View Full Version : Original: Shiden and the Word

02 February 2005, 02:27 AM
Fist off, it's a *HE*! This is a starting drawing of a new coloring I'm planning to work on. Please leave crits if you think something needs to be fixed~

The main focus about this image is to not judge others, and how everyone is redeemable. I've got a few more things in it, but I won't reveal them until I complete the painting.

Scroll down to see the progress.

02 February 2005, 03:14 AM
Looking awesome so far. Your sketch has great potential. No crits yet. Oh, and I love the idea behind it.

02 February 2005, 03:18 AM
hie,everythings seems to be fine,just i'dprefer it without the cheek lines..anticipate for the next update;)

02 February 2005, 04:38 AM

02 February 2005, 12:50 AM
Thanks for your input you two.... just wish more people would give their opinion... dunno if it sucks completely or if it's ok so far. I'll start painting it when I get a commission done here soon.

02 February 2005, 01:11 AM
A little inspired by Final Fantasy 7's Cloud? I can see some resemblance.
And the hair sticking up reminds me of a certain scene from 'There's something about Mary' :D

It looks pretty cool, but IMO there's something weird with the arm holding the book, it looks a little out of proportion. Maybe you should rotate the lower-arm slightly to the left and move it a little up cause I think his upper-arm could be to long.

Other than that, like I said, pretty cool

02 February 2005, 03:53 AM
The hair kinda reminds of "There's Something About Mary"

02 February 2005, 04:57 PM
something about mary... lol.

well the right fore arm is too long it looks like. other than that, no crits.

02 February 2005, 12:19 PM
I shortened up his forearm a bit.

Don't mind the biege BG; just something I do for myself to look at colors.

02 February 2005, 06:30 PM
its better, but i think the non-forearm part of the arm (bicep part) is a tad long also

again, its an easy fix

02 February 2005, 10:45 PM
Thanks for the input hjalmar :)

Instead of posting another picture, I just edited the above image.

Anyone else?

02 February 2005, 01:37 AM
thats lookin a lot better:D time for details i think

02 February 2005, 07:59 AM
I like the character design
looks evil, so evil he willcast deamons on de and smite all that oppose
lol, yeah im a freak

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