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10-19-2004, 11:21 AM
Jan Andersson has entered the Grand Space Opera 3D.

10-19-2004, 11:28 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4099/4099_1098185305_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4099/4099_1098185305_large.jpg)

A quick 30 min concept sketch of the mood and color scheme rather than ship design or final composition.

10-19-2004, 12:10 PM
Wow looking good, i know its still in concept stages, but if you tightened up the composition a bit more, it would look even better. :thumbsup:

10-19-2004, 10:55 PM
Very clean...

Reminds me of hemogia the game....

Is this your goal?

10-19-2004, 11:32 PM
Very nice mood and light, especially the glow off the planet.

10-20-2004, 07:48 AM
great composition this piece got i know i've seen that planet somewhere hmmm yeah looks like earth a little bit, how about just changing that (opinion) fascinating coloring skills you have, keep going.:)

10-20-2004, 08:28 AM
Thanks a bunch guys.

Greentea - Yeah, I need to work on composition a lot. It'll be easier once I've made some basic models to figure out the most effective comp.

WazaR - I've never seen the Hemogia game so I don't know. I'll have to check that out. Though, I've been involved in a space game a few years ago so some inspiration definately comes from games.

erilaz - Thanks man! :) I only hope that I'll be able to do a convincing planet in 3d at the later stages. I've tried before and failed so we'll see.

Designer2 - Thanks, and yeah, It'll either be a very different earth (polluted, destroyed) or another planet all together.

I only hope that I'll be able to update regularly since work is taking a lot of time.

10-20-2004, 08:43 AM
Pretty nice concept! Keep it up mate.:thumbsup:

10-20-2004, 06:41 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4099/4099_1098297717_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4099/4099_1098297717_large.jpg)

Here's a rough design of a ship. I don't want too much detail as it will narrow the modelling process.

10-20-2004, 07:06 PM
Sweet concepts. Like them both. What's the iconic happening going to be?

10-20-2004, 07:45 PM
Thanks Shiroii

I haven't given that much thought really. Either there'll be a huge asteroid closing (or ramming) the planet or it might already be destroyed. The central part should be the space station and that people are gathering for some reason.

10-20-2004, 09:37 PM
Atmoshpere and lighting are beautiful.

10-20-2004, 10:36 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4099/4099_1098311793_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4099/4099_1098311793_large.jpg)

A more detailed concept of the scene. Composition is still very weak so I'll have to work on that later.

This was painted over screenshots of rough models.

10-20-2004, 11:09 PM
One word: Wow...

I love the coulours and contrast you use in your concept drawing, as the theme. impressive

Very promising... i'll stay tuned

Good luck to you!

10-20-2004, 11:15 PM
Wow! nice drawing!!! Really nice "enviroment" Keep the good sketches! And good luck :D

10-21-2004, 03:05 AM
Hey! Nice work buddy. This is going to be great, I really like the last scetch and how the planet is "oozing" with something...life maybe. Keep it up.:)


10-21-2004, 11:28 AM
Really nice. I guess this is concept drawin 1.b or something. I sure like it better, way to go :thumbsup:

10-21-2004, 12:39 PM
scene looks great so far. look forward to updates

10-21-2004, 12:43 PM
itīs growing up! good work ! good luck !

10-21-2004, 03:24 PM
Nice work. I like the third concept sketch.

If I may make a suggestion: composition-wise, the planet in that 3rd sketch would have a more impressive sense of scale if it were larger, more towards the corner, and if the impact was more off-center so you could see it in perspective with the planet's contours.

This looks like it will be a cool one.

10-25-2004, 02:31 AM
That last one is cool!

Im definitely going to be watching this one closely. I got a feeling I could learn a lot just from hanging out in this thread. Shoot, these forums are just oozing talent. Man there is so many incredibly talented people running around here...what am I doing here?!

Learning, thats what...LOL.

Excellent job! Cant wait to see it realized in 3D :).

10-25-2004, 11:49 PM
It has a very homeworld 2 feel to it, which quite franckly is not to bad of a thing. The secound concept I find more visually impressive,... if only because of the strength and solemnity of the ship.

The color treatment is going in the right direction as far as producing a more "emotive" feel, almost like a nostaglic photo from the past. I think you should keep the sun's glare in the scene to give space more of a living sense to it.

I think the only thing you are missing are smaller objects that would go a long way to producing more of a sense of scale.

Keep up the good work.

11-01-2004, 06:42 PM
I think your last image has the best layout. You could have the ship in front of the planet a bit more to give a better sence of positioning. Maybe a large docking bay the stretches towards the camera a bit, to pull your eye from ship then eventually to the planet, instead of vise versa.

11-29-2004, 05:16 AM
I like your sketches, hope will find some modeling soon. Keep working.

I find some similarities between our works, it cool, we have differents concepts but in some way we match the way of modeling. Take a look. www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=184160&highlight=Snake+Farlow (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=184160&highlight=Snake+Farlow)

Snake Farlow. The rogue.

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