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08 August 2002, 01:47 AM
Hi guys...any comments? suggestions? find-a-new-carrer remarks?

08 August 2002, 02:38 AM
(isn't this supposed to go in the WIP section? I'm no mod, I don't know)
Looks good!
Maybe add some wrinkels to the forehead, eyes and mouth area.
Keep it up!

08 August 2002, 06:02 PM
It's a good start. I can tell by your post that you're not happy with it, and I think that for the most part it has to do with the fact that the face is too large for the head. If you scale down the face, I think you'll be much happier with it almost immediately.

(See the image attached.)

Aside from that, the thing that stuck out most, to me anyway, was that the lower lip doesn't have the indentation like the upper lip does. It's a smoother curve.

As always, check out drawing books for references on proportions and structure of the features.

Hope this helps.

08 August 2002, 10:04 PM
thanks for the remarks...well actually I used an anatomy book. My problem is that I modeled the head in about a day and then kept tweeking and tweeking for over a week....after I've been looking at the same mesh for so long I start getting delerious about proportions, anatomy I jsut posted as is. Think Im going to leave it now and try someting new...Ill just let it hang for a while :)

08 August 2002, 12:00 AM
Hmm. My lower lip sure don't have that crease in the middle of it. Also, try to make more asymetric. Nice start though!

09 September 2002, 07:51 AM
Nise head.
But lips to small!

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