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02-02-2005, 06:00 AM
I am open for some criticism.:shrug:(Don't mind the upper-lip)
Hi-res version http://www.alfons.devisland.net/sjalvpotratt_1_feb05hires.jpg
02-02-2005, 01:55 PM
Hey funny expression :)
u have to look for the jaw line and the nose looks lil bit straight, add some angle in it. i like the Ear construction, look for the eye construction and direction.
keep up da good work..do more :thumbsup:
02-02-2005, 05:08 PM
Shyamshriram, Thanks for your opinions, I changed the nose and the jaw-line.
What do you mean with "the eye construction and direction."?
Your WIP "Honey with Moon" is great by the way.
02-02-2005, 05:11 PM
I forgot the hi-res link;
02-03-2005, 10:29 AM
Hey now it looks quite well :) the jaw line
the eye construction and direction---> check out the form of the eye and the direction of vision ( i hope i wrote correct ) sorry brother but english is not my first language, hope u understood what im trying to say !
thanx for ur appriciation for my WIP "HONEY WITH MOON" :love:
02-03-2005, 04:13 PM
English isn't my first language either,:).
I am using a mirror as reference so it's hard to see the direction. I gave it a try and I also change the construction, tell me what you think. If you can give me more hands on advise like "the left i needs to come up a bit and the right iris is to small"
02-04-2005, 06:22 PM
02-06-2005, 11:04 PM
those eyes are killer bro.
02-07-2006, 12:00 AM
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