I was hoping for general C&C, and hardcore critiques, paintovers, and comments on the figure to the right. I am having a lot of trouble with him.
Also, I really need some pose ideas for the character who is going to be on the left, a female I think.
Anyways, here it is:
(please forgive the bad scan, my lines are still really light..)
Self crits: Right figure sucks! If you can't tell, his back is to the camera and his arms are folded. (Really need help!)
Center figure is leaning...I hope to fix this with photoshop before I color.
Please help me out, thanks!