01 January 2005, 10:48 AM
Nice work! You've really captured the drama in these.
I find them a bit lacking in conveying the flow of story / camera etc.
If, for example, that 4th panel is EXTREME CU on the hero's eye, its hard to follow. You might want to abandon the frame a bit. Showing camera movement and composition context by scribbling the connections from one frame to another.
01 January 2006, 08:00 AM
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