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02 February 2005, 10:58 AM
Hello everyone. i'm a beginning beginner :P
here's my first animation, looking for critiques!

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thx for ur attention

02 February 2005, 03:53 PM
first the timing is off, maybe he should bend down first, then put his head on it? And his head goes through the box.. You should also finish it off,, either have him pick up the box.. or slip off and go tumbling backwards.

keep going,, good work

02 February 2005, 08:29 AM
hey Willie,

thx for your critiques! i'm not going to work on this animation ~ I'm playing with ball exercises right now! it's a big mistake for me to skip all these basic practice.

02 February 2005, 12:05 AM
I'd like to see more lower body action. When he walks to the box, he's translating directly over. When he's about to lift the box, I think you should show more bending at the knees and lowering of his body. Just my 2 cents.

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