12 December 2004, 02:25 PM
Very good stuff here mate, i like it! A suggestion though, i think when he's choking on the grape he should thump his chest and hack a bit before he drops dead. Otherwise nice!
12 December 2004, 06:34 AM
Aluuk - very solid animation!! the only critique I would make is in the timing. it starts off very nicely, but I want to see a *BEAT* after the grape drops into his throat - he chokes a little too suddenly. im expecting it to fall in, he takes time to gulp, then we realize he can't! he grasps at his throat, tries to hiemlich himself, and then another *BEAT* ack, he's dead. the grape popping out in response to his falling down looks very unnatural, maybe after he plops dead, he props back up to cough it out, and then collapses dead again. just some suggestions, don't mind the extra ideas - but the main point is the timing towards the end. it feels rushed towards the end, and some major timing beats would help process it nicely. really solid stuff :) keep up the good work
01 January 2006, 06:00 AM
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