It's called "Mouse on a Mission," and it's about this little mouse who wants to become cool and get all the hotties, so he sets out on finding this stuff called "Lookin' Good Liquor."
In terms of a critique, the things I would like for you to look at are the general storyline and my work as a director, such as the way the shots are composed and the timing of certain story elements and such. Even the dialogue. I've heard it can be stronger if there was no dialogue at all. Please let me know what you think if it. Like it, don't like it, what you did/didn't like, what could have been better, confusing parts, etc. Whatever you say will be good, I just want FEEDBACK! Hope everyone enjoys it, THANKS!
However, please don't criticise the animation, modeling/texturing, or the rigging, since those were done by other members of my group, and I can't take credit for that. The animation was tough for my animator because it was his first time animating anything. This was done entirely in Maya.
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Thanks for looking, and enjoy!
please note: people have had trouble getting the movie to load on my site (it partially loads then stops), and i don't know what the problem could be. sometimes they have to refresh the page the keep it loading. if you are having trouble, please let me know on here. thanks.
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