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03 March 2005, 09:49 AM
Louise-Alexandrine Patrick has entered the Master and Servant 3D.

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The fall of the king

Once upon a time, a king has to flee his kingdom attacked by the enemy.
He took a road that the most courageous cavern troll wouldn’t dare to use
Lazy as usual, he didn’t care about the slaves who had been given the hard labour to carry his fat and royal person.
Soon, he will learn in a tragic way, that although he is a master, he still be the slave of his destiny.

Hope that you would like the story.
I 'll may add a castle in the background, and if I have time for it.
The slaves will all have the same face, cause slaves are not really important, aren't they?

03 March 2005, 03:14 PM
Good luck :)

03 March 2005, 06:14 PM (

The fall of the king

Once upon a time, a king has to flee his kingdom attacked by the enemy.
He took a road that the most courageous cavern troll wouldn’t dare to use
Lazy as usual, he didn’t care about the slaves who had been given the hard labour to carry his fat and royal person.
Soon, he will learn in a tragic way, that although he is a master, he still be the slave of his destiny.

Hope that you would like the story.
I 'll may add a castle in the background, and if I have time for it.
The slaves will all have the same face, cause slaves are not really important, aren't they?

Thank you Reiv

03 March 2005, 06:21 PM
Looks great! :thumbsup:

Perhaps if the frame was extended a bit more to the right (to show more of the dropoff and deep background) the composition may be more dynamic.

03 March 2005, 03:38 AM
Thanks for your reply GraphicDragon,

I think you're right. I will work on it.
I have also planed to add a castle and some others details (only if I have time), but for now I will procede step by step and try to work on the character design.
So next update, should be a model sheet of the king or the slaves.


03 March 2005, 07:39 AM
great concept. love the characters design :thumbsup:

03 March 2005, 07:50 AM
yes, the chars are very funny. i love the concept. maybe you try a more dramatic komposition... :thumbsup:

03 March 2005, 11:01 AM
Heya ninox, great concept, cool and funny characters:thumbsup:

I think there should be a row of slaves in the back carrying the fat guy cause right now it would be impossible not to tip over backwards since most of the fat guy's bodyweight is leaning backwards.

Good luck and have fun!

03 March 2005, 11:39 AM
He he, this one's going to be very interesting. Good luck man.

03 March 2005, 02:09 PM
Very interesting. I like idea, and sketch.

03 March 2005, 03:51 PM
Hahaha, that's so funny! You got my attention :)

03 March 2005, 04:03 PM
This one is coool :scream:
Yougot a great idea with great characters, i agree with the point that the action should be more advanced in the time, at the beginning of the fall...

Good luck !

03 March 2005, 04:34 PM
This is nice, I liked the idea.

Good luck :)

03 March 2005, 06:01 PM

All my encouragement for new challenge Good starting
Good luck

03 March 2005, 06:39 PM
crazy idea, it will be funny !!
good luck ;)

ca peut etre bien tordant comme idée ;)

03 March 2005, 06:41 PM
very good concept, very funny, i wait the next step:thumbsup:

03 March 2005, 06:44 PM
Funny as hell, subscribing and good luck!

03 March 2005, 06:49 PM
héhé bien marrant ça! j'espere que tu arrivera bien a retranscrire un aspect comic dans ta scène ;)

Very funny!

03 March 2005, 11:38 PM
Haha , funny concept , i like it a lot! :bounce:
Suis pas sur pour le cadrage par contre , pas super dynamique

03 March 2005, 11:59 AM
smaddl, CarlWahl,, coCoKNIght, eYadNesS, Tranchefeux, pitiwazou, MDN67, Kid Mesh, Ludal >thank you for your comments.:scream:

Rudeone> Yes, you're right, but I am not good engouh to draw such details. I'll do it in 3d, that's easier.:shrug:

mac_andre, Goul > yes you are right, mates. I'll try to find a different angle or may be just follow GraphicDragon 's advice.:)

cipher> thank for your comment. I think i will keep the action at this point, cause it allowed me to show the various feelings of every characters. In a more advanced time, they all would have the same feelings (fear to fall and die). :rolleyes:

Ludal > I'll try.:)

03 March 2005, 12:02 PM
I can't wait to see your sketch 3d, it will very nice :D

03 March 2005, 12:02 PM (

I have finished the head design of the king. I will know work on his body.

03 March 2005, 12:12 PM
lol.... i love the hairy armpits... (thats not a fetish or anything)..... i'll get my coat

03 March 2005, 12:20 PM
Hahaha what the hell man, sorry but I cant help but laugh everytime I see that king cause he just has that silly look to him. You've really brought out his character within your style which is very well done.
He looks like he is going to be a blast to model, cant wait to see this funny guy in 3D...keep it up!

03 March 2005, 01:43 PM
Best wishes for you Ninox... your story was very funny... really. Humoristic sense was very important... continue like that :thumbsup:

03 March 2005, 01:47 PM
A sacred work already! :thumbsup:
cheers to you
Continue like that! :eek:

03 March 2005, 01:43 PM
eYadNes > I hope, it will. Anyway, I'll do my best.

eddieellis > hum... so you love hairy ampits, well,nobody 's perfect; just kidding, thank you for your comment.

Kid Mesh > Happy to see you like his silly look. It will be hard to model but I'll do my best to have a 3d model that is looking like the 2D version.

Lemog,flaeticia > thanks a lot.

03 March 2005, 01:53 PM (

This a front view of my king's body. I am working on the profil now. So,the next should come very soon.

03 March 2005, 02:08 PM
Wow man, if you are as methodical and technical with your pre-viz then I cant wait to see this model :thumbsup:. Top notch stuff, you defintely know where your going!

03 March 2005, 03:07 PM
Yup that's right ! Very nice to see your character study, you even already put the bones and all :D:thumbsup:

Everybody should learn from you, Keep it up !:buttrock:

03 March 2005, 03:16 PM
Great sketches!!! It seems it will be a great caricature in 3d!!!

03 March 2005, 04:44 PM
yeah all my encouragement for you Ninox!
nice idea nice character :thumbsup:
Good luck :buttrock:

03 March 2005, 04:48 PM
wow wonderful concept and great sketch... :applause:

03 March 2005, 09:00 AM
Kid Mesh > I am trying to do things step by step, in order to avoid the waste of time. Thanks for your comment.;)

cipher > thank you for those kind words.:)

J++ Dragon > thank, I'll do my best.:)

collings > happy to see you in the party, thanks for your comment :thumbsup:

jddog > thanks :)

03 March 2005, 09:02 AM (

This the profil view of my king\'s body. I can start now the modelling. I will start to model the face first.
I will do the design of the slaves, once I\'ll finish my king.

03 March 2005, 09:22 AM
Hahahaha... funny idea! I hope you finish it because can be a great piece :)


03 March 2005, 10:11 AM
I simply love the concept and the way you have presented it.
It'll be interesting to see how this develops.
Best of luck!
My Entry(3D) (

03 March 2005, 10:22 AM
Hey mate, you certainly have a talent for modelling sheets. i'm looking forward to seeing more

03 March 2005, 11:01 AM
Good concept. Comedy is far too underestimated here so this is a nice suprice :) poor, poor servant and soon that grapefruit eating maharadja will recieve his paycheck for sure ;)

Good luck!

03 March 2005, 08:16 PM
Looking good man, what modeling style are you going to use to create him? Only reason I asked is because of all the different profiles you drew. Looking forward to some modeling though :thumbsup:

03 March 2005, 08:53 AM
I like it so far ! Good to have discover this thread ! I suscribe !:thumbsup:
Go on to the modeling step ! gogogogo !:bounce:

03 March 2005, 09:10 AM
Antropus > I hope so, thanks

abz, eddieellis > Thank you guys

ElFuego > hehe, you 're right, mate

Kid Mesh > For the body, I'll use tne box modeling technic, and for the head it will be simply, extrude edges.

scootermaya > thank you for your comment. I'll update in a few minutes.

03 March 2005, 09:12 AM (

I have stardted to model the face of the king. The main shape is already
done, but I still have to work some more on it.

03 March 2005, 09:53 AM
I found you.........And happy to have done so........very fun and well done sketch,and concept......I like the humor and set up very much....just my cup of tea.......:thumbsup:

The modeling is off to a nice start.......I will be watching for your progress Louise......And "Bonne Chance"......:thumbsup:

03 March 2005, 10:00 AM
• Lol, I like the style, and your modelling is great, but the fat king looks a bit sad....:cry:

03 March 2005, 11:37 AM
Hahahaha... I like this guy... sad ? maybe, but very funny no ? and only for that, I'm okay with this look...
I'm waiting impatiently the body, I sure that will be a piece of choice... :thumbsup:

03 March 2005, 11:40 AM
Wow ninox, your polyflow is excellent and I see why you spent so much time on your concept art, it looks EXACTLY like it. Very well done my friend very well done.

03 March 2005, 02:16 PM
promise wonderful work :wip: I like the way of the figure come out and the great style :applause:

03 March 2005, 03:21 PM
Nice egdeloops you got there. The concept looks great...had a real good laugh....guess the bored guy on the left will have a lighter burden soon :thumbsup:

03 March 2005, 07:13 PM
great entry! :thumbsup:

bonne chance a toi

03 March 2005, 08:46 AM
Hey cool head modeling, exactly the spirit of the sketch, keep it up, your entry will be cool :thumbsup:

03 March 2005, 08:49 AM
yeah !! i like the idea !!
the modeling of the head is cool !! like it !
maybe a little "angular"...
Good work !! and good luck !! it seems to be an ambicious project ...

03 March 2005, 10:43 AM
amazing face :) , looks just like on the sketch :thumbsup:

04 April 2005, 07:25 PM
:bounce: Again a great character design But that not suprise me from you :thumbsup:

Great face modeling too :buttrock:

04 April 2005, 10:47 PM
Cartoon caracters!
Very good!..I like the masters face very much..

My servant:

04 April 2005, 05:34 AM
No update here ? :sad:

04 April 2005, 12:05 PM
Virtuoso> LOL...My first name is Patrick and not Louise, huhuhu.. but that's fine for me, it's given me a good laugh. Anyway, thanks for your reply.

Climax> the king looks sad on the 3d model but sure he isn't, he 's just a lazy fat guy who will have what he deserves.

3dRaven> huhuh, you well guessed, thanks for your comment

Fa7> yes you right the modeling is a little angular, but once I'll find the final pose for the character, I'll add enough edges to smooth it more

Kid Mesh, jddog, Dezz, cipher, Goul , collings, Gáll Attila> Thank you very much, guys.

Lemog> I've been really busy those last days but, I have started to model the body and almost finished it. So an update will come very soon... In a few minutes actually:D

04 April 2005, 12:12 PM (

Well, I said earlier, the body is almost finished, but I still have to do the hands and work more on some parts.

04 April 2005, 12:14 PM
OOps I've just noticed the image is too much compressed, sorry for that:shrug:

04 April 2005, 12:27 PM
he is sweet. looking forward to see him up on his seat with the great fat folds and hary armpit. keep updating :)

04 April 2005, 12:28 PM
yes... a bit compressed... but is sufficient to understand his physionomy... well done mate... I like his design... the pussaha agree me, so funny... maybe the belly don't fall enough... his very fat... there's no muscles in is belly... no ? en tout cas, j'me marre bien en le regardant... bravo :applause:

04 April 2005, 01:16 PM
I like your concept ! :thumbsup: It's a very funny one !:) ... Like your chararcter design too ! Very good idea ! Nice 3D modeling to !... :bounce:

J'aime beaucoup ton idée et je trouve ça vraiment très drôle, le Roi à une sacré bouille ! Bravo ! :thumbsup:

04 April 2005, 03:31 PM
Bon début , l'idée est interessante .

Bon courage :)

04 April 2005, 07:28 PM
Sumo..... great start dude, looking forward for more

04 April 2005, 07:29 PM
Very cool, freakish king. No crits yet. Keep at it.

04 April 2005, 08:19 PM
Hi ninox, You've injected a good sense of gravity to his flab...Well done and keep it up:thumbsup:

04 April 2005, 08:50 PM
Hey cool the body ! Good proportions and clean model, keep it coming :thumbsup:

04 April 2005, 03:29 AM
Mr.Waka, Falfa, eddieellis, ||) |V| |^|, DaddyMack, cipher > thank you guys.:thumbsup:

smaddl > Thanks for your comment. I have to do a texture for him first and do the rigging also. after that, I'll put him on his seat with his hairy armpit of course.:)

Lemog > I'll will make his belly fall more when he will be on his seat. thanks buddy:)

New up in few minutes......

04 April 2005, 03:31 AM (

New update with a sketch of the slave's head. I'll do the sketch of the body and I will begin to model it. I am still working on the king... so more up should come soon.

04 April 2005, 04:42 AM
great sketch :thumbsup: keep updating

04 April 2005, 05:13 AM
Just stop by to say I like your concept sketchs they are coming along fine and I look forward to seeing your update on this... keep up the great work.:scream:

handsonfire <- 3d master and servant

04 April 2005, 05:35 AM
Mouarf... good design for this servant's face... I imagine yet his body with the same design... courage gars, tu tiens le bon bout... :thumbsup:

04 April 2005, 07:28 AM
Great face sketch :thumbsup: looking for more up-dates... :wip:

04 April 2005, 06:24 AM
Thank you guys.
I am about to finish the slave's head. so I will update very soon.
I have also started to model the cliff and draw some stketches for the king seat.
stay tuned :)

04 April 2005, 07:01 AM
Ok Patrick, that's pretty cool if some updates comes nearly :beer:

04 April 2005, 08:02 AM
Thanks Laurent, I have finished the head, just have to put them together in 'Toshop, and I' ll update.

04 April 2005, 08:25 AM (

Now I've finished the head, I'll do the body. I 'll also do some morph target for the head cause, I'll duplicate this one to make the others.

04 April 2005, 05:58 PM
like the concept. keep it up!

04 April 2005, 07:11 PM
very very nice :thumbsup:

04 April 2005, 06:26 AM
Terribly near of your concept sketch... than, perfect... la suite gars... I love his face... very expressive, the same glance as an oyster... :D :applause:

04 April 2005, 07:21 AM
You captured that expression exceptionally well ninox:thumbsup: H looks like he's long since given up hope...

Keep it coming man

04 April 2005, 11:29 AM
very expressive character. Like it.

04 April 2005, 08:28 PM
Excellent work converting that sketch to 3D... Keep at it.

05 May 2005, 04:10 AM
Excellent work

05 May 2005, 04:11 AM
Excellent work :thumbsup:

05 May 2005, 02:30 PM
very funny face, i like it, good work i wait the texturing

05 May 2005, 05:11 AM
I'm waiting... and... I'm waiting...

Where are updates man ? :scream: Deadline is near now... I hope you find time to continue your project and for sure, to finish... keep it up dude :thumbsup:

05 May 2005, 07:40 PM (

This is the model sheet of the slave.

05 May 2005, 07:43 PM (

and the modeling of the slave. ;)

05 May 2005, 07:45 PM (, smaddl, DaddyMack, authentic, ||) |V| |^|, priyan_k, MDN67 > thanks a lot guys. ;)
Lemog > Sorry for the lack of updates, but it is really hard for me to find some spare time to work on this challenge. I really hope to finish this on time.....thank you for support.

The modeling is almost finish as you can see. my slaves are rigged so i can give them the pose i want. I will add some slaves in the background just like i did on the first concept sketch. By the way I will try to stay as close as possible of the concept sktech. If I have time I will also add some rocks and grasses because it is a bit empty.

05 May 2005, 09:16 PM
Hey ninox... Looks great mate:thumbsup: You better run to that line , it's coming up fast dude;)

05 May 2005, 01:31 AM
ahahahh very funny..
waiting to see the texturess !
c ya !

05 May 2005, 12:29 AM (

I am running against time and really hope to finish this on time. I have finished with the modeling though it needs more work but as you know the deadline is more than close now... so I have to speed up.

DaddyMack,gra7 > thank you guys.;)

05 May 2005, 05:12 AM (

Here is the texture of the background....

05 May 2005, 08:26 AM
hey nice concept. A bit of a twist on the norm. Like the 'king' although i am a bit dissapointed that the salves don't look like the orignal sketch, but at the same time perhaps they are more appropriate. Hope you get it all done in time and good luck.

05 May 2005, 08:45 AM
I'm very glad to see the continuation... and nearly the end of your creation... I can't wait more... post man... post :thumbsup: that's all good for me...

05 May 2005, 11:44 AM (

The fall of the king

Once upon a time, a king has to flee his kingdom attacked by the enemy.
He took a road that the most courageous cavern troll wouldn’t dare to use
Lazy as usual, he didn’t care about the slaves who had been given the hard labour to carry his fat and royal person.
Soon, he will learn in a tragic way, that although he is a master, he still be the slave of his destiny.

05 May 2005, 01:07 PM
Here it is, the challenge is closed now. I didn't have the time as you know to finish my image poperly but I think I gonna work on this during my spare time and show you I hope very soon a much better image with a good lightning and effects....

I would like to thanks : reiv,GraphicDragon,smaddl, mac_andre, Rudeone, CarlWahl,, coCoKNIght, cipher,eYadNesS, Tranchefeux, pitiwazou, MDN67, Kid Mesh, Ludal, Goul, eddieellis, Lemog( the french alien ;)), flaeticia, collings, jddog, Antropus, abz, ElFuego, scootermaya, Virtuoso, Climax , 3dRaven, Dezz, Fa7, Gáll Attila, Mr.Waka, Falfa, ||) |V| |^|, DaddyMack, hands0nfire,, authentic, priyan_k, gra7 and cmp, for having encouraged me. Thanks a lot guys.

I am looking forward for the next challenge and this time I'll do my best to finish it on time.

See U.

05 May 2005, 01:14 PM
Congrats to trying to finish... not always easy to find necessary spare time... I understant.. And I can assure you that your project is so funny and intresting, you must finish it and post soon your image done... go mate and see you certainly in the next challenge ? then... I hope :thumbsup:

The French Alien... :scream:

05 May 2005, 01:21 PM
Hey again ninox, Congratulations on going final! You've got a great Image mate! I really dig the 'last word always goes unspoken' aspect of it, we can all tell where this is going.... Well done!

05 May 2005, 02:37 PM
Cool characters and really lover you colours, well done man. great work. Congrates on the final and the best of luck.

05 May 2005, 04:12 PM
Excellent ! But I already said it to U !
See U in the next challenge or on 3dvf ! :thumbsup:

05 May 2005, 04:33 PM
:bounce: hahah lol is really an excellent entry :thumbsup: that make me smile and is so funny. Congrats for your entry :applause:

05 May 2005, 05:22 PM

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05 May 2005, 05:41 PM
i don't know how i missed this thread before. What a funny and well executed image. Great work :thumbsup:

05 May 2005, 05:55 PM

nice impressions on the servants faces... greate image you created there!!! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

05 May 2005, 06:07 PM
Really funny situation you got there, really cool, congrats with your final entry !


05 May 2005, 03:21 AM
Great job ninox! :thumbsup:

I know you didn't have the time to do all you wanted but I think your final looks just right. The colors and style really work. You nailed the narrative requirement because the story and message is very clear in the image. You should consider your entry a success!

I look forward to seeing what you come up with in the next challenge.

05 May 2005, 10:28 AM
WOW!! didn't see your last updates till now. excellent and funny image. great execution :applause:
good luck :thumbsup:

05 May 2005, 11:56 AM
Hey there, very cool work, awesome job on the characters! :applause: Best of luck to you!


05 May 2005, 12:39 PM
Hey Ninox,
Congrats on finishing :thumbsup: . You have a great image , I like the faces on the front slaves carrying the king. Great job on this.

05 May 2005, 02:08 PM
Haha really cool image ninox ! :scream:

Glad to see this finished, it's a really fun idea...i wish you the best for the next now :bounce:

Hope to see you and your works in the next challenge mate, Good luck ! :buttrock:

05 May 2005, 04:45 PM
Muy gracioso, pero muy cruel :)

Excelente :thumbsup:

05 May 2005, 04:49 PM
Thank you all for your nice comments. :D

I am sorry but I am a bit busy those days. so I'll visite your threads and give you replies may be this week-end, anyway ASAP.

I have also notice my image wasn't selected for the final vote, and I am not so much disappointed about that because I haven't finish it, so....

Next challenge, I 'll do my best to submit all the milestones and of course give a good final image.

Good luck to all the others challengers 2d and 3d, you guys have done great. ;):buttrock:
See you all soon ;)

05 May 2005, 06:24 PM
Great work here... i like the expressions :)


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