02 February 2005, 01:14 AM
Hopefully your friend can read the comments.
Very nice work so far. I really like the design and render of the character.
My only two comments would be:
- the yellow area in the lower left is a bit amorphous. I'm guessing it's to provide a basis for the light source, but I think it should be fleshed out so that it represents something (like a fire maybe).
- the environment looks nice, but it's a bit bare. I'd say either crop the image (maybe just crop the right side so the character is on the right side of the image instead of the middle), or fill it in with stuff (maybe some heads on spikes, or some trees in the distance, or even just some mysterious fog that has some vaguely recognizeable shapes in it).
02 February 2006, 02:00 AM
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