View Full Version : Death

11 November 2004, 05:46 AM
hello there!this is my paiting---- Death
I hope you like it!
use photoshop7.0 :thumbsup:

11 November 2004, 06:08 AM
this is my speedpainting use photoshop7.0
l hope you like it
keep up it :applause:

11 November 2004, 06:15 AM
where is my space image?
plese chick link for looking:shrug:

11 November 2004, 11:06 AM
I'm having problems seeing the images, because Firefox keeps hiding it (saying it contains errors). It's probably because I'm on dial-up. -_-

One thing I had time to notice though, is that the perspective isn't totally consistant. The body of the crucified robot is oriented to the left, while the horizontal bar of the cross appears to be oriented to the right? I would expect the bar of the cross to be thicker towards the right to make the perspective make sense.

11 November 2004, 11:20 AM
Hey there,

I agree with Sunbane, on th perspectif. There more things that "skew" it, for instance the lower jaw on the Agony robot, the other part should be slightly visible above the current endpoint, she also seems to be floating above the ground. If the cross is where it is that is. The other thing that bugs me is that the dead guy/thing seems to try to peer towards the camera, We know it's a robot, poetically it's allright to hide it's face. Maybe you can try putting up a separate layer in photoshop for your guidelines.
Other than that, I think it's really good and dramatic, Il like the color especially and the way you put it all in fire. Keep going man.

11 November 2004, 05:04 PM
cool idea! but i would do some more details to the houses in the background.

11 November 2004, 05:22 PM
thanks all

11 November 2004, 10:00 PM
you certainly have A LOT of talent and the first painting is very creative and well thought not sure i have a problem with the perspective seems to balance well with me

maybe i dont have the art eye :shrug:

12 December 2004, 01:07 AM
Thanks ajay1589 jmBoekestein Sunbane!
Exactitude for you Suggestion !
I'll Check my work more and carefully in future
Thanks :buttrock:

CGTalk Moderation
01 January 2006, 12:00 AM
This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.