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03 March 2005, 11:23 PM
Bahadir Baris Ozsoy has entered the Master and Servant 2D.
Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6078)
Latest Update: Final Image: Final Image
and the final image...
03 March 2005, 10:57 PM
Hi and good luck everybody!
Here is my first concept for the challenge.
I inspired by shepherd an his sheep dog when I made firt doodles.
Then I redesigned them.
03 March 2005, 10:59 PM
03 March 2005, 11:45 PM
Very good sketches. Shepherd idea is brand new concept for many contestants here :) good job.
Hosgeldin, kolay gele.
03 March 2005, 07:54 AM
Good sketches. keep it up.
Good luck to you :)
03 March 2005, 08:15 AM
nice sketches, keep it up man,
03 March 2005, 12:58 PM
good concept and drawing.
çoban efendi ve yaratığı, iyi fikir bence.
concepti görünce aklıma bazı anadolu efsaneleri geldi. karakaçoloz, ya da adamotu gibi mitolojik yaratıkları da işe katıp, zaten vahşi görünümlü yaratığa çobanın tam hükmettiği (atıl kurt) bir an olabilir gibi geldi. ama benim aklıma geldi bunlar, inşallah bir şeyler çağrıştırır sana.
anyway, i am waiting to see more from you. wish you will get a good result.:thumbsup:
03 March 2005, 01:03 PM
thats one mean sheep dog :) god knows what the sheep look like? good idea nice to see something diffrent.
03 March 2005, 02:29 PM
cizim cok guzel, ellerine saglik!!
the idea is really original, i agree with others! Making it as a fantasy element is even better ;D
what are you planning on putting in the bg? just empty plains or are you gonna fill it up?
your drawing style is very nice as well!!
iyi sanslar!! ;)
03 March 2005, 09:13 PM
Thank you everyone for your nice comments.
aslında senin dediğine benzer bi iki eskiz yaptım ama henüz adamakıllı şeyler çıkmadı. Bakalım, zamanla çıkar heralde :)
digiscape: see soon... :) thanks
Silveraxe: This drawings is to put up the characters. But I have different composition for the final image. Thanks
03 March 2005, 09:19 PM
colored sketch for the shepherd character...
03 March 2005, 09:35 PM
Love the rendering on it so far. Very impressive and I wanna see the beast now!
03 March 2005, 09:40 PM
kendi kendime ilk yorumum "ohaa" oldu :D
this looks "amazing"!! *shuts her wide open mouth* :D the coloring looks breathtaking, i can't wait to see the finished piece!!
ps: the coloring style reminds me of todd lockwood's work n___n
03 March 2005, 10:23 PM
good luck in the challenge.
03 March 2005, 08:20 PM
Colored sketch for beast.
03 March 2005, 08:24 PM
04 April 2005, 08:29 PM
its all about the pan's overall charisma...good work!
04 April 2005, 07:40 PM
Thank you NOOB! and Gökhan...
04 April 2005, 07:41 PM
Some sketches for the master's pose...
04 April 2005, 11:55 AM
like beast scetch so other scetches too..
Çizimlerin gerçekten harika umarım zamanında bitirirsin
04 April 2005, 12:39 PM
Thank you Gelroth..
Sağolasın. Daha zaman var, bitiririm sanırım :)
04 April 2005, 12:42 PM
Shepherd and his sheep dog is ok. Now, the sheeps...
Ok, no sheeps. Because our shepherd is "the Shepherd of the cursed souls who cant leave this world"
04 April 2005, 09:30 PM
At last I costituted the composition.
04 April 2005, 08:46 PM
Ok. I think, I am going on a little slow.
This is the color scheme. While you checking it out, I am going to proceed with the final work:)
04 April 2005, 08:50 PM
goin slow?? we still have a month and a bit,take ur time.
04 April 2005, 08:56 PM
You're going really good man. good luck :thumbsup:
(guzel gidiyor baris, eline saglik)
04 April 2005, 09:01 PM
You are on a right way! just go ahead... grats!
04 April 2005, 09:35 PM
I like the chosen palette and the back lighting. It has good ambience.
04 April 2005, 09:37 PM
the new concept is comming together nicely... the colors are a bit grey at this point.
will come back soon to check out more updates!
04 April 2005, 08:01 PM
NOOB!: Most of challengers coloring WIP, therefor I feel I standing back:) Yes you'r right we still have enough time:) Thanks
Atmospheria: Saolasın Emrah, beğendiğine sevindim.
Slav : I am indecisive about the colors, thanks.
Kornel, Gamoron: Thanks guys..
04 April 2005, 10:52 PM
Dude! Great sketches and concept art! Very nice... and I love the composition and colours you've chosen. Keep up the great work, and I'll be back to check for updates!
04 April 2005, 11:27 PM
Nice ! My suggestion is to try to put some more emotion in the master. have him in a fighting stance or something..Just fool around with it and see what different postures can do to strengthen your allready astounding composition!
04 April 2005, 09:32 PM
looking good.:) and good brush strokes.
good luck.i'm waiting your next update
04 April 2005, 03:51 PM
Bravo Bahadır,çok iyi.:applause: Bol şans wede rastgele ...:thumbsup:
04 April 2005, 10:27 PM
looks really great!
04 April 2005, 08:44 PM
Thank you guys!
CoreyArtE: I will add some emotions to the master in the final coloring...
04 April 2005, 08:49 PM
Here is the line art...
04 April 2005, 08:04 PM
04 April 2005, 08:15 PM
04 April 2005, 01:11 PM
nice consept bro...ı really like it...good coloring in sky.....kepp it up.:buttrock:
04 April 2005, 01:44 PM
04 April 2005, 02:01 PM
I like the colors you have chosen for your sky, very nice. Keep it up.
04 April 2005, 09:18 PM
Korayarts, Firestorms and Cerebr4l Thanks Guys
04 April 2005, 09:23 PM
I applied some details and contrast...
04 April 2005, 09:28 PM
And chracter positions...
04 April 2005, 10:04 AM
iyi gidiyor ellerine sağlık....
04 April 2005, 11:05 AM
Your background is beautiful and your sketch too!! I wait for colors in caracter and i'll return to see evolution...Good luck:)
04 April 2005, 11:15 AM
04 April 2005, 01:33 PM
This sky kills me. It's really impressive; so much light and strength.
Waiting for characters.
04 April 2005, 03:27 AM
Thanks for recent kind replies!! :)
04 April 2005, 03:29 AM
04 April 2005, 03:31 AM
close up from characters...
04 April 2005, 03:34 AM
...and detail from master.
04 April 2005, 04:43 AM
ur work looks incredible...I just saw ur thread, there are so many talented artists here...may I suggest something: can you strengthen the shadows on the folds...reat job otherwise...
04 April 2005, 08:47 AM
son yaptıgın iş süper olmuş....
last work is very nice. Keep it going.
04 April 2005, 09:32 AM
I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for your suggestion.Actually thats a common problem o' mine,there is a lack of contrast in the most of my works..i hope to getover it by practicing more and more
Eyvallah Ozan saolasın...
04 April 2005, 10:33 AM
Cool man. Love the costume and the rune stick. :thumbsup:
04 April 2005, 10:43 AM
oh yeah! the master look good! g:thumbsup: reat job!..but the "slave" should maybe look a little more agressive..and he should maybe look at his master...
Keep it up and good luck!!
04 April 2005, 10:53 AM
Wow, very cool colour, a lot of harmony. Like the expression of the master. Hope to see more, mate
04 April 2005, 08:36 PM
Your colors are sympathetic nerves, perhaps makes attention with the folds of clothing if not very cool.
04 April 2005, 10:42 AM
Superb work with colors. Will you add some fresnel-like effects to the edges of the characters (esp the skin of the beast) so the edges will be more visible and they don't fade away into the sand? Or will you keep the black outlines (which is still fine)
04 April 2005, 12:59 PM
Tariq12: Thanks man!
Fiolka Alexandre: Maybe i can make the beast more aggressive but its impossible to look at master.Cuz its against the montagne .You have to check out my sketches and u'll see where the beast is lookin at. Thanks...
ilusiondigital: Thanks man!
Tranchefeux: Instead of darkening the cloth i'll add more light to some places, thats all. Thanks...
Hesido: For my opinion, in some places, figures will mix with place by fog, smoke and light effects.. and black lines are only assistence to the picture. Thanks...
04 April 2005, 02:47 AM
a bit bothered by the creature. left paw and teeth. i think when beasts snarl they show mostly front teeth? light on the staff can still be a bit more intense?
youve got a mastery of colors and youre doing great. cheeers maaaan. :thumbsup:
04 April 2005, 09:05 AM
You took your painting a long way already -- good work! The posture of the master and his beast seem to be so much more energetic now.
I'd agree with cha0t1c1: maybe you'd need to work out more shadow-plays on the clothing (esp on the shirt) to achieve more contrast and realism. I think you already chose light coming from two sides when considering the face and the gown -- so don't forget this when working on the folds...
About the herded souls: maybe the concept of souls being herded would be more obvious when there is more than one hovering around? Just an idea, don't harm your whole composition...
:) <- Lutz
05 May 2005, 06:17 AM
jugeras, lutzw: Thank you guys! A will take your comments into considiration...
05 May 2005, 06:23 AM
I added more details..
05 May 2005, 11:56 AM
Hi, good progression on your painting the colors and environment are
always cool, and the sky that it success, go, go for the
Nice dymanic clouds!!!It´s color is wonderful
05 May 2005, 05:06 PM
very well rendered especially the clouds,nice dynamic pose for both the characters as well as the angle..great piece of work all and all~keep it coming:)wish u luck here
05 May 2005, 07:18 PM
Thank you very much guys!!
I keep on...
05 May 2005, 07:21 PM
Detail from master...
05 May 2005, 07:34 PM
I really like the color scheme you have going on here. The character design is great, plus the sky gives me a feeling that something is about to happen... Cool stuff! http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon13.gif
05 May 2005, 03:00 AM
Bahadir, very nice work, I just love your colors, I don't know what it is but I feel like an insect attracted by a lamp when I look at those colors.
05 May 2005, 06:21 AM
iyi şanslar bahadır
05 May 2005, 11:04 AM
the work on the textures of the cloths is very great, good work
05 May 2005, 02:47 PM
Nice Update. Anxiously waiting for "the soul" you mentioned earlier..
05 May 2005, 10:05 AM
Lovely drawing style! :thumbsup:
05 May 2005, 07:33 AM
freakjc, arlutik: thank you for your kind comments
dekal: sana da bol şanas la...
MDN67: Thanks man!
Hesido: i started it already
05 May 2005, 08:46 AM
Hello Akrep!! What's going on?..:) Your caracter looks very good:thumbsup: maybe, just a detail, You should add pupils in his eyes, but very slightly..Just to suggest them...In order to give him a more demoniac feeling and to avoid entirely white eyes ...
05 May 2005, 06:37 PM
Fiolka Alexandre: I am planning to leave it as it. But why not:)
05 May 2005, 06:41 PM
Little more details and begining of the soul painting.
05 May 2005, 06:48 PM
cok güzel oluyor hocam ellerine sağlık. "master and servant" taki en iyi çalışmalardan biri bence. daha da iyi olcak inşallah kolay gelsin
05 May 2005, 07:59 PM
I like your composition and lighting. Good luck for the end of the picture.
05 May 2005, 08:04 PM
good work, i like this. i wont crit for the sake of it - enjoy the challenge! :D
05 May 2005, 06:54 AM
Seccad: Çok saolasın elimden geldiğince iyi olmasına çalışıyorum:)
authentic, GhostInTheMachine: Thanks guys
05 May 2005, 08:24 AM
Hey Akrep, this is turning out to be really well indeed.
Noticed one thing, the creatures right foot's 'thumb' nail is short but the left foot has a really long nail (which looks better). Maybe evening them out would be a nice touch?
05 May 2005, 08:30 AM
great atmosphaire you have created...i like the colours you used and the main caracter is super...good luck
05 May 2005, 09:40 AM
Cok guzel gidiyor, ruhu da merak ettim baya:) Looking great so far. Good luck!
05 May 2005, 09:45 AM
:eek: ........................very good work!
05 May 2005, 04:07 PM
Close up from soul...
05 May 2005, 04:11 PM
Hesido: Tamam kardeş saolasın. Bi ayar çekerim one:)
Kerem: Buyrunuz ruh da bööle bişe:)
agios and anostudio: Thanks Guys!
05 May 2005, 04:13 PM
Lovely technique... the clouds and figure are just great.
And i like the latest detail... look forward to seeing him in the scene...
05 May 2005, 04:26 PM
Cool style, I love the clouds too. reminds me of traditional oils. Only crit is that the 'soul' could use a little more contrast.. or maybe lighten the darks to give the whole figure a lighter key. Another thing, it looks a little monkey like, is this intentional?!
Nevertheless, it looks amazing and your level is much higher than mine, so who am I to crit? :D Feel free to ignore me.
I'll be keeping an eye on this....keep it up!
05 May 2005, 06:13 PM
duddlebug : Thanks Man!
you catch the right point
its true that the soul looks like a monkey,maybe i wouldn't notice it if you didnt say..thanks a lot
05 May 2005, 11:51 AM
little more details...
05 May 2005, 10:03 PM
i tried to change the expression of the soul's face,i think now it doesnt look like a monkey that much. :)
05 May 2005, 02:35 AM
here is final coloring...
05 May 2005, 02:44 AM
and the final image...
05 May 2005, 03:57 AM
wonderful piece!!:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
very beautiful color and great comp.:thumbsup:
love ur sky and characters a lot.
best luck to u.
05 May 2005, 06:04 AM
Bahadir , güzel sonuclandirmissin tebrik ederim , sana basarilar dilerim :thumbsup:
05 May 2005, 10:03 AM
Nice finish! :)
There is a striking resemblence to Willam Dafoe, with that soul!
Gerçi baş barnak konusunda beni dinlemedin ama neyse :D:D
05 May 2005, 02:14 PM
xric7 :Thanks Man! :bounce:
sablebrush: eyvallah hocam saolasın:thumbsup:
hesido: yok sana barnak marnak :)
and GOOD LUCK EVERYONE!!!:buttrock:
06 June 2005, 01:00 PM
nerelerdesin olm? bi ara lem!
06 June 2005, 05:56 AM
I've been looking at the image Backgroun_3 for ten minutes now, it seems. Same old song: I don't know how I missed this one.
It's astonishing that something so bereft of inhabitants can be so moving. It's one of the finest skies I've ever seen painted, and I've seen a quite a few.. Your final image is, to me, a strange and beautiful mix of the fantastic, the fairy tale, and the legend. I don't pretend to know what it all means, but that is part of the beauty. I wish you much much good luck with the challenge.
06 June 2005, 05:56 AM
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