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11 November 2004, 09:44 PM
Hi, I've been working on this for a while, and was quite happy with it. But the more finished the pic gets the more bland it looks. I'm not sure what to do to pull it back as putting lights or stronger colors on the left detracts from the characters on the right. I'd appreciate any C&C! cheers!
11 November 2004, 05:53 AM
IMO the two figures need more shadow on them, as it is now the back figure pops way forward from where he is actually standing, and the front figure looks pasted on because the lighting of the figure doesnt match with the lighting of the scene. The left side of the front figure should be shaded, if a shadow is cast on the ground by her body, the parts of her body in the shadow should be dark. I think you should lessen the contrast further in the background to make it recede further. Anyways that would improve the piece a lot I think.
11 November 2004, 01:31 AM
thanks fersteger, gives me some ideas on where to go next!! will post again when I've made some changes! cheers!:thumbsup:
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