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02 February 2005, 09:24 AM
Hey all,
here's one of my animation from my last animation class :bounce:

the model was provided from the class...
critique are more than welcome ( so next time it'll be better :wise:)


02 February 2005, 11:50 AM

nice acting but I think not enough Cartoon....


02 February 2005, 07:30 PM
thanks.. but hmmm.. what do you mean by not enough cartoon?

02 February 2005, 07:51 PM
good work!

I think there should be more anticipation before the orange guy kicks the dude from the back, both in timing and action, also the kick seems to pop a bit and could use more force, you know, exaggeration.

my two cents :)

02 February 2005, 08:31 PM
thanks for the comment,

02 February 2005, 11:50 PM
Great job!! Keep up the good work. This is my favorite piece of yours!!! Very funny.:thumbsup:


02 February 2005, 04:21 AM
two parts I love the most are when the yellow guy leans forward to get up onto the hatch ledge and when he tries to keep his ballance.. well done!

the only part I would focus on, is to find another solution to how the orange guy kicks him in. maybe he needs to be closer.

Oh and if the orange peered down into the hole to give the viewer foresight into the dark hole..

02 February 2005, 04:38 AM
thank you for the critique..
yeah .. about the camera.. at that time we're assigned not to change the camera :shrug:
but good point.. :)

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