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11 November 2004, 11:45 PM
Here is a link to an animated short I am working on, all done in Lightwave & After effects

Some feedback would be appreciated

11 November 2004, 05:36 AM
Not bad!

Pretty cute animation.
Maybe you could put a bit more expression in the modelling of the star. Voiceover was great!

11 November 2004, 07:20 AM
nice story, good characters.. and I like the camera angles and cutting..
animation was generally good, movements etc.. but you could work on to make it more "snappy".. he is an old man, so I understand him being a bit slow on moving about, but it would add a lot to animation to make some of those hand movements and head movements to snap more on to poses. especially when the whipper snapper goes around him and he tries to catch it. when all movements are at same speed, it makes it look "floaty".


11 November 2004, 03:15 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys, I still need to do some more work to it. Especially on the part when he is trying to catch the squirrel. I need to adjust some of the splines & mabe the speed.

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