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03-22-2005, 01:06 AM
Bernardo Delgado Virgen has entered the Master and Servant 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=5656)

Latest Update: Final Image: finally final
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115960909_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115960909_large.jpg)

here it is, the final image, hope to have better luck in the voting than with the comments haha

03-22-2005, 01:08 AM
Good luck, Bernardo; hope to see some amazing work from you. :)

03-22-2005, 01:10 AM
thanks pal lets see wut this challenge brings :thumbsup:

03-22-2005, 08:02 AM
• Bienvenido a bordo, Good luck pal!

03-22-2005, 03:31 PM
haha, thanks pal, I'll post some scketches in a while, good luck to u 2 :thumbsup:

03-23-2005, 10:01 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1111615313_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1111615313_large.jpg)

first concept sketch, I'm trying to do something stylish , hope u like it

03-24-2005, 09:02 AM

nice to see you again... good luck...

03-26-2005, 02:21 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1111803687_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1111803687_large.jpg)

this is a poster I'll use in a part of the scene to express that the 2 characters are a kind of criminals

03-27-2005, 02:56 AM
Kool sketches Bernardo!

Good to see you here.

Keep em comin!


03-27-2005, 02:59 AM
haha really cool sketches...its like 2 dumb crooks...but they are serious ones...gj

03-27-2005, 03:08 AM
thanks pals, these characters are based in a draw I made to my girlfrinend 2 months ago, I love Tim Burton's style, but I wanna do some more urban stylish. Here's the draw. I'll post some advances in a while, nice to see u here too pals :)


03-27-2005, 04:01 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1111896105_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1111896105_large.jpg)

I'm doing first the enviroment, a simble but nice enviroment to test the lighting in the scene. I used final render as always. I'll add some dirt maps and more elements in the scene, the character here is just to test lighting, that'll not be the pose. I hope u like it =)

03-27-2005, 04:25 AM
funny stuff Bernardo. excellent lighting...nice to see you back. keep on!

03-27-2005, 04:33 AM
Hola Bernardo
i really wonder why your work didn't get more attention yet, you'r doin a great work here. best luck and wish you loadsa fun. :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

03-27-2005, 04:39 AM
That looks great man , really nice lighting!

03-28-2005, 06:24 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1111991054_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1111991054_large.jpg)

well I've been doing this face of the character, hope u like it, I've been having some issues with hair haha

03-28-2005, 06:33 AM
Excelente trabajo hasta ahora Bernardo! :thumbsup:

Excellent work so far Bernardo! :thumbsup:

Mucha suerte compaņero! :)

Best of luck mate! :)

03-28-2005, 06:43 AM
I agree with the others here. You are doing some great work. I can't wait to see you start to model the Servant.

03-28-2005, 06:45 AM
Weeeeeee ..Bernardo is in this...hi friend ....have fun....

Subscribed :bounce:

03-28-2005, 06:54 AM
nice man , lovely style

03-28-2005, 03:23 PM
thanks for the coments guys :thumbsup:, it'll ve kind of hard as I dont really have experience with characters, but I'll do my efforts. =). Hi Dimitris great job u're doing over here too, lets see wut happens in this challenge :eek: I guess it'll be really hard, I see antropus and Koryh over there haha :D

03-29-2005, 04:35 PM
que onda bernardo oye , muy padre ! me encanta la iluminacion vamos a ver como queda

03-29-2005, 04:52 PM
Thanks Artman I'll post some advances in a moment:thumbsup:

03-29-2005, 05:35 PM
nice update Ber...the hair looks fine since they are bit cratoony type of character. just go on. :thumbsup:

03-29-2005, 11:16 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1112138165_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1112138165_large.jpg)

well I keep modeling the 1š character in my spare time, its just the model of the body, the textures of course will be changed haha I put those ones just for testing, as u see I decided to change the pose.

The story will be about 2 murderers that are careless , they have just killed a person that will be hanging out of the window and they are outside waiting for a taxy like if nothing had happened

--------sorr, bad english ahahha

03-29-2005, 11:23 PM
wow bernardo.. great model and i love the background..

good luck brother.. waiting to see more !!
c ya !

03-29-2005, 11:34 PM
Nice, can't wait to see the body 8-)

04-17-2005, 02:32 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1113705127_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1113705127_large.jpg)

well today finally I could advance a few , specially in the face. I'll change the general composition as a new idea came to my mind, I also made some small "urban" sneakers =)

04-17-2005, 08:01 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1113768108_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1113768108_large.jpg)

well, a little update, I worked a bit in the shader and added some hair

05-03-2005, 06:30 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115145009_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115145009_large.jpg)

well I havent enought time yet to continue quickly but here are some advances in the main character, the hands look weird but I'll change that later

05-04-2005, 10:48 AM
I like very much the proportions and design of your character. Well done.:scream:

05-06-2005, 06:51 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115405502_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115405502_large.jpg)

fially this character is done,now Im doing the 2š character (servant), I\'ll post some advances really soon.

05-06-2005, 06:53 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115405615_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115405615_large.jpg)

here are some advances of the 2š character,hope u like it

05-06-2005, 08:23 PM
hey bernardo .. love your past stuff so really curious to see where this goes

great environment you got ... and characters are shaping up really cool :thumbsup:

05-07-2005, 03:28 AM
thanks pals I'm making things fast now haha, deadline is really close :S haha good luck to ya :thumbsup:

05-08-2005, 05:28 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115530087_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115530087_large.jpg)

I've done some updates to this character, I think its finished, but the hair will be like in a dry red color. Now I've to work more in the enviroment. hope u like it

05-08-2005, 08:16 AM
Don't know how I missed this one. Very nice character design and creation! Only thing that gets me about your last character is that his ear looks a little flat. May just be the camera angle. Looking forward to this one coming together. :thumbsup:

05-09-2005, 12:42 PM
I really like the atmosphere in the picture.

05-11-2005, 02:50 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115823025_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115823025_large.jpg)

I'm almost finished, here are some advances of the composition with the enviroment, I'll add more elements for the final image

05-12-2005, 04:33 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115872403_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115872403_large.jpg)

aaaa!! I dont know if I shall make this one the final, I dont know if I shall add something, hope to have some suggestions

05-12-2005, 08:05 AM
I really like your style. great design, lighting. My only crit would be that your character are a little lost in the bg. We don't see them enough, to my thought.

AAnyway great picture :thumbsup:

05-12-2005, 01:56 PM
thanks authentic I'll try to fix this, I've noticed before and I added some illumination to the wall, but I see the issue hasnt gone completely

05-13-2005, 01:06 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115946400_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115946400_large.jpg)

well I added a closer body, hope to dont disturb anyone :S , greetings and I hope to receive some opinions

05-13-2005, 01:11 AM
the idea is about 2 weird guys ( the master & servant) that feed from hands hahha.. , so they go "shopping" to the closest town, those things in the bag are fingers.. . The picture will be called "shopping day"

05-13-2005, 05:08 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115960909_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5656/5656_1115960909_large.jpg)

here it is, the final image, hope to have better luck in the voting than with the comments haha

05-13-2005, 07:12 AM
A very good image mate!!!:thumbsup:
I love the style and colors, maybe the subject is too cruel...maybe:rolleyes:

05-13-2005, 01:58 PM
hahaha, hey clon, estas bien sicotico!, pero me late, dado el tema, hubiera usado mucha mas sangre, muerte y destruccion, (par que les guste al los locos de aqui) pero esta muy bien,

me agrada tu estilo, obscuro y detallado, lastima que algunas entradas aqui tengan toda la atencion y no posteen en trabajos de los demas, ya que tu thread y el mio, se quedaron casi vacios. ya ni modos..

ok clon, suerte en la votaciones!!

05-13-2005, 02:23 PM
Hi Bernardo,

I donīt know how could I miss your topic ... :sad:

I realy like you image. I just missed the chain that hold the servant, because in the final image, is not to much clear the relation between then. We see some dead people and a deformed kid in background, there is no easy to understand the kid is the servant .... maybe he could be just another victim ... With the chain, the relation could be more clear ... :thumbsup:

And I just understand the "Shopping Day" after read your explain ... maybe more blood in the bag, or blood droping to the ground, could be good :)

05-13-2005, 03:14 PM
thanks for the coments guys, well I tought that if I add more blood it could look more sadic than artistic haha .

About the chain uhm I was going to put it, but maybe it looked more as Master and slave besides master and servant, the idea of the servant back there is to make it see like he's watching for enemies to take care of the master. Like a life keeper or something like that haha, but maybe its an idea hard do express in a single picture. :)

05-13-2005, 03:28 PM
thanks for the coments guys, well I tought that if I add more blood it could look more sadic than artistic haha .

About the chain uhm I was going to put it, but maybe it looked more as Master and slave besides master and servant, the idea of the servant back there is to make it see like he's watching for enemies to take care of the master. Like a life keeper or something like that haha, but maybe its an idea hard do express in a single picture. :)

Yeah I think you could be right ... could look more master and slave than master and servant ... but and if you make the servant carry a lot of bags, or you can put a lot of bags in a lill car and make the kid carry it ... I donīt know ... just a idea ... Still have more a few days to test ... :thumbsup:

And about the blood, yes could look more sadic, I donīt know, but in my vision could work better, because we will understand what they are "buying" ... :scream:

05-13-2005, 03:29 PM
Bernardo, great image, congratulations

05-13-2005, 04:29 PM
JR.BRAZ: thanks, I think those bags in the servant would look good, now I've 2 issues, the picture's aviable space and that I've already uploaded the final Tiff to the FTP.

Does someone knows if u can submit more than 1 tiff in the ftp?

05-14-2005, 03:39 PM
well I guess Im screwed ahaha, anyway I like the picture as it its :), hope to have good luck in the voting process, because with the posts :sad: sadly the posts that recive more posts, are those that already have more posts ahaha

05-14-2005, 07:31 PM
Interesting entry, Bernardo. I don't quite see the Master/Servant relationship in the image, but it's got loads of style to it (very Burton-like style to it).

Best of luck. :)

05-18-2005, 05:12 PM
well, challenge ends today, good luck to everyone! I'll cross my fingers hahah:D good luck! nice job to everyone!:buttrock::deal:

05-26-2005, 03:38 PM
congrats on your great final! love your character designs. best luck!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

05-27-2005, 03:43 AM
thanks pal, I loved your egypcian like entry, anyway I hope to have better luck in this challenge than in te previous one. :)

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