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02 February 2005, 02:57 PM
i dont have a name for it :sad:

need comments, critics and tips :thumbsup:

02 February 2005, 03:42 PM
One major flaw: with such a redish lighting, the tree and leafs shouldnt be green, they should have a mixt of green / orange. Try it and it will look way more natural!

02 February 2005, 08:07 PM
update, maybe the final one...
its the color good now?

02 February 2005, 08:23 PM
its better but I would remove the lens flare effect and maybe make the part of the tree that arent directly hit by the light much darker.

There seems to also be a perspective problem with the trunk and the folliage but it might just be me :-S

btw, I really like the new clouds!!!

02 February 2005, 10:07 PM
Mantat, im not working on this draw in home, but, ill search for some references to get the trunk to look better.
and ill remove the lens flare effect, and look for some references for the sky :)
tomorrow morning when i go to work ill do the adjusts
God bless you all :thumbsup:

02 February 2005, 12:31 AM
The perspective problem has occurred because of the position of the sun. The reflections of light on the water are in a triangle shape. Therefore the Sun should be near the centre of the pic, opposite the panicle of the reflection.

Nice work though. Quite pleasant.

02 February 2005, 12:37 AM
psycadelic, friend! :D

um abraço, não desistas nunca de melhorar.

02 February 2005, 02:53 PM
update ->
what do you think about it now?

God bless you all

02 February 2005, 02:42 PM
another update
new clouds and tried to fix the tree ->

need more Comments and Critics...
God bless you all

02 February 2005, 03:04 PM
I think the leaves are a bit too redish but its a personal taste.

I think you can call it done!

02 February 2005, 03:23 PM
yes, it was a try of adding 'curves' to the image (exept the sky), but now i seen that the water is too much "strong", so, ill remove the curves, and give a better detail to the tree and maybe, if no1 give me a better idea, call it done :p

im rly exited with this image, thats my first image finished :bounce:

cya friends,
God bless you all
and thanks for the tips/comments/critics! :thumbsup:

02 February 2005, 09:29 PM
so here is the update (fixed some clouds, make the tree less redish, some more detailing on foliage)

maybe the final image.

cya friends :)
God bless you all
and Jesus is the lord! :thumbsup:

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