View Full Version : PA Challenge - Character - CerberusC
02 February 2002, 06:20 AM
Here is the first review of my character, a big and fat psicotic post-apocalyptic man, the mechanical arm is not mounted yet because i'm modeling with mirroring, i will mount it later, i have a few accesories more for this character...it's my first human character cause previous were toons...and sorry about my english if i wrote something erroneous.
I'm waiting your critiques, i love sugestions and constructive critiques...i am not posting my concept sketch because my scanner is a fu-piii- and a su-piii- and a moth-piii- scanner that doesn't work fine...i'm waiting your opinions.
Well here you have, the final picture, in the end and in the start of my thread =]
i expect that you like it =)
02 February 2002, 06:44 AM
I like the proportions of his body. Very "knuddelig" ;)
Hope to see more of them...
02 February 2002, 12:18 AM
thx, i have some gadgets more hehe
more opinions pleeeeeeeeeaseeeeee
02 February 2002, 12:58 AM
Wow, fantastic model, not like the perfect man,hehe very original, i want to see more about that character, it can be good for a animation
02 February 2002, 03:27 AM
well, i think everything looks pretty sound. he would look cool with some hardcore tattoos
02 February 2002, 03:55 AM
hey thx, i planned to do it hehe, but still not have the tatoo draqing and he will carry some things more, update in a few moments hehe
02 February 2002, 06:33 AM
Well here you have, a little update, there are two arms because i dont have any human arm modelated yet.
It remains a lot of work hehe :)
02 February 2002, 07:00 AM
Nice model, what kind of a weapon have you got planned for him ?.... maybe a chaingun :D I agree with the tattoos on him, big black tattoos all over, would be great!!!
he reminds me of that fat guy that was in one of the MadMax films, the one with Tina turner... :)
02 February 2002, 02:09 PM
hehe, you got it, i toke my inspiration in MadMax post-apocalyptic time, hehe, i love it.
The weapon...it's not a chaingun, at first i planned it but at last i decided to make a big hand weapon, a mace with a cannon in, and a Scimitar (i'm not sure).
Thank you for the critic :)
02 February 2002, 09:44 PM
A small update, hehe
Please i need replies with your opinion...pleeeeeeeeeease! (like Donkey in Shrek hehe)
02 February 2002, 09:52 PM
I see u re-used your usericon head for the head =) It's cool!! Give it a mask and more detail :)
02 February 2002, 05:51 AM
A little update..c'mon people, i need more opinion's, kill me qith your critiques please!! :D
02 February 2002, 05:58 AM
your progress is fine men, how about the weapon?
02 February 2002, 06:05 AM
CerberusC: So far I like what you've done here, especially the shoulders and the helmet-eyepiece. The one thing that sticks out is how the shoulder pads are staying connected. It looks as though you may have it rig'd to his back, though it's a tough shot to see. Are you planning to keep him topless?
Seems like your well on your way.. What type of mask are you planning for his face?..
-Waiting in anticipation.....
02 February 2002, 08:32 AM
Nice modeling but you can still add more detail :D
PD: Pues no macho no me habia pispao de que habia tanto Espanol por aqui ;)
02 February 2002, 08:50 AM
Stephen Vyas: Yeah, he will stay at topless, hehe, i'll put in his skin some tatoos, the back is still in development, he will carry a C.L.D. Unit (Corporeal Liquid Depurator) hehehe, and he doesn't have the cables and the cloth, i'm not sure if he will have any mask...i'm thinking on it :)
Yahll: stay online, i'll put some pics in a few minuts :)
P.D.: jejeje, si, ademas tengo mucho tiempo libre por que estoy en paro jajaja, a ver si encuentro curro pronto, le voy a poner mas detalle, pero es qeu todavia estoy con las piezas importantes, ademas lleva un monton de cables que no le pondre hasta el final para poder hacer cualquier retoque sin tener que retocar los cables, que siempre son un coñazo jeje :)
02 February 2002, 09:18 AM
Well, my first composition to present the character, he needs a lot of work yet but i think he is pretty (all the pretty that a big bald fat assasin can be, of course :D )
Raplies, replies, i need replies :eek:
02 February 2002, 05:44 PM
hey!!! CerberusC !!! ;) <-- He's spanish!!!
Really cool character!
Only I don't like the "padlock" (in spanish: evilla :D ) The rest of the belt is very good detailled!
I agree with the tatoos!.
Suggestion: are you thinking about a weapon?... fatal error... :D I think his robot arm is less useful with fingers than with..... a shootgun!!!! ! Yes!! instead a hand he wears a shootgun!! be careful baby... this is the forsaken world!!!
Put tubes and cables from his head to his back! there is a toxic atmostphera!
02 February 2002, 06:20 PM
Hehehe, what's up pabbloz
The padlock of the belt it's not finished yet cause the body is still in mirror mode, and the suggestion of the wqeapon...he will ned this mechanical arm if he want's to carry the weapon i've planned for him, hehehe.
Yes, he will carry tubes and cables, but patience, this is one of the last thing i would do
Thx for the critique :) and i want to see you participating in the next challenge men :]
02 February 2002, 02:54 AM
cool design cerebus hehe :D :D nice sence of volume/detail.. man there is a hell of talented guys on this new challenge!!
02 February 2002, 03:11 AM
really nice ! :-)
Just have a question : how can he type on the belt's keyboard ?
02 February 2002, 05:52 AM
mmmm,i love all the details you're making
02 February 2002, 07:31 AM
Here you have, some update, weapon and back bag remaining.
Sugestions please. and Thanks
02 February 2002, 06:10 PM
someone have a good idea for a mask? and
please SUGESTIONS hehehehe
02 February 2002, 06:56 PM
Nice model. Very personel.
:D Pronto seremos suficientes para montar una macrofiesta
02 February 2002, 07:14 PM
Suggestion for the mask: why not carry the theme of the small eye piece and make small tubes going to his nose (Like the kind they use in the hospital). You could just go with the idea that the atmosphere is some-what breatheable, but additional oxygen (or steroid/drug) is needed when running/fighting etc.
02 February 2002, 04:32 AM
Thanks for the idea, i will work on it, i like it, i was thinking on it and a concept for the "auxiliar breather" (i don't know if it's right written...i don't know if something that i writ is right).
More opinions please...i love opinions
I'll post a new pic in a few.
02 February 2002, 05:29 AM
Nice update! Well IHO ;) , the breast could use a wee bit of definition between themselves, and maybe a little more detail in the mech arm (gears/wires/tech stuff)
nice overall weighting,
02 February 2002, 07:19 AM
Here you have, a new update :] this time with the back bag hehehe and a few modifications more, the weapon it's on way and the cables and tubes...don't be impatience, and the mask it's in my mind...this character will be inanimable with my PC :P
02 February 2002, 03:39 PM
I really like his bulky look. He is something like 40% Chiquito 40% Torrente and 20% Torrebruno. Really interesting mixture! ;D
The back pack is looking good to, like it that oversized.
02 February 2002, 10:55 PM
Danko gracias tio! He estado mirando la cara de este gordinflón y sabía que me recordaba a alguien, pero no sabía a quién: Torrebruno, claro!
Cerberusc, this is a great character, I wouldn´t add him any mask, only a pet, perhaps a pig (Mad Max influence strikes back!)
02 February 2002, 11:27 PM
Torrebruno? then that's the third identity, the second one is Superman at least is what they say here http://www.granavenida.com/tormentademonos/supertormentoso/index.php?super3.htm (only spanish sorry :p )
02 February 2002, 11:37 PM
Nice modelling and those mechanical parts are simple but fits just perfectly. I like the "belt"? as well but what's up with that little grin on his face? :p
02 February 2002, 04:14 AM
Here you have, the last renders of my character, finally with physique and colors, i will do some more renders of him, but i will not change anything cause the model is finished and i have some work to do now, he will not carry any mask because the tubes that grows in the little gadget and the backpack are a corporal liquid depurator.
I want to know your opinions, pleeeease :]
The first one.
The second one with colors/textures (i dont have time yet to do a good textur for the skin and a tatoo, i expect to do it later)
yes, i know that you want to see the arm better, i will do a special composition, but its camuflage, it is dark :cool:
02 February 2002, 04:22 AM
I dig it!
02 February 2002, 04:50 AM
Ooooh CerberusC!!!! You have improved him a lot!!! He's fantastic now!!! I love the lights and the smoke!! Great details!
I'm very impatient to see him with textures and a "better" environment!. It's awesome!
02 February 2002, 04:54 AM
great stuff cerebus.i love his weapon very cool concept!
what is it ?a hand canon?it's very good.
02 February 2002, 04:57 AM
yeah, it's a mace and a cannon, 2 things in one :D
02 February 2002, 05:04 AM
o ****ing god, i LOVE IT, i like all the details that you modeled, i don't wanna cross with that fool fat men in my way :) .
Now i'm expecting that animation that without doubt will have the level of the model :D
02 February 2002, 05:10 AM
very nice bud, I love to see heavy set characters well put together, love the pose to, but for some reason his hands seem to small to me :)
02 February 2002, 05:20 AM
yeah, it's possible that the meh arm is a bit little, and also the other hand, if i have time i'll correct it :] thanks men
02 February 2002, 06:01 AM
pabbloz: i don't know if i will have enough time to make textures and a better environment, if i find a good environment i will do it, but i don't know, thanks to all for your replies
02 February 2002, 07:27 AM
whoa this guy is awesome, excellent modelling and pose, does he play baseball with those balls and that huge bat :)
02 February 2002, 08:57 AM
I like your model very much.
But what I really like is his expression. As if he is very relax knowing that he can smash and crush anything that get too close with that heavy bat.
Keep up the good job.
03 March 2002, 12:04 AM
hombre a ver ese fondo de imagen.
Si que lo puedes hacer.
nice work and good luck.:D
03 March 2002, 05:03 PM
very good style &detail
03 March 2002, 05:41 PM
I personally dig on the face and general expression! =). You could maybe add him some clothes or pieces of broken armor over his chest, or a helmet but just an idea. I guess by the tubes on his front he doesn't need a mask :P. Keep on! you're nearly done!
03 March 2002, 11:56 PM
03 March 2002, 12:33 AM
Baseball PA Entry? ...... ;)
Very, very good....!!! :D
Love it! :cool:
03 March 2002, 02:48 PM
very cool unique look and the bat thing is cool
03 March 2002, 04:52 AM
sorry, i cannot upload the picture at time because my pc sucks, i have some low res pics, and i'll try to upload the picture the fastest possible, please give me a bit more time to render the final pic because it was myy pc, sorry!
the environment, a desert
the low res pic, please give me a bit more time
03 March 2002, 11:33 AM
here is the render wothuot any post prodution, sorryhttp://www.galeon.com/tworld/gordo.jpg
03 March 2002, 06:23 PM
sorry because i was late, my pc sucks, i've been waiting all the night while my pc was rendering the final picture, and late i was doing the post production as fast as i can, sorry and thanks :)
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