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01 January 2005, 06:30 PM

hey all this is my first post ive been checking out this site for a looong while and theres alot of really good artist. this is a wip that i did last night and i really want some feedback and im open to any critiques. This is a picture a friend of mine wanted me to draw for her. She wanted something a lil more *cough* riske but i like this. tell me whatcha think.

Eternally Mine
01 January 2005, 12:17 AM
It is very interesting. I think maybe a little less pink and more definition to her legs and lower ankle. I am not sure if the ankle issue is because the color just missed a spot or oyu were trying to portray a blemish. I just noticed her elbow needs a curve not an indentation. I think overall you have a wonderful start. Oh I forgot to mention her face is well defined and with some touch up will be beautiful to behold.

01 January 2005, 07:12 AM

Sorry i havent been on for a bit my comp is down. i gotta get a new fan. anyways, Heres the Updated version tell me whatcha think. I added more detail to the figure, Its alot more yellow this time around. All comments welcome and thanx.

01 January 2005, 03:25 PM
HI, pics look good, but I wonder about the resolution of it, it kind of looks like you've got large size and low res on your pics, looks very blocky some places.
The model needs shoulder muscle, and a better, more filling out butt to be believable thou.

01 January 2005, 06:38 PM
Hey Gusgus! Third time I've run into you today :)Colors are too raw, you need some other flesh tinting glazes in there. Right now she has that "pinewood" feel to her. Bring in some blues, greens, and warmer ylw/orange hues. Add some blues and blue/grays to the cloth.

Other wise the rendering has a nice loose style. Feel free to use this to sample from.

02 February 2005, 01:47 PM

Adjusted it more did alot of work on the skin tone and the face. lol for some reason part of me still likes the first one alot more. I think i may need to make the eyes bigger. the face in the first one is shaped exactally how i want this one to be, but i cant reproduce it.Any tips or crits are always apriciated. And much thanx to V_shane, and everyone else for the crits.

02 February 2005, 09:13 AM

This may be my finished product im pretty happy with the result and i think while this was a relatively short piece ive learned a bit im definately going to try and do more. Mostlikely my next WIP that i post here is gonna be sth im doing for my game project.

Again c&c is always welcome please dont be afraid to rip me a new one. I tell ya i dont think theirs a better way to learn than to be chewed out by somebody whos a million times better than yourself.

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