02 February 2005, 01:26 AM
Legs seem a bit short.
The torso portion between the top of her pelvis and the bottom of her ribs seems a bit flimsy, like she could twist and twist like a wrapper.
The collar bone seems like its descending over her shoulder, like its the strap of a back pack or something.
You have got a good idea brewing. Just a few adjustments and the sketch will be solid and ready to color.
02 February 2006, 02:00 AM
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