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pariahrob
03 March 2005, 10:23 PM
rob redman has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6769)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: fallen or thrown?
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112225440_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112225440_large.jpg)

Jus rearranged the format for the piece and spent a short time reworking the skin tones. I have a much better idea where i am heading with the setting now.
all comments are welcome. tell me what you think.
cheers,
rob

NOOB!
03 March 2005, 10:24 PM
hello mr redman,good luck!!

pariahrob
03 March 2005, 07:02 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112036519_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112036519_large.jpg)

This is my first time here. Please feel free to be as critical as you can. Or how will i ever develope?
The idea behind this piece is to throw a new slant on something i saw happen a while back. A girl had fallen from her pony and was rubbing her ankle then i noticed the horse appeared to be laughing. So-fallen or thrown.
This is my first concept and i am open to all your ideas. If anybody would like to start a thread for me i would be grateful.
Thanks guys
rob

pariahrob
03 March 2005, 07:04 PM
Hi,
ok, i didnt know a thread would be started for me. Excellent! Well hopefully somebody will start the ball rolling soon.
Personally i have a few comments.
1. The hand rubbing the ankle is giving me grief. Any hints?
2. I have too many ideas for the setting. Tell me what you think, please, and i'll be working on my piece tonight and tomorow.
Thanks all,
rob

pariahrob
03 March 2005, 07:07 PM
hi Noob,
Thanks very much. An official welcome! Got any pearls of wisdom for me?

pariahrob
03 March 2005, 08:19 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112127593_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112127593_large.jpg)

Hi again all. Just added some colour to play with flesh tones. A bit bright i think so goin to play with overall cast and see what happens.
Any ideas?

pariahrob
03 March 2005, 08:21 PM
Please ignore the right hand. It's still causing me problems but i will get there.

alex.h.
03 March 2005, 03:47 PM
nice start rob and keep going strong and,yes, i work for games workshop. se you later and :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

pariahrob
03 March 2005, 03:56 PM
Thanks Alex, I thought it might have been you. I used to work in the studio myself. Small world. Good luck!

jsn
03 March 2005, 04:00 PM
G' day Rob :cool:
Looking good! :thumbsup:

Pixeldragoon
03 March 2005, 04:21 PM
I like it so far, it's coming along great!

pariahrob
03 March 2005, 04:29 PM
Thanks for the kind words. I will be uploading another tonight with more background work. Keep me informed of your opinions.
Cheers
rob

pariahrob
03 March 2005, 11:30 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112225440_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112225440_large.jpg)

Jus rearranged the format for the piece and spent a short time reworking the skin tones. I have a much better idea where i am heading with the setting now.
all comments are welcome. tell me what you think.
cheers,
rob

victim335
03 March 2005, 12:16 AM
Whoa chicksnsnakes, You aim for the top :D , little more facial detail will help that girl alot, great work by the way, some nude gals will never spoil the deal :)

THE Wizard
03 March 2005, 01:04 PM
Hmm, I think you should put some more details in background, it looks kind well, empty

:wise: my master & slave 2D (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=225858):twisted:

pariahrob
03 March 2005, 06:59 PM
yeah, the background is very empty. it may well stay fairly empty though. This was a very very quick addition to focus my mind once i had changed the format of the picture. There will be more. nut how much more?
Any comments or thoughts anyone?

Alden
03 March 2005, 07:46 PM
I really like the concept. Raptors would make for some cool pets! :twisted:

I think the shadows are a little too deep for the rib cage. They make her look a little malnurished.

Anyways keep up the good work.

~Aldo

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