View Full Version : Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Reda j Al-Yousef

10 October 2004, 10:36 AM
Reda j Al-Yousef has entered the Grand Space Opera 3D.

10 October 2004, 10:44 AM
Hi Splotch, nice to see you here ! Good luck for this challenge !!


10 October 2004, 11:06 AM
love to meet you again guys
jddog good to see you here man good luck for you tooo

10 October 2004, 11:18 AM
wish you the most of the luck on this challenge, keep up.:)

10 October 2004, 05:25 PM here to wish u good luck man!!
please us with some fine art....ill be following u :)

10 October 2004, 07:52 AM
hey friends,
Thanx Jorge and D2
This is my first idea story many thing are in mind but could not bring them together easily I will show you the story and will enhance it day by day with sketches hope it's gonna work:

Standard idea (Story)

Here in the death valley a battle of "Freedom Making" was effected the nations gave all generations, civilizations, and land as sacrifice for their freedom …foragers from a far distance in the galaxy has been deleted and erased completely from their planet, the planet also been damaged , the land in death valley is full of radian magnetic and the fighters crafts spread on the places around, planet is not good for living any more, and the small people left their planet and establish a base on the moon (Oraisa) trying to save what they could.

10 October 2004, 08:16 AM (

this is the 1st general idea..

10 October 2004, 08:21 AM (

closer view

10 October 2004, 01:39 PM
I prefer the closer view. Can be cool!! :wip:
The bulding on the left, make me think a Playstation2 ;)

Keep going!

10 October 2004, 01:46 PM
Closer with more buildings... looks really interesting !

10 October 2004, 04:40 PM
looks great! prefer the first. Really think the sky adds to it.

10 October 2004, 06:13 AM
ammm , i geuss i will use them both in some how, thank you guys i will show more soon. i was in week end and waited to back here again,percydaman jddog SuperXCM thanx.

10 October 2004, 06:41 AM
the first image have nice composition, if you are planning to combine both i think second one will be in front, show us colored version.

10 October 2004, 07:05 AM
hey buddy good to c ya here... nice concept u got there... i bet i'tt look really awesome in 3d... i like the lighting feeling u gave to the first drawing... i'm always a fan of sliced light... keep it up buddy... i'll b watching this one.... :thumbsup: :bounce:

10 October 2004, 07:50 AM
Wow cool concept sketches!

10 October 2004, 11:11 AM
It's good to see you here, wish you all the best of the best... of the best !!!
Good story for a nice picture.


10 October 2004, 11:16 AM
Cool drawing man!, I especially like the Blade like structures comming out of the ground. SHould be really cool when your done. ;)

10 October 2004, 12:10 PM
YO! splotch!

When I saw your sketch and after reading the story, this idea came to my mind:

" on top of the cliff/mountain/thing have a huge multitude looking down to the not forgoten/forgoten battlefield "

:D What you think?

10 October 2004, 05:49 PM
Very cool ideas. I really like the first sketch, very dynamic. Although the detail of the seconed one would be cool in the lower forground.

10 October 2004, 06:09 PM
Hey, Reda!

Just popping in to say that the first sketch looks most promising :thumbsup:

10 October 2004, 10:45 PM
Designer2 you are right bro thanx .

3doidthank you friend for your support that push me to go on,

DJ-Prismatica glad to see you here mate thanx man

Davee HeyHey friend thanx for good wishes happy to see you in my thread friend, happy cuz you like my story.

BookMansBlues thanx friend i will do my best to bring it as good as i ccan

ARAS ... thats really cool i will keep it in mind thanx friend "not forgoten/forgoten battlefield"

this will be my new poem :p

james thanx man ...glad you pop in here

10 October 2004, 11:41 PM
Hi Splotch.............I like the dramatic overall look.Plus the depth within the scene looks nice.Looks quite expansive.I prefer the second sketch.My only suggestion would be to show a little more of the sky in this one...............Raise the ceiling a touch.;)

I think your design/plan is a good one.I wish you alot of luck.:arteest:

10 October 2004, 03:05 AM
Awesome, hope to see some modelin soon! :applause:

Peter C.
10 October 2004, 08:54 PM
Good concepts, and I also prefere the second one. What about a wide angle shot os perhaps a semi panorana to get more scale?

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