LOVE the expression of the father, his pose, everything. And the little lad is cute too. Lovely work on the lighting of the piece too, even at thumbnail size, everything had form and weight behind it. Great piece, can't wait to see more!

snowkiwi
05 May 2005, 05:19 PM
Really nice expressive body language.

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 06:42 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1115836943_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1115836943_large.jpg)

I trying to finish all elements thet have directily relationship whith the main action of my piece... I hope that the time help me to put the other elements in the shelfs, wall and ground.

sorry my english! :- D

clayeraser
05 May 2005, 07:23 PM
great choice! This is something that happen in a everday life of a child, Great point of view!
Good luck bro..

melkao
05 May 2005, 07:29 PM
Hey very nice the new details...it looks more funny...great job man:thumbsup:

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 06:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1115879344_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1115879344_large.jpg)

just a little more details...

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 06:07 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116310039_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116310039_large.jpg)

Im improving the cenario details....

minduinho
05 May 2005, 03:17 AM
seu trabalho ta FANTASTICO cara!
eu praticamente abandonei o meu.
tentarei fazer algo pra ao menos mandar como pronto.
soh pra n fazer feio no primeiro q participo =D

ah, tem uma coisinha, vc fez os degrais assim pra dentro intencionalmente? pq por ter feito assim, os 4 ultimos ficaram fazendo um angulo de mais ou menos uns 75º a 80º, quando normalmente costuma ser 90º mesmo.

boa sorte cara

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 06:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116397771_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116397771_large.jpg)

I did a lot of details that Im consider important, Im making many details yet... but I post this image anyway.

melkao
05 May 2005, 01:44 PM
Almost done my friend...good luck:thumbsup:

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 10:34 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116455637_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116455637_large.jpg)

I think that all details in the father enviroment are ok....

Ducklator
05 May 2005, 10:50 PM
great colors..

simple, but great.

em... where is the another one??:shrug:

Ducklator
05 May 2005, 10:51 PM
oh, sorry, Ain't saw the little boy:D .... great coloring again!:thumbsup:

paperclip
05 May 2005, 11:15 PM
Bruno, beautiful!:applause:

I love your clean, classic style, it sort of puts me in mind of a more modern Rockwell.
You have a rather unique way of building up your picture and I loved looking at your WIP...very interesting indeed...I learned from it, especially the way you built up your lights.

You must be nearly finished by now! Quick man, hurry and get this through before the deadline!
theresa
:thumbsup:

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 11:33 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116459206_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116459206_large.jpg)

oh my god!!! the time!!! thanks guys! its a great energy each big or spark gentle word! Im making the nemo's mantra: "keep swimming,keep swimming, keep swimming..."..

sorry my english every time!:-D

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 12:20 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116462035_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116462035_large.jpg)

well... that's it... today I'll sleep like a bear, my girlfriend will has to excuse me... my shower too... I'm kidding (lol)... tomorrow I'm sure that I'll change my mind of many things and will be late, but it's ok... that's life.

sorry my english and good luck to who came visit my piece! :- D

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 01:15 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116465353_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6913/6913_1116465353_large.jpg)

well... that's it... today I'll sleep like a bear, my girlfriend will has to excuse me... my shower too... I'm kidding (lol)... tomorrow I'm sure that I'll change my mind of many things and will be late, but it's ok... that's life.

sorry my english and good luck to who came visit my piece! :- D

arLutiK
05 May 2005, 04:16 AM
Wow, really nice image you did there, very nice detailing, good luck with the voting.

Riddick
05 May 2005, 07:06 AM
Very very good work Bruno!!
Congratulation!

melkao
05 May 2005, 02:21 PM
very good final work..and very original...good luck:thumbsup:

CoreyArtE
05 May 2005, 02:24 PM
Great lighting excellent picture! I wish you luck!

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 09:28 PM
I was insecure to click in the button "quote". In fact i doesn`t knew whats mean "quote". Now, after search in the dicionary I discovered that means "response with quotation"... Sorry my unkind... Your words was very powerful to me... I felt my self conforted and energysed to continue on! :-D

thakyou very much and good look! and sorry my terrible english!!:-S

Bruno, beautiful!:applause:

I love your clean, classic style, it sort of puts me in mind of a more modern Rockwell.
You have a rather unique way of building up your picture and I loved looking at your WIP...very interesting indeed...I learned from it, especially the way you built up your lights.

You must be nearly finished by now! Quick man, hurry and get this through before the deadline!
theresa
:thumbsup:

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 09:34 PM
I explained to Theresa the motive of dont reply the force that you give! I now that we are all at the same boat and in many moments we think in give up... but go back here and see fellows words push me to finish my piece.. thank you! And good look! and sorry my english,, im trying to pretice....:-D

Very very good work Bruno!!
Congratulation!

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 09:39 PM
I saw that you gave me encouragement more that one time here and I didn`t reply because my ignorance in the usability of this forum. Sorry my unkind... Good luck! :thumbsup:

very good final work..and very original...good luck:thumbsup:

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 09:40 PM
:)
Thaks for yor kind words! Good look to you too!!:thumbsup:


Wow, really nice image you did there, very nice detailing, good luck with the voting.

paperclip
05 May 2005, 09:49 PM
Sou alegre ter ajudado-o. Espero-o fazer bem neste desafio. Seu inglês é bom. Posso entendê-lo. Boa sorte!

I am glad to have encouraged you. I hope you do well in the challenge. Your english is good, I can understand it. Good luck !

arkinet
05 May 2005, 10:25 PM
good humor in your image bro, great painting skills too, specially on the details. Congratulations!!:thumbsup:

AlyFell
05 May 2005, 10:39 PM
I must apologise Bruno, but this is another entry I missed. But there's been so many I didn't see! Great work, with fantastic attention to detail. Your lighting is spot on, and I agree with Paperclip, it's facinating to see how you built up the light in different areas. It would have been very easy to just darken the room and to have 'hidden' things, but you spent time to get all those little interesting extra bits and pieces in. Good luck with this! :)

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 11:55 PM
I am the guy who must ask for apologise, Your work that is great, I was accompanying your work from the beggining and all the time I found your lineart marvellous. Your wall-clock its very
superiror of the mine! :) Im ask for sorry because I didn't post any message to you... Im not habituate with this timming of the forum.. and my idiot mind taked a long time to understand the "quote" button...

Sorry my unkind and my english and good luck to you too!!! :thumbsup:

I must apologise Bruno, but this is another entry I missed. But there's been so many I didn't see! Great work, with fantastic attention to detail. Your lighting is spot on, and I agree with Paperclip, it's facinating to see how you built up the light in different areas. It would have been very easy to just darken the room and to have 'hidden' things, but you spent time to get all those little interesting extra bits and pieces in. Good luck with this! :)

xric7
05 May 2005, 02:05 AM
amazing painting!:eek:
stunning details!:bowdown:
congrats on ur final image.good luck to u.:applause: :thumbsup: :buttrock:

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 03:32 AM
but I have to say that your work dropped my jaw!
congratulations to you.. and good look to!


amazing painting!:eek:
stunning details!:bowdown:
congrats on ur final image.good luck to u.:applause: :thumbsup: :buttrock:

patina
05 May 2005, 09:16 AM
hi jadecilcleton

wonderful illustration. feels like 3d nice mood and lighting , feels reel to
well done

Regards Patina!

My M-S
The Hunchback
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=231985 (showthread.php?threadid=231985)

liquidwerx
05 May 2005, 11:19 AM
Nicely done. :thumbsup:

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 02:17 PM
thank you for the regards!!! I was visit your thread and liked to much of your work! your Wip showed a deep signification and a strong result.:thumbsup:


hi jadecilcleton

wonderful illustration. feels like 3d nice mood and lighting , feels reel to
well done

Regards Patina!

My M-S
The Hunchback
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=231985 (http://showthread.php/?threadid=231985)

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 02:21 PM
thanks and good luck to you and your "Obedience Training"!!! Its very cool! :)
Nicely done. :thumbsup:

Aniii
05 May 2005, 02:15 AM
Wow ! So much details in your scene !! :eek:
I like the 'mood' very much :)

blakbird
05 May 2005, 09:09 PM
Warm, brilliant and excellent. Though master and servant idea (at least mine) quite different than your work includes but anyway, great work.
:applause:

blakbird
05 May 2005, 09:09 PM
Warm, brilliant and excellent. Though master and servant idea (at least mine) quite different than your work includes but anyway, great work.
:arteest:

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 04:58 AM
thank you for the visit Ani! good luck to you again!:thumbsup:

jadecilcleton
05 May 2005, 08:58 PM
I saw your work and I found that you did a great work of art and social critique! sorry my late to see your message and good luck to you! :thumbsup: and sorry my english to!

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