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apunktbe
03 March 2005, 11:09 AM
arnd boehm has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6386)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: sing it again, sam!
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6386/6386_1111708908_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6386/6386_1111708908_large.jpg)

Some details added...still not happy with this.
I had something different in mind, when i started...

apunktbe
03 March 2005, 11:29 AM
doubleposting... :rolleyes:

coldfront
03 March 2005, 12:19 PM
I like it. with some mysterious lightning it could be very nice. The creature could maby be a bit bigger and more discusting but I don't know. Looking forward to seeing more!

Tranchefeux
03 March 2005, 05:44 PM
Hi, Good starting I want to see the continuation, Good luck

apunktbe
03 March 2005, 12:01 AM
Thanks for your comments :)

I think, i will change the size of this piece and then i will play around with the size of the creature too...

my first challenge...it's fun!
Best wishes & good luck to all :thumbsup:

coldfront
03 March 2005, 09:02 PM
ey. great change man. I love the way he looks kind of like he hates being her servant but he knows that he doesn't have any other choice. And the way she looks arogant and that she knows that she's got all the power. Love it. great work man. =)

OKMER
03 March 2005, 09:08 PM
Nice start(already heard that,I know):D Hey,goodluck to you and have fun!

peterpop88
03 March 2005, 12:06 AM
I think your concept has a lot of promise. I agree with coldfront on this one, some dynamic lighting would help. At the moment I see that you have a uniform feel with all the elements in the piece. i.e the background, foreground, and characters share the same importance. With lighting and depth of field you could change this. Or perhaps a perspective shift could help.

The sketch is a good one, look forward to the next step.

Charlee
04 April 2005, 08:55 PM
Great Idea, Arnd, cant wait to see it more elaborated, in colour:) To that chica I would also be a servant;)
Very good start.

Dominus
04 April 2005, 09:00 PM
nice female character over there ;) the way you`ll colour the scene, is the way to succes! good luck! :thumbsup:

MechaHateChimp
04 April 2005, 10:56 PM
The sketch looks great! I was laughing cause it almost reminds me of a chic shopping for shoes :scream: LOL

But seriously, great sketch:thumbsup: The castle/room they are in would give way to just all sorts of possibilities for dramatic lighting... that will definitely give your image a huge edge if done correctly, which by the looks of your sketch, you shouldnt have a problem:]

Looking forward to seeing whats next. Cheers!

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