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BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 07:48 PM
Dávid Páncsics has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6762)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: New ideas after a little "break"
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112803313_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112803313_large.jpg)

HEre's an update.Half line art - half sketch. I changed a lot of thing on the jedi, he would be not a jedi but an other sith. They will fight for their master's. How is it looks like?
I didn't changed the pose of the sith.
About thet big window. that would be white and there will be a dark pose - the master.
What do you think guys?

BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 07:54 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1111953254_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1111953254_large.jpg)

The first step.
I just started to sketch and this is the result.
And the ideas started to come and come.
I will post some colored sketch very soon :)
Good luck for all!
Let the fight begin!

NOOB!
03 March 2005, 07:54 PM
gud luck! have fun

BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 07:56 PM
Hi!
Thanx and the same to you!

I will post a lot of picture, cuz I started to paint, but i was afraid from this chalange thing :)
But i can lose NOTHING :)

BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 08:00 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1111953636_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1111953636_large.jpg)

Here's the 2nd step.
I added the main colors and the caracter come alive :D

NOOB!
03 March 2005, 08:10 PM
looking good,whats his story??,sum kinda star wars wannabe??

BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 08:13 PM
Yea!
Star wars thing.
THere will be her master in the foreground and some jungle environment at the bg.
Green vs red.
I think that would be nice....
Maybe i will add a dead jedi to the picture, cuz there is no action...
What do you think?

NOOB!
03 March 2005, 08:18 PM
a dead jedi is action?? lol,i fight scene between the two wud be better,with maybe the master looking on?

BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 08:28 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1111955306_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1111955306_large.jpg)

This was my main idea o_O
I know what you r thinking about! And i agree it. That wud be more powerfull but i have to pose tha maste somewhere... Any ideas?
Tha jungle will stay and the red vs green as well. Green lightsaber vs red. Cool :)

NOOB!
03 March 2005, 08:33 PM
i can see it now,the two are fighting in the jungle,and the master is watching from a tree or sumthin else above them.

BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 08:12 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1111997545_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1111997545_large.jpg)

Here goes the new idea.
I am not sure about the pose of the jedi but the sith is not bad...
What do you think?
Oww and an other question:
How about the sith master? Just put it on a tree or give him any kind of "ship" (i mean a ship without "roof" o_O)

BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 09:02 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112000575_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112000575_large.jpg)

Just a coloring....

NOOB!
03 March 2005, 12:33 PM
first off,try a more dynamic angle,who do u want to appear the strongest??? if its the sith,have him in a more dynamic pose,and the jedi in a slightly less dynamic pose.or vice versa.

ur master and ship idea sounds like it wud work.

BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 02:42 PM
Oky doky!
I go and just make sketches and sketches :)
Maybe the jedi will be lying on the ground and protect himself by his lightsaber.
About the master, i dont really have strong idea, i will just sketch and there will be something :)
Thanx for the ideas.
Owww and your last painting rox! Cool colors there ;)

BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 08:56 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112086611_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112086611_large.jpg)

New idea!!
I've just playing with poses. First I made the jedi. He had a very subserviant pose and I had no idea how to make the sith attack him. 1-2 hour sketching and i found this pose.
What do you think?

BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 09:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112088564_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112088564_large.jpg)

Here's some correction, and the lineart. I changed the pose of the sith's arm and the lightsabers pose. Come correction on the "tendril"
How is it looks like?

BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 03:44 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112111082_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112111082_large.jpg)

Just a coloring, and a new idea. The sith is on a tree.

BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 08:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112000575_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112000575_large.jpg)



Hi again i would like to ask which is the better. This or the last one. Cuz i was thinking about the master and servant connection is between the master and the sith, the sith dont have to be the strongest... I think. But if i will use the last picture, then there will be 2 master and servant connection.
Master - Sith - Jedi
What do you think ?
I am in a bit trouble...:banghead::blush:

NOOB!
03 March 2005, 09:21 AM
just go with whatever u think will be a more succesful image.

BrutalMonk
03 March 2005, 09:30 AM
Then... maybe i will work on the poses of the 1st concept, try to make it more dynamic or something... and i am surfing on the net to find nice clothes for the jedi cos that is :shrug:.
Thanx Noob!

BrutalMonk
04 April 2005, 04:01 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112803313_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6762/6762_1112803313_large.jpg)

HEre's an update.Half line art - half sketch. I changed a lot of thing on the jedi, he would be not a jedi but an other sith. They will fight for their master's. How is it looks like?
I didn't changed the pose of the sith.
About thet big window. that would be white and there will be a dark pose - the master.
What do you think guys?

NOOB!
04 April 2005, 07:29 AM
i prefer ur tree concept.

OrO
04 April 2005, 11:19 AM
hmmmmm...i've alwais liked starwars....so i'm really looking forward to see what you are going to do..they kind of remind me of that sith in the clone wars cartoons

BrutalMonk
04 April 2005, 01:00 PM
Thanx for the comments!
About the clone wars. The similarity was unintended. I have seen some episodes, maybe that made me for this character.
After i finished the last concept, i was afraid that was undinamic. I couldnt make updates...
Maybe i will work on the tree concept as you said NOOB!
Thanx again.

-Brutal MOnk-

Morgy
04 April 2005, 01:51 PM
You should read the FAQ thread. Someone wrote there that this is not a fan-art contest. Oro is right - this scene looks much like the duel between Anakin and the sith marauder from the "Clone Wars" cartoons. :rolleyes: Let the force be with you, buddy!

Smash.rs
04 April 2005, 02:30 PM
I was gonna say the same that Morgy said...i think u could come up with something original... i like Star Wars a lot, and Clone Wars too, but i think that something new here will be way better.
C ya.

BrutalMonk
04 April 2005, 04:04 PM
Okky doky... it was my misstake, sorry guys, I will change the caracter. I have a new idea for it.
Thanx for the correction!
cya guys!

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