View Full Version : Master and Servant 2D Entry: Emrah ELMASLI
03 March 2005, 03:50 PM
Emrah ELMASLI has entered the Master and Servant 2D.
Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6245)
Latest Update: Line Art: lineart
Here's the lineart...i've done a black and white paint job on the sketch..now i'm going to start to color it right away...any suggestions?
03 March 2005, 04:43 PM
I've been waiting for you to enter! I wish you the best of luck!
03 March 2005, 03:37 AM
whats up Emrah! I'm gonna give this one a go as well... good luck man!
03 March 2005, 03:03 PM
İ can't wait:thumbsup:
03 March 2005, 03:25 PM
great to see you partake again , have fun !
03 March 2005, 03:38 PM
Oh cool, another awesome artist entering! I'm eager to see your take on this theme :)
03 March 2005, 04:04 PM
Looking forward to your final image...
your space opera was the coolest orange space scene i've seen around!
03 March 2005, 04:08 PM
Welcome, man and good luck. I'll look forward for your posts:)
03 March 2005, 04:33 PM
good to see you again...
kolay gelsin ....:thumbsup:
04 April 2005, 02:52 AM
wow..i'm so late for this. I was so busy and have just started to scribble some stuff for this event.Nothing special yet. Just trying to get into mood. I'll do more of these...
04 April 2005, 03:26 AM
wow thats looking awesome already, can't wait to see how this one develops
04 April 2005, 08:03 AM
I was beginning to think...where the hell is Atmspheria? Knowing what you did in the past, Emrah, I'm sure this one will blow our heads off, too. Can't wait to see more.
04 April 2005, 08:27 AM
same as andreasrocha.... I was thinking "where is HE?"
you're in now ;)
good luck and welcome man :)
nice first sketch
04 April 2005, 10:30 AM
oh yea, thank you guys. I'm a bit late but i hope i'll catch you up. I need to be fast...
04 April 2005, 11:15 AM
welcome and good luck..nice first sketch for sure
can i see your space opera entry that these guys are talking about..lol
link please :D
04 April 2005, 01:55 PM
well...i did this before the first sketch i posted. I didn't like the idea but just wanted to give a chance to this sketch. well..it's crap immo..any way. Gonna go back to the first idea i guess...
04 April 2005, 01:57 PM
Good idea. I wish good luck!
04 April 2005, 02:13 PM
i've been waiting for your entry! and i'm excited about how will these sketches develop.
both of them are great !!
i like the waterclour feel in the first one..
04 April 2005, 02:26 PM
that new sketck or wip update really struck my cord!
i love it. great work and i will be awaiting updates!
04 April 2005, 02:28 PM
I hope you will find a good concept and story to start soon. We are waiting to see new good paintings with your style.
04 April 2005, 02:52 PM
Hey! thank you all for the replies by the way...good luck to all...
04 April 2005, 02:53 PM
Good Luck my friend.Best wishes for you.:thumbsup:
04 April 2005, 03:17 PM
I've been waiting for you to enter!
I wish you the best of luck!
Good idea ! nice lighting !
May the force be with you !
"has valiant heart nothing is not impossible !"
04 April 2005, 03:24 PM
I love your style of painting.
The girl's head looks little like adult one which I like it.
I will keep eye on this painting.
04 April 2005, 04:04 PM
Hey there Atmospheria! It was about time to see your great work here. Great concepts so far. The first has great potential. Good Luck dude!
04 April 2005, 07:52 PM
tolga,stefuse,taeyoungchoi,taz23 thanks for the support guys.
04 April 2005, 03:17 AM
what's up dude,
cool sketches. I kinda like the creepy concept on this piece. If it was in a different angle, i think it would be a strong piece. I dig the cool and warm lighting too.
My master & servant entry (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=224331)
04 April 2005, 03:35 AM
Um. This rocks. Colors, mood, setting, characters, composition... absolutely awesome. I hope you go with this idea. If not, I think it's a stellar rough comp.
04 April 2005, 05:37 AM
I wouldnt say your stuff is crap.... cause if thats the case guys like me have no chance in hell! You have some amazing sketches... and I particularly like the death/little girl one a lot. Seeing the amount of skill just on your sketch work alone, I know you will be coming out with a heavy duty image. Beautiful work and for me its one of my favorites Ive seen so far for this challenge. I will definitely be coming back to see your progress :thumbsup: - J
04 April 2005, 06:26 AM
I really like the Death/girl concept it strikes a compelling cord.
I really like the concept of the death character to.
But you should go with what you like.
04 April 2005, 10:23 AM
Arc80 - thanks man...i don't know if i'm going to continue on this concept. I need to the some more sketches for it.
feeb - what's up brother? thanks for your comments. I'm still thinking about the conception, i need to do more sketches.
Mecha Hate Chimp - Thanks for your comments man. Really appreciated.
tAsty BITs - Wow, everyone likes the second idea, i need to think on that..hmmm.
04 April 2005, 08:46 PM
I'm still trying to get there. Some people liked the death and the little girl concept but i'm going to give a chance to this concept. This is a sniper and his 2 robot servants. A world after the nuclear war. People are trying to stay alive with killing each other. This is the basic story. Gonna do more sketches on this...take care for now
04 April 2005, 08:51 PM
Btw, this is not a composition or something...i'm just experimenting on the characters...
Any critics will be appreciated. thanks
04 April 2005, 09:12 PM
I like the design of the big guy, and the orange background works well. I wouldn't know what it was about without your description, so if you develop it you may want to include more story elements.
04 April 2005, 09:14 PM
Yes! that is a great start.... design and fresh colors are excellent!
Im waiting for the next step...
04 April 2005, 09:20 PM
Fantastic work so far Emrah! Death and the little girl is great, but I think I prefer this idea... or do I... oh dear! I don't know anymore... Do 'em both! :D
04 April 2005, 09:56 PM
The death concpet was nice, but this one peaked my curiosity much more. The colour scheme is quite unusual, but I'd agree with Baron Impossible, in that there should be a more obvious story to the picture. I'd love to know exactly what the little robot guys are doing with the sniper... are they his costant companions, or something acquired from a recent kill? He has a regal look about him, a post nuclear lord, or such, perhaps they are the post-nuclear equivilent of court servants or an honour guard? Just banding ideas about, but it certainly has merit. I shal keep an eye out to see where you take it.
04 April 2005, 11:12 PM
decided to go with the other sketch?
either way they are both great but i liked the little girl more. :)
04 April 2005, 01:26 AM
This is going to be so gorgeous. Man, this feels like an acrylic painting right now. The colors are really working fantastically IMO. I look forward to another installment. :)
04 April 2005, 01:42 AM
great~love the lush colors and the way u mess with it..awesome sketch~http://cgtalk.com/images/smilies/thumbsup.gif
04 April 2005, 01:46 AM
beautiful painting style, I'll definetly be watching you, great talent :drool:
04 April 2005, 01:49 AM
I love the looseness of your sketches - great job
04 April 2005, 11:02 AM
Baron Impossible - Thanks for your comments man. I'll add more story elements to the next sketch. It's gonna tell more. I know this sketch i not telling so much, i need to find a way for a better story telling. thanks again.
kornel - thanks alot for your comment.
Poshspice - hey! whats up? thanks for the comment. I didn't decide yet aswell...yea..i could do them both :scream:
Zepyhri - Hey! Great suggestions! I'll keep them in mind for sure. I'll write a more acceptable story next time. thanks again.
Slav - Oh yea..i'll do some of these, but still i don't know...we'll see.
feeb - hey! what's up feeb? Thanks for the comments. I'm working on the next sketch now...thanks
ms@zx - thanks alot.
cha0t1c1 - thanks alot brother!
digital_bobert - thanks bob!
04 April 2005, 12:34 PM
I adore your work. Both of your concepts are great! So you are right to be undecided. In this case only thing i can do is to wait and to be excited. Good luck!
04 April 2005, 01:08 PM
This sketch is also great. Like the first one, the watercolor feel is awesome. This is a fast sketch but it looks so professional. I look forward to your next sketches.
04 April 2005, 01:36 PM
Hey, what's up emrah?! Lookin good man, I definitely like the sniper one better. Im late on this too.. I hope to start today! I'll keep tabs on you, good luck! Talk to you later.
04 April 2005, 01:43 PM
I haven't seen your work yet. It looks great though. I love the looseness of the sketch and of the paint. Vibrant and living feeling to it. I hope your final image looks something similar to this. Not crazy about this current story though. Sort of bland layout and idea. Especially when your art is so moving and free.
04 April 2005, 02:14 PM
You definitly have a great style. Congrats.
I'm curious about wht's gonna be at the end...
Keep it up!
04 April 2005, 07:43 PM
thanks for the comments guys!
teyekanik - hey matt! whats up man! I'm waiting for your sketches here! Don't let me down...i hope you finish your entry this time. Good luck brother!
lethe,Zephyrous,gamoron and arctis..thanks!
04 April 2005, 07:46 PM
nice colour and especially texture going on in your latest.
04 April 2005, 09:06 PM
hi! ~emrah:) nice starting! nice sketch
good luck mate! for this challenge.i'm looking forward your next update
04 April 2005, 02:40 AM
I love that character you have in the middle, very apocolyptic like! Keep up the great work, ill be sure to come back to see your updates, this is going to be great!
04 April 2005, 08:07 AM
Hi Emrah, good luck with this one, you deserve it! i hope have some time to enter the challenge.
See u around!
04 April 2005, 05:27 PM
Hi all, i think i'm ok with this concept. Things are slowly coming together. Here's the story: New york city, after the nuclear war. I'm not sure about the year but it's in 22. century. The big cities of the world are all destroyed. As well as nyc. Between the destroyed buildings, there are some big gang wars to control the city. Gang leaders hires some highly talented snipers to kill other gangs guys. This guy in the picture is our hero, he's a master sniper who has over 150 kills. He also owns two little robot servants to help him with carrying stuff etc. They are stolen from the biggest gang in the city. Gang lord wants this guys head for this, but he's not afraid of anything...blah and blah. You got the point i think :) Anyway..take care until next update. (This is also a composition sketch, i need to improve the guys suit and pose. Also the robots. But i guess they're going to be on the roof top)
04 April 2005, 05:33 PM
That's looking much better. The whole image is well composed and the guy's face is pretty cool, as are the fat little robots. My only crits would be the sky is a bit too intense, maybe have something up there in the distance, and also, is it a good idea for a sniper to have a feather in his helmet and a large flag on his back? I guess he really isn't afraid of anything :) Nice job.
04 April 2005, 07:37 PM
it's really seems good.your brush style is so realistic.
good to see u .... :thumbsup:
04 April 2005, 08:03 PM
As your other entries the last one looks great too.
I liked sniper's design. If you improve the robots design everything will be great! Good luck!
04 April 2005, 08:07 PM
Wow the concept looks wonderful!
One thing about the composition.
Both forearms of the human are almost parallel. looks kind of unnatural.
Maybe you coul lower his right arm. (just a thought)
04 April 2005, 10:08 PM
Nigel Q - Thanks alot for your reply.
goktug - thanks man...i'm going to update more often.
jonalaz_art - Hey! thanks for your comment. Trying to keep the guy cool..heh
p4b10 - Hey Pablo!! What's up man? I hope you enter this challenge, i would love to see your fantastic stuff around here...see you around!
Baron Impossible - thanks for your comments baron. I'm going to make the sky more natural but still interseting, gonna work on it in the main wip. About the character, hehe...you're right. As you see he's also smoking, which is so dumb.hah! I thught that this is a different time line and the guys could be slightly cool. But i need to make some changes on them. Anyway, thanks for the crits again.
anil6tr - thanks anıl...good to see you too around here...i hope we all finish these in time.
Akrep - thanks man...
Goro - thanks...the sketch has some issues...gonna fix them in the main comp. thanks.
04 April 2005, 11:16 PM
This is looking very nice! Grungy-Heavy Metal-ish. Can't wait to see more!http://cgtalk.com/images/smilies/buttrock.gif
04 April 2005, 01:27 PM
hi my friend ı like your sketches. go on.keep it up..
04 April 2005, 01:37 PM
Looking good so far, atmospheria. The sky is vivid, and after seeing your GSO piece, I know it'll only get more beautiful. There are some nice touches here: I really like the green offsetting the reds. This is all going to look fantastic as you refine it. Good luck and have fun...!
04 April 2005, 01:54 AM
teknotek83 - thanks man..i'm trying to keep that feel.
korayarts - thanks mate.
walrus - thanks for your comments. Yea you got it right, i generally use opposite colors to make contrast in the pic. I'm using red and green for this pic.
Gonna make a new comp soon, maybe i can use some other colors too.
04 April 2005, 07:06 AM
very nice color choices for the piece, can't wait to see the finished work!
best of luck...
04 April 2005, 07:41 AM
very nice use of colour indeed!
04 April 2005, 02:58 AM
Your piece looks cool, the scene suggest that the character is more advance... just a thought maybe creating some sophisticated cigarette would be appropriate.
04 April 2005, 10:02 AM
Cameron Gardner - thanks alot. I'm going to try some other color schemes too.
NOOB! - thanks.
cabertevon - haha thanks man. thats a good suggestion. I'm going to try to improve the scene.
04 April 2005, 11:22 AM
What's up dude,
COol. nice choice of colours. I like where the mood is going on this. It somehow reminds me of that comic book "RED STAR" i think. Keep it up. I'll be checking back later.
04 April 2005, 02:25 PM
very good my friend especially red brush on weather and the man are very good im waiting
04 April 2005, 02:30 PM
seriously sick quality of work man!!:thumbsup:
04 April 2005, 02:58 PM
nice. i like the face colouring on that guy..:)
04 April 2005, 08:54 PM
Arc80 - thanks man..i don't know red star..i'll check that asap. thanks for your comment.
candasisman - thanks. i'll update the thread with a new image soon.
nebezial - thanks alot!
calisto - thanks
04 April 2005, 08:38 PM
Hello friend. I did like the concept much and i actually liked the almost-fallout taste even better. Colors reflect the mood quite nicely, (perhaps a little colder on the main character's skin or such just for the sake of the mood?) and i'm quite curious on how the bots will look like when you refine them (aside from looking cool ;) ).
04 April 2005, 08:53 PM
Great idea and great imagination! Run with this idea :)
04 April 2005, 10:32 PM
MuratCengiz - thanks brother...you got the fallout idea..heh..i was thinking fallout when i was sketching this. anyway..thanks alot.
jbig808 - thanks man..yea..i'm going with this
04 April 2005, 10:11 AM
tRY different color then green, it doesn`t fit the color scheme...maybe :)
04 April 2005, 01:21 AM
Hi all! Sorry for the big delay. I've been very busy in the last weeks, still i'm. Anyway, i've finally found some time to make a new sketch and this is going to be the final composition i guess. Simple, triangle compositon. No action. I love this kind of poses so i'm going to give this a shot. There are some minor mistakes in the image, i've rocognized it after i saved the jpeg file. Gonna fix them asap, maybe you'll find some more mistakes too. Btw, it's a plane wing at the back. And there are some burning wrecks at the far back. Wanted add some dramatic feel to the comp. Anyway, hope you like the new comp. Gonna fix the mistakes and color it rightaway.!
04 April 2005, 02:57 AM
oh man emrah I loved the mohawk, so much personality. anyway thisconcept looks great :thumbsup:
04 April 2005, 09:40 AM
thanks, i'm gonna post a more clear sketch soon.
04 April 2005, 07:30 PM
Here's the lineart...i've done a black and white paint job on the sketch..now i'm going to start to color it right away...any suggestions?
04 April 2005, 07:44 PM
I think its great. Love composition. Just think that the left character isnt so interesting.
04 April 2005, 08:46 PM
this is gunna be so great!
04 April 2005, 09:57 PM
a very safe concept... cool stuff. :p
04 April 2005, 10:59 PM
looks great... one thing i noticed is that the guys right arm's a little small for a gun that size, jst a thought... overall, its going to be a great pix:thumbsup:
05 May 2005, 03:24 PM
your on a RAMPAGE Emrah! I wasn't sure at first... I thought the comp might have been a little bland but now I can see where your going with it, it's going to be awesome. I am dry for ideas with this one, hopefully I will get a flash of inspiration like you!. Your getting so good man, it's crazy. Talk to you soon bro.
05 May 2005, 03:46 PM
05 May 2005, 04:49 PM
DaniloR - thanks for your comment. Yes, some stuff is not yet polished. I need to fix lots of things while i'm painting them.
NOOB! - thanks man. i hope!
Slav - I don't know if it's safe or not but i'm gonna try anyway...thanks
arkinet - thanks for your critix. It's true. I'm gonna fix some stuff..Thanks!
teyekanik - Hey brother! Whats up? Thanks for your comments man. The theme is a little bit strange but i liked it. Hope to see some great stuff from you man! See ya later.
levent - thanks
05 May 2005, 04:54 PM
strange means original man, I dont know how many demons or huge creature Ive seen in this challenge. You got a good idea going here. Hey, if you want to see my stuff, you can check out my site or this link as well: My Sketch thread (http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=34415&page=2&pp=60)
05 May 2005, 06:36 AM
yeah man really great :thumbsup: waiting for more and more
05 May 2005, 08:40 AM
hello my friend !
first thx for your post :) !
after, really nice line art !
i think you've got a nice composition here !
1)Maybe you'll have to turn tour left character front
to watch us or looking on the right?
2) reduce a litlle the gun , just a little bit !
without this everything is ok for me !
can't wait to sse the coloring !:thumbsup:
see yaaa my friend !
good luck !
in valiant heart nothing is impossible!
My master and Servants
05 May 2005, 11:33 AM
YYeeaahhh !! that's looking very good..better than your first concept..Character look very good..Ilike the face..And your new background bring more feeling...good!!:thumbsup:
Keep it up:bounce:
05 May 2005, 01:49 PM
i think it's great! composition is good and the burning wrecks at the back will make it more dynamic! big gunned smoking mohawk sniper with his robot servants ...that is reaally cool concept :thumbsup: i'm excited about the colorod version...
05 May 2005, 09:33 PM
teyekanik - Yea, lot's of dragons going on in this challenge. I saw your sketches and i'm very impressed. Keep it up bro.
Firestorms - thanks brother
stefuse - hey stef! thanks man! You have some nice points there. I think i'm going to try your suggestions. They can be helpful....thanks alot man.
Fiolka Alexandre - thanks man. appreciated
Zephyrous - thanks dear!
05 May 2005, 09:37 PM
My suggestion is that please start painting as soon as possible
Thumbs up, two thumbs up, way up
05 May 2005, 06:19 PM
Hi man...nice to see you again in this new contest.
Your idea: i like it very apocalyptic, is very cool the big gun, nad the 2 robots.
very nice and good luck:thumbsup:
05 May 2005, 09:52 AM
Reminiscent of Puddnhead! Looks great so far, no crits. =)
05 May 2005, 10:04 AM
olay budur be kardeş... super olmuş... ellerıne saglık kendını sona sakladın... Mezunıyet projende de başarılar kardeş.. :)
Nice work.... i like it...
05 May 2005, 10:41 AM
kuzgunoglu - thanks man...i'm painting right right now. I hope i can finish it.
melkao - thanks for your comment.
Malachi Maloney - haha, thanks. Wish to be as good as puddnhead. :)
Ozanosfer - thanks brother! sağol kardeş!
05 May 2005, 08:38 AM
Looking great so far! Latest update is excellent but I kind of like fourth sketch best. I would go with fourth if you ask me:) Anyways, I'm sure your final piece will be a stunning one. Good luck bro!
05 May 2005, 09:03 AM
like it, his right arm looks a bit odd at the moment though IMO, but I'm assuming that's still at sketch stage.
05 May 2005, 09:14 AM
I like it very much.
05 May 2005, 09:36 AM
wow! very good work, this is amongst the top few in my reckoning.
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
i aspire to your skills. :D
Its Great! Im in over raptures it!:buttrock:
05 May 2005, 02:35 PM
Ustam sen bu işi biliyorsun walla... gözlerimi işinini üzerinden alamıyorum... helal...
i can't w8... this work "Amazing"!...
05 May 2005, 05:46 PM
cok guzel iş:thumbsup: tebrikler
05 May 2005, 07:02 AM
Hadi Emrah renkli isi bekliyoruz:)
05 May 2005, 08:40 AM
i like your caracters...and the mood is great...i ll watch for the final one...good luck
05 May 2005, 10:48 AM
damn... didnt see ur thread till now. Hurry man! A great concept is there, make sure u finish this one, lots of potential, specially coz we all know ur super technique! I honestly hope u'll make it! good luck!
05 May 2005, 10:48 AM
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