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02 February 2005, 01:23 PM
I started her a while back and I'm @ it again. Any helpfull c&c towards composition and color, layout whatever would be highly appreciated. :D

02 February 2005, 02:01 PM
the color theme is good, her skin shadows and lights need to be obvious more, the compostion is great! cant comment too much, it's a WIP, good work till now, keep it up.

02 February 2005, 05:55 PM
looks good so far, face is nice. maybe her neck's a bit thick? and the blue from the window is too close to the colour of her dress. if you wanted it to echo the colour, i think you should move them apart so they dont touch.

02 February 2005, 11:08 PM
Ok, here is another update. I took some of your commnets to heart and I hope I can get more feedback to help me along my way.

02 February 2005, 01:18 PM
the window works much better for me now
my problem now is the perspective on the window sill, it is not matching the shelf (the bottom of the vase with flowers is totally flat, but we can see depth on the area with candles

great work

02 February 2005, 03:11 PM
i like it too, so far. try tu push up contrasts.. i'd make it a little less flat and a little more dramatic. expecially under the head and beyond her.

02 February 2005, 03:16 PM
I think the window is problematic now, it's the strongest focal point of the image. It's just so clearly different colour-wise from the rest, and the bright horizon also does it.

02 February 2005, 03:32 PM
maybe adding a texture to the upper side of the wall?
good work :applause:
God bless you all

02 February 2005, 03:34 PM
ah! and the windows are taking much attetion on it, and i think she needs to be the "center" of the scene.. :)
God bless you all :D

02 February 2005, 03:56 PM
A little more for this update.

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