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10-19-2004, 01:06 AM
Patrick A. Haraguti has entered the Grand Space Opera 3D.

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My Final Image

In the Year of 2078, a prophecy revealed to the Rulers of the earth, it described a child's arrival that would destroy the empire and it would free the human race.
Then, th Lord of the war, lord nomed ordered that all of the born children in that period were sacrificed.
He sent their troops to exterminate all of the born children and with the smaller age than a year of life.
Their soldiers wandered for the cities behind that child. Spreading the fear and the intolerance!
A child especially was born in a city called remote meleb, bringing with itself a Divine mark. God's son!

Thanks All!!!
Best luck for all :)

10-19-2004, 03:38 AM (

This is the frist raph.. the idea is pass the last minutes of a spacewars..
no chance to victory... mabe no chance to survive...
that is!!

C&C is welcome

thanks guys!!

10-19-2004, 03:53 AM
good luck!


É isso ae.. mostra a força que o brasil tem.

10-19-2004, 05:10 AM
good luck!
Explain to us more about your idea.

10-19-2004, 05:19 AM
well explain... to hard.. my english is very por.. hehehe

well in the background is a War.. on the city... very damaged city... in the skye i will put the biger mother ship fallen... and anoder ships in batle..

in the second plane "bridge" a terrain conflict come in.... a litle massive batle

in the frist plane on left the "sacerdot" abandoning the peoples, and forgeting your crence.. in the right a died soldier represent the fall...

not in image. the "gril" comander calling your squadrom to runaway, to scape of eminet die!

this is my idea.. sorry for my english

10-19-2004, 08:22 AM
Wow promise a real epic image !!!

10-19-2004, 01:17 PM
thanks man. i want to see your work to!

thanks and best luck

10-19-2004, 01:51 PM
I can tell only from the sketch that this is realy going to be interesting loking forward to se the development on this one.

Good luck.

10-19-2004, 03:26 PM
Hey patrick, it seems to be a great image.
I liked the sacerdots. they really looks like unbelievers.
Really cool :thumbsup:

10-19-2004, 03:26 PM
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10-19-2004, 03:34 PM
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10-19-2004, 03:55 PM
Great idea, I'm very interess in this work.
Sorry, my english is very por...

Good Luck!

10-19-2004, 06:29 PM
amazing, this image looks like story, real opera,

keep up Patrick.

10-20-2004, 02:04 AM
good luck!!

10-20-2004, 02:08 AM
Hysteria I'm loving it!:applause:

I really can't wait to see how this turns out good luck!

10-20-2004, 02:30 AM (

This is the concept I created for a mecha spider, which will be inte the "bridge" part of my scene. There's not much to say about it... it's just a battle tank. This mini-scene is one of the few that will be composing my final scene.

thanks C&C is Welcome

10-20-2004, 02:56 AM
Great concept art! :bounce:

Love the whole scene and the whole story behind it. Great conflicts going on from various points of view...

Looking forward to see more ups about the other layers of the scenary.

Best of Luck! :thumbsup:

10-20-2004, 03:07 AM
great concept!!! i lke this batlle tank a lot :D

it will be a great scene with great models ;)

10-20-2004, 03:19 AM
hey, that´s a cool mecha! it reminds me of one in ghost in the shell, (the old one..) but this one looks more aggresive, i like it, i really wouldn´t like to be one of those poor soldiers..

good luck in the challenge!!

10-20-2004, 03:23 AM
Good luck cool idea:thumbsup:

10-20-2004, 03:24 AM
i am digging the shoulder missles :D

this is gonna be an AWESOME challenge.

10-20-2004, 04:26 AM
nice looking mecha design there - reminds me of the mecha designs of sparth aka, nicholas bouvier.

keep it up.

10-20-2004, 05:39 AM
this machine is great keep that spirit,i like those men too, waiting for more. :thumbsup:

BTW: how about givving that spider a seperated head.

10-20-2004, 05:59 AM (

wow!! the frist WIP hehehe thanks for all coments guys!!
i´m back soon to reply all! ok


10-20-2004, 01:35 PM
That challenge really promises!
Excellent art concept.
I am until imagining the details. :buttrock:

Good Luck!

10-20-2004, 02:16 PM
Nice start and interesting design... !

10-20-2004, 04:17 PM
Very good. I think this contest was created for you. Your work is really good and always in Scifi themes.

Se vc realmente conseguir fazer a cena como vc planejou, vai ficar incrivel. E pelos premios do Contest, acho que incentivo vc tem de sobra. :bounce:

10-20-2004, 07:06 PM
Promissing start! I like your style! :thumbsup:

I´ll be watching you.... :D

10-20-2004, 07:10 PM
great start patrick!

looking forward to see more ups :D

10-20-2004, 07:17 PM
Man this is really rocking. Your model so far looks great:thumbsup:

10-20-2004, 07:33 PM
I think the design is great , and im sure the 3d will be great too.


10-20-2004, 07:49 PM
I lik the design of the mech.
However the scene looks a little mundane as far as Space Opera goes.
Maybe a hundred of these things attacking a city or a nations capitol or something would give it the epic feel. Or even these attacking a giant space ship.
just some ideas to push it.
keep up the good work!

10-21-2004, 12:59 AM (

Spider mecha up date number 2.. gething the form! coments?

10-21-2004, 01:21 AM
hy all.. very thanks for the coments.... i will work hard to finish this contest.. best luck for all

KOryH do u see the frist concept? or just see the second concept? not is just this mecha.. have a enviroment and another events runing on my propose!

thanks all!!

10-21-2004, 01:24 AM
Woops Sorry you are WAAAYYYY ahead of me!!!
Great work!

10-21-2004, 01:24 AM
Holy crap! You don't waste any time do you?:D

Fantastic design.
Thread bookmarked.:love:

10-21-2004, 02:55 AM (

Hy all.. the modeling is 99% complite.. just need some details... and the rig is ok to.. next step.. add details and textures

thanks.. to see my work!
C&C is welcome

10-21-2004, 03:19 AM
:eek: UOW you are fast!!

very good!!!

want to see more!!! more!!!

10-21-2004, 03:21 AM
that model is a really nice design, I may have missed it somewhere, but what software are you using?

10-21-2004, 03:25 AM
fast and furious tabajara!!!... hehehe

dshelton - thanks dude.. i´m using 3ds MAX (6-7) " nice, fast, cool, easy and more " hehehe

10-21-2004, 04:16 AM
coming together nicely!

10-21-2004, 05:14 AM

its coming up nicely! i also liked the tank design. it reminds me of those bots from ghost in the shell (they appeared in the manga only, not the anime), but i forgot their names.

continue firme!! :thumbsup:


10-21-2004, 06:28 AM
Pretty quick,and pretty good.Could you show some more closeups of the mechs,and a wire would be good too.keep it going D3.:thumbsup:

10-21-2004, 12:22 PM
wow so far so good. by the sketch it looks like it's gonna be a nice a detailed piece. look forward to updates

10-21-2004, 12:48 PM
MAN I HAAATEEE YOOOU!!... stop being soo fast and soo good... awesome job on the spidybot modeling... keep it up but i dont think we can keep up with ya;).... wud love to c where it goes.... :thumbsup: :applause:

10-21-2004, 01:03 PM
wooooo!:bounce: you are going very fast! good luck great models.:thumbsup:

10-21-2004, 01:13 PM
... great start ... you're so fast !

10-21-2004, 06:40 PM

O concept está bem legal e a modelagem está apavorando, estou torcendo para ver um bom trabalho ok!Mas acho difícil vc nao apresenatr algo com um bom nível


10-21-2004, 07:21 PM
nice work on the bots they're looking great i can't wait to see them with textures

10-21-2004, 09:24 PM
Spider Mech... Looks like it will make the SF3D/"Maschinen Krieger ZBV 3000" folks very excited. Excellent design!

10-22-2004, 06:55 AM
Really a great start ! Nice model.

10-22-2004, 07:24 PM
caraca patrick! muito bom!! e tbm super rapido!! :twisted: manda ve cara q a cena promete!!!

10-23-2004, 12:04 AM (

this a just skye prop (low poly), very smal prop hehehe

10-23-2004, 12:06 AM (

skye prop 2 heheh another smal prop

Rivan |canibal|
10-23-2004, 12:07 AM
Opa Grande D-3 muito show véio ...
Great :buttrock:

Rivan Henrique

10-23-2004, 12:08 AM (

this is a litle big ship on skye!! the detail is very simples primitives and extruded box heheh realy a simple model, but a god visual impact!

10-23-2004, 12:09 AM (

side view! nive ship so i think! heheh

10-23-2004, 12:15 AM
Man, you are good. The models are coming along very fast...kind of scarry, are you sure these are all new models or just old ones your reusing? Just asking because your speed is making me feel worried and if your faking it...well....but if you're not, GREAT JOB!!! Would love to see the initial concept in color or in detail. Good luck


10-23-2004, 12:15 AM
Holy S***!!! :scream:

You're fast and GOOD!!! :eek:

Looks great and very promising! Keep up the good work!
Can't wait to se more ups! :bounce:

Beijão ;)

10-23-2004, 12:17 AM
hy all!! very thanks to coment my work.. i´m very happy !

i want to get a more time to post more here.. but i working hard on the studio.. and consume much time of my day.. a justa have 3 or 4 hours to make the models, and post here!

sorry & thanks!

(sorry by my english!)

10-23-2004, 01:32 AM (

this is the face of the bridge soldier.. fighthing wite mecha speeder!
i will work more on this head.. modeled in 35 minutes!

10-23-2004, 01:38 AM
thanks all very thanks for the coments... but

i´m realy desapointed about your question man.. because this i´m recorded this video to you see.. my modeling...

this video (aprox 11 minutes) is speed x3.. aprox 35 minutes of modeling
File aprox: 5 mb!

And u can see the date of creation of the file ok!

Thanks all
i´m a peace man!

10-23-2004, 01:40 AM
Good grief! You're leaps and bounds ahead of everyone... you need to slow down, and enjoy it more. :)

Great modeling so far, I hope this project lives up to everything else you've done.

10-23-2004, 01:46 AM
WOW.. amazing...
i like the 1st sketch.. it would give some awesome movie scene...
love the mechas.. and those shark mechs..

Boa Sorte ai do outro lado do Atlântico.

Best Regards,

10-23-2004, 02:02 AM
I really like the mecha spider reminds me a lot of the mangas Akira and Ghost in the Shell which is never a bad thing and you've got other models that are just flying through development don't you sleep?! Great work can't wait to see the final composition in 3D.

10-23-2004, 04:10 AM
hy all!! i´m maked a litle simple and fast tips usefull tutorial !!
i want you like! thanks!

10-23-2004, 04:18 AM
damM!! you're fast!

good models! great tutorial!


10-23-2004, 05:10 AM
I like your models pretty much!! The concepts too!! Very good start dude!!

10-23-2004, 05:29 AM
Hope I didn't offend you...I was just wondering. I know how afraid people here are of asking these kinds of tough questions...but I'm not. Anyway, you must be spending a lot of time on this and that is great, good luck.


10-23-2004, 07:57 AM
Oh my... I do not know how I did managed to miss that thread. You are scarrying me, man- I am begining to suspect You have some kind of implant allowing direct contact between comp and Your brain. In any case- lovely and envy inspiring work.

10-23-2004, 09:15 AM
Wow the ships looks really cool, can't wait to see more of your work on the project.

10-23-2004, 09:41 AM
Nice modeling and nice concepts!!! Keep it up and good luck! :thumbsup:

10-23-2004, 10:24 AM
hey good work
like the mecha ,curious to see how u wud put it ina space opera scenario

10-23-2004, 06:10 PM
Very Good your sketch. Good Luck in this project, I wait you can have a good position and show for the world that brazilian 3d artists are so good than the others. I want to see more shots.

Congratulations !


10-23-2004, 06:43 PM
Verry nice stuff you got going there, and you are verry fast.


10-23-2004, 07:54 PM
Man, you are faaaaast!
Looking very interesting so far.

10-23-2004, 08:46 PM
Ae D-3, muito bom seu trabalho!
Muito bem feito!

Eu vi o vídeo que vc gravou pro cara lá e meu, realmente vc é muito rápido! Como que grava vídeo assim?
Quando der manda uma idéia do cenário pra gente ir imaginando como vai ficar!

Como vc fez aqueles canos que vão da parte da frente até mais ou menos atrás da orelha? Eu tentei ver no vídeo mas eles aparecem do nada hehehe! :D

Mais uma vez parabéns! :D


10-23-2004, 08:53 PM
You've got alot of stuff already... Looking forward to how you tie everything together.

10-24-2004, 08:00 PM
The eyes on that helmet are a bit toony. Perhaps you could narrow them down, and enlarge the brow, even slope the brow down to make the eyes angrier. it would add some emotion to the design.

10-24-2004, 08:08 PM
Very nice models. I like the shark one especially. Would be nice to see the concept sketches and maybe some wip on ur models. They sort of just all came up in one chunk with no warning.

You must be the hardest working guy here.

10-24-2004, 08:52 PM
HieSpike - No problem.. í know wath the peoples thinking about my speed..hehehe
no problem!

_RK_ are you talking about the neurochip? to make opitical cable conection mind-computer developed in secret by the brasilian governament? i unknow about this hehehhe

thanks all,

bob! i will trye hehehehe

Tork- pra capturar videos da tela eu uso um software chamado cantasia da
os tubos no qual vc se refere saum splines com a opição renderizabe e visible in viewport blz!

simoncvy - thanks dude!! i will work more slow now... and iíll refine this head.

superlayer - well.. i´ill trye to make more concept and post the wips... thanks...

thanks all again!!

10-24-2004, 10:26 PM
Amazing work!! :eek:

Thanks for the video tutorial :thumbsup:
to me... as a begginer... found it very helpful and inspiring! Hope I reach you speed someday!

Keep up the great work!!

10-24-2004, 10:33 PM
Man that shark ship looks wild!

Keep up the awesome (and fast) work!

10-24-2004, 10:53 PM (

hy all.. i worked a litle more on the soldier head.. the texture is procedural maps.... but a have a question... i need to choose the eyes color.. which would you choose
? is more cool? ow yes.. this a bad guy!!! ok
i´m thinking the red eyes is more devil...
hehe thanks all

10-24-2004, 11:01 PM
Patrick... once again... amazing work!

If the guy's evil, I would definately go with the red. But I think that the light grey and white kinda gets in the way of the attention the eyes should be sending out.

But my choice would be to go with the red :thumbsup:

Keep it up! :)

10-24-2004, 11:01 PM
Yeah you're right the red eyes looks more evil but in my opinion, the blue eyes makes more contrast with the skin color and enfasize the eyes and the skin at the same time !!:)

10-24-2004, 11:03 PM
hey nice work is going here

i love all the stuff you have posted really cool
about the eyes any way the shap of the face tells that he is a bad guy :twisted: but with red eyes looks stupid bad guy and blue makes hem more smart ... so depending on the story just deside wich color is right to choos :deal:

10-24-2004, 11:51 PM
This is impressive already!!! Go get'em bro! You got the right stuff!

10-25-2004, 12:02 AM (

if some one have interest to see the wireframe this here! heheh


10-25-2004, 12:09 AM
BiBiNhA - very thanks girl..
bibinha help me on the inglesh!! she is my personal translator hehehe thanks biba!

pBarrelas and splotch thanks for the opinion.. i thinked and a think th red is more agresive.. more devil hehehe

And_Holzmeister - thanks dude!! your coments is very welcome all time!!!

cya all!!

10-25-2004, 12:10 AM
Real nice works.

Absolutely the blue eyes, but i'll have my final word when u finish texturing the head.

10-25-2004, 12:58 AM
i hate how good you are
ive been doing this stuff for about 5 years and i see this and kick myself
love the concepts and models

10-25-2004, 03:23 AM
"they" say that it is common for artists to render some likeness of themselves in much of their work... The blue eyes do match the shades in you avatar.

Frigheningly good work. powerful. intimidating.

10-25-2004, 04:37 AM
what can i say............ fast and high standard... great man

10-25-2004, 12:17 PM
The spider robot is ready to make a carnage. I like it.
Keep it up, I look forward to more work.

10-25-2004, 12:30 PM
D-3 Much respect to u man, ur modeling good and fast and u upload nice tuts for all to use,
wish there were more ppl like u man, good luck and all the best

10-25-2004, 08:25 PM
Valeu D-3, pelas informações!

Sobre a pintura do soldier, eu tenho que admitir que não gostei mto não, sei lá achei bom falar pq como o campeonato é isso, de postar o trabalho sendo feito e aí poder melhorar, eu achei importante falar. Minha sugestão é colocar uma coisa mas futurística mesmo! tipo um prata assim, ou um malhado como vc fez mas fazer preto e prata , sei lá..

Isso é uma crítica construtiva né? ehhehe é mó formal esse fórum... Mas eu gostei dele, boa sorte no campeonato!



10-25-2004, 08:50 PM
wow , wonderfull concept&modelling :)
and as fast as hell!

10-25-2004, 09:15 PM
Like him with blue eyes better... kinda pops out :) Keep it up!

10-26-2004, 01:18 AM
hy all thanks for the coments

flash.luz thanks man.. iíll work on the textures.. and variations hehehe

dark-elf2 - thanks man. and don´t hate me pls hehehe.. i´m a simple guy working hard

jonahhawk - thanks man... heheh

kinston - thanks dude.. i see your lacation are you japanise or chinise? or you live

pddaugusto - the spider mecha just know 2 comand´s... seeking and destroy heheheh thanks

RhyderKey - wow.. realy thanks man... but my comportament is part of me.... is natural!! thanks!

Tork - valeu velho.. mas eu ainda vou trabalhar as texturas.. o vermelho é apenas pra representar sangue saca!! mas eu vou trabalhar as texturas ainda...

ConcreteDonkey- thanks man! fast but no much...

Borro - thanks man.. but i realy don´t know wich the color i ill be use heheh

thanks all for the coments, crtiques !!!

10-26-2004, 02:25 AM
Ah tá, entendi!

Eu gostei bastante da Mecha Spider, não sei onde ela vai ficar no seu projeto mas tá bem legal! poderia colocar uma legião delas hahahaha eu to viajando no seu projeto já! se eu já tivesse melhor em 3D eu participaria desse campeonato! Mas eu tou estudando ainda, um dia chego lá! :P

Quando sobrar um tempo aí fala um pouco da história do seu projeto! Nessa fase inicial tem bastante usuário falando do "background", conta um pouco como é o mundo que vc tá criando :D



Sorry, I'm not writing in english because i'm in a hurry so when I have time I'll post in english so then everybody understands!

10-26-2004, 03:23 AM (

hy all.. i working on body modelage.. but in this image i maked a overpaint just to see better the soldier aspect, tectures and color compositing...

i´m prefer the opition D

C&C is welcome!!
thanks all!!

10-26-2004, 03:36 AM
Indeed, option D does look good. May i suggest adding rust and other decals like the blood on A.

10-26-2004, 03:46 AM
Patrick... it's getting kinda tiring to say... but GREAT WORK!

I'm having a great time seeing the progress of your scene.

I personally like the "A" better, but I can see why you favor the "D". "A" is more of a star wars thing... and since I'm a star wars fanatic, you can understand my choice! :D
I thing "D" is really great! It gives a lot more suspense and evilness into the character.

Well... gotta go! Keep up the good work! Hope everybody is enjoying it as much as I am... I'm really learning a lot :thumbsup:


10-26-2004, 03:53 AM
very nice my frienD!

mandanu ve! continua firmão ae!

10-26-2004, 04:42 AM
Realie great models :thumbsup: Great textures on the man, yeap, the D looks more alien alike :)

10-26-2004, 07:05 AM
Moito cool video. Voce rocks! Ollo pra la Boxx!
Now I gotta get modelling fast too...

My Space Opera (

10-26-2004, 08:00 AM
Nice color studies!! I prefer the B or D, but you already choosed D, well keep on dude!!

10-26-2004, 08:15 AM
Version A and D look the best... Keep going!

10-26-2004, 11:36 AM
Muito BOM mesmo!

Prefiro a A pq dá um aspecto mais real do objecto, embora isto seja um concurso para fazer algo passado no espaço sempre gostei das guerras cruas e a mostrar tudo como se estivesse lá!

Continua assim!



PS: Sorry for the critic being in portuguese, but that way i can really say what i wanted to say.

10-26-2004, 11:58 AM
I think the model C gives an Star Wars aspect but not too much as the model A. I also like the model D, but I think the atmosphere is a bit dark, on model C you can see the entire body, in the D you can't.

Here you must make a decision, I believe, between the different atmospheres. If you choose the orange one, you should stick to this style, right?

I vote for model C, i liked this one very much.

10-26-2004, 12:07 PM
B is my fave. Well done modifying the eyes - it looks like a serious battle trooper now, even with large eyes it does not look at all toony anymore.

10-26-2004, 06:46 PM
Hi man!!
I took a time to reply but i´m here.
As everybody said,the concept is very good and the modeling is too fast(to sleep sometimes is good):) .
Keep going with this great work that i want one more brazilian winner here showing we are here to win.

See u man!!:thumbsup:

10-27-2004, 01:26 AM

As everyone already said, it's coming along very nicely. My only comment is that the line on the gas mask part looks too much like a mouth. Kind of makes it look like it's got a mouth. I don't know if that's what your going for, but it's a bit distracting I think. Anyway, nice work!

my 2 cents

10-27-2004, 06:40 AM
wonderful work ! congrats...

10-28-2004, 03:48 AM
hy all and sorry for slowly to reply all!! i´m still work hard in the studio, to finishi a job.. maibe i´m going to off line for a week ok. realy sorry...


Tork- vou tentar cara.. vo escrever e pedir pra bibinha traduzir pra mim

EntityGhost - i will try to make thi´s

Tabajara - Bibinha - muito obrigado Very Thanks!! hehehe

Kaksht - Thanks dude!!

userBrian - man in wath language u whrite? portuenglish? hehehe thanks for the coments... and.. i dont looking to the boxx hehehe i dont have chance dude!!

pBarrelas - Borro thanks dudes!! the D is more cool hehehe

flash.luz - na imagem final vou tentar passar a crueldade da guerra! tambem gosto muito desse tema

Tork - this test is more to define de colors and atmosphere.. but not the final light.. i´m realy thing to get the D and set the lighting looks more a C, that is my intention

simoncvy dude i agree.. the smal eye is more serius !! heheh

Blackman - man very very thanks for your coments, but win? i´m dont have chance dude..

HieSpike - nice eyes dude.. the mouth line is propositail... gaz-mask but a litle inspired in the samurai armor!

jddog - thanks dude!!!

well , over!!

i´m very tired.... i need free days to relax hehehe

c ya!!

i´m back soon ok

10-28-2004, 11:24 AM
hey gr8 job man.. i love ur concepts... and nice robot-lookin-evil-dude... i like the 'C' and 'D'. ur color concept will depend on the kind of color u use for the entire scene... if u wanna go for hardcore hatred of battle stuff, i prefer 'D' and its the best choise and if u wanna show the after math but still a lot of hatered... go for 'C', it emotes more in that way... best of luck buddy... ur really good :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Heber G Conde
10-28-2004, 03:11 PM
Great Job Man!
Really cool concept sketches, I really like the shark ship design ( and model ) !

I prefer the 1st style for the soldier shot!

The mech spider is really cool too - great illusion of functional structures!

Really good work, great invasion, all the "aliens" vehicles have the same design style - really great! The amount of diferent vehicles make the shot very interesting!

I will keep an eye on this post!

Manda ver, brother!

10-28-2004, 03:23 PM
Hi! I like your work and I wish you good luck but most of all I like the way you say things and congratulations for your modesty:thumbsup:

10-29-2004, 12:44 AM
nice work for the badies

love d) as well
very nice modelling agian
keep it up

10-29-2004, 12:53 AM
Very nice work!

but you know how we are, we want more! lol (just kidding, keep it up!)

10-29-2004, 04:10 AM (

a litle update for the soldier... i´m modeled some detail... but no much... sorry all i´m realy need more time to do this.. 2 or 3 hours per day is nothing hehehe

coments or critiques??

10-29-2004, 04:14 AM (

the back vision hehehe

10-29-2004, 04:19 AM
Holy S*** :scream:

Very nice!!! Great work!!

Keep it up! :thumbsup:

10-29-2004, 04:24 AM
Fala Mano! :]

veio vc ta detonando !! nao para nao :]


10-29-2004, 04:24 AM
Pretty damm cool character you got there :)

sweet render ;)

10-29-2004, 04:30 AM
very nice!

keep on rocking!

10-29-2004, 05:54 AM
Looking good! Keep on keeping on!

10-29-2004, 06:25 AM
2 words

damn you
looks cool man keep going
cant wait for final image

10-29-2004, 07:25 AM
Nice model, keep on dude!!:thumbsup:

10-29-2004, 05:36 PM
The soldier is getting really good! Nice modelling!

I just didn't like one thing, there's something on top of his head, a black thing, I don't know what that is, but I didn't like it very much.


10-29-2004, 06:06 PM
nice work man!! keep on!

Heber G Conde
10-29-2004, 06:34 PM
Now we are talking!:thumbsup:

Great armor, Patrick!
Keep on with the good job!

10-29-2004, 06:52 PM
D-3, you are amaizing man, keep on

10-30-2004, 05:01 AM
3doid – thanks for the coments man!

Heber Conde! Thanks dude!! I´m your fan man!!

SaintArt – man.. i´m not modesty.. this i now hehehe.... very thanks man!!

Dark-elf2 – thanks man!!

Plaguelord – Thanks man!! But i need more time to give wath you want hehehe

Hy Bibinha.. thanks girl!!

Erudito! Valeu mano!! Aparece mais vezes no post ja que tem o link agora kkk

BookMansBlues – Thanks man..

Tabajara!! Thanks dude!! And your entry? I want more ups dude!!

Percydaman – thanks man.. i´m try i´m try!

Dark-elf2 – thanks again man.... you need to wait a long time to see the final image.. sorry... heheheh

PBarrelas – Thanks man!!

Tork... you dont liked? Uhmm i like! Heheh

Luciano Beruti – thanks man!!!

Heber!! Thanks again dude!! U don´t entry on this challeng? Come on!! Heheh

Mayashu – i´m amazing? I´m not amazing... but thanks man!!

Thanks guys and best luck for all....

Realy sorry to i dont have time to participate more, posthing in every entry.. i try...

Realy sorry!!

10-30-2004, 11:46 AM
You're welcom dude!!:beer:

10-30-2004, 03:46 PM
Very nice; the helmet especially looks great. Only critque I might suggest it the forarms look a little bit thin.

10-31-2004, 03:55 AM
hahah, he's like a storm tooper from hell...I like!!!


10-31-2004, 04:38 AM
Very nice modeling, I especially like the detail on the back.

Keep it up,

10-31-2004, 05:56 AM
hahah, he's like a storm tooper from hell...I like!!!

I agree,looks real good,not unique by any means,but looks good.I also think that the forearms are way to thin.Beef them up some I think.Either way looking good overall.:thumbsup:

10-31-2004, 06:40 AM
Wow Thanks guys!!

PBarrelas :beer: cheers dude!!

ArtisticVisions - i will work more in the forarm man!! thanks for the sugestion.

HieSpike - storm tooper from hell ?? i don´t know.. u can post a image here? i´m want to see hehhe

Gavin_G - thanks man!!

Franky - thanks man!! in the life, u never create... u use right-click/copy/paste hehehehe

Thanks all!!

10-31-2004, 07:42 PM
Very good man......the model is really cool......keep the good work....and we could have another brazilian with a workstation!:P

11-02-2004, 03:10 AM (

hy guys i worked a litle on the shader of the mecha spider.. is full procedural shader.. looking good... no?!

thanks all

11-02-2004, 03:15 AM (

the mecha spider, and the shader.
thanks all

11-02-2004, 03:24 AM
thats is so awsome. love the texture on it.Just maybe brighten up the lil red dot a bit.

11-02-2004, 03:35 AM

very nice my friend!
keep going :D

11-02-2004, 03:58 AM
wow man. this is the first time i cought this thread. awsome work man. i love the character designs, especially the head (with blue eyes).

i cant wait to see it all come together.

Mr. C

11-02-2004, 04:32 AM
I like it, nice texture! :thumbsup:

11-02-2004, 08:55 AM
Fantastic models .. expecially the soldier, I really like it .. the spider is also really nice, the texture is perfect imho ..

I've put your thread in my preferred ones :)

Riccardo :)

11-02-2004, 05:01 PM
Great root mate! Texture looks awesome :) Can't wait to see more.

11-02-2004, 05:39 PM
Very nice shader !
And the models are great too.

Keep up the good work !

11-02-2004, 05:46 PM
yep great shader and nice compositing... lol can't image how many damage can do this spider in a city...


11-03-2004, 02:01 AM
nrek thanks man.. i will do this!

tabajara - thanks friend!!

MrCrowpsey - thanks man! and welcome hehe

Orporick - thanks dude!!

Borro - thanks man!! i´m working hard to make the best of me!

Deadly Force - thanks man!!

jddog - thanks man, this mecha-spider not is for massive extermination of soldier, and launch bombs! heheh

thanks all for the critiques and comentaries!!

up´s soon.... or no..... hehehehe

11-03-2004, 02:35 AM
just a tiny tidbit, i feel that the 'feet' of the mecha are too vertical. try angling them inwards or outwards to add a little more to the tension of the pose.
good stuff so far, and damn quick! you know your software. keep going!

11-03-2004, 03:41 AM
Yeah, i really like your Mecha, the texture is not bad if it's goal is to camuflate the Mecha. I just think that you should consider other type of texture that let us see more the beauty of that's just my opinion, but i like it anyways!!:thumbsup:

11-03-2004, 05:38 AM
That armor on that soldier looks awesome. I really like the overall design and detailing on it. The helmet is awesome. I hope to see more of your progress. Awesome mecha and other stuff as well, but the soldier is my favorite.

11-03-2004, 05:49 AM
this is good stuff... on the soldier i like how the design (left up to a viewer without the luxury of a backstory) could easily be a living thing or a robot... the jaw line could just as easily be a re-breather as it could be a jaw and mouth. also even the eyes could easily be an enhanced vision system or (of course) robot eyes... i think once this is done and folks get to look at the image as a whole it will be something they enjoy studying. i do like the procedural work you have in here too...

11-03-2004, 06:03 AM
pretty wicked awsome texturing

smack monkey
11-03-2004, 10:01 PM
really nice models and lots of em'. You've got a good jump on this Challenge.

11-04-2004, 12:03 AM (

another composition.. just to see the size of this litle spider... the biger is more coll

11-04-2004, 12:16 AM
Peddy - thanks man!! i ´ll try this in next steps

pBarrelas - thanks dude, about the texture.. is very complication to smal peace on the final image.. u know

dead last - thanks man.. the soldier is coming very cool model... i will try to finishe there in the next week...

stork - very intresting analyse.. heheh remember is ispired on the old samurais armors.. hehhe
about the texture... the soldier i will paint texture for there... ok heheh
thanks man

vrhead - thanks dude

smack-monkey.. thanks man!! do you say jump?! i´m in the begning of my image heheh
thanks man

thanks, and best luck for all

11-04-2004, 12:27 AM
Pratick, since the Mecha will be very small in the final comp, you're giving me a reason to tell you once again that you should use a texture that let us see more the shape of your model, which is very cool!!

But you are the one who have the final image in your head, and i have confidente in you, so go ahead dude!!:thumbsup:

11-04-2004, 04:15 AM
Fantastic stuff..... love the composites :thumbsup:

11-04-2004, 05:38 AM
Hello people from Brazil !!!

Em fim posso falar um pouco de portugues...meu ingles sucks !

Bom Patrick o seu trabalho está muito bom.....excelente modelagem e ambientalização do 3D com o real.....muito bom.

Bom eu sou novo aqui no forum.....esse é o meu primeiro contest e estou com algumas dificuldades meio bobas de me encontrar nesses forums....
Por exemplo....não é sempre que aparece o botão de reply em baixo dos topicos!
Outra nao consigo colocar mais de uma imagem no mesmo tópico?
Para colocar as imagens anexadas ao tópico eu devo ir na pagina principal ... e depois de colocar uma imagem não ha nenhum botão ou comando para voltar o que me força a dar um refesh na pagina.....isto está correto?

Bom...desculpe a amolação.....boa sorte para você e para todos os brasileiros....quem sabe o Brasil leva mais uma vitoria no concurso !!!

11-04-2004, 06:02 AM
reminds me of davewilson's arach, looks great, :thumbsup: keep it up

11-04-2004, 01:23 PM
hi Patrick !
your scene is being very good, the idea of putting the gigantic spider walking on the Paulista avenue was great.
keep going and good look:thumbsup:

11-05-2004, 02:00 AM
Very thanks all.. i´m currectly working on the layout of my image and making some concept art...

ver thanks all!!

11-05-2004, 02:36 AM
looks good

nice car models also
keep it up

11-05-2004, 03:27 AM
car models? holly 6 heheeh this´is a photographi dude.. only the mecha spider is 3D.....

thanks all

pBarrelas i know dude... if is necessary i will paint a texture.. if is necessary hehehehe

c ya all

11-07-2004, 04:39 AM
oh ok
sorry the buildings in the background looked kind of cg but i cant tell
these days they all look the same
cant tell the differance between cg and reality

11-07-2004, 11:59 AM
Very nice modeling (clean) and textures:thumbsup:
Clever idea to show the size :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: And very nice executed:thumbsup:

11-07-2004, 12:23 PM
damn good composition but that is n't it right, u got way more modelling to do. heheh.

ur spider needs some outboard weapons.
nice work so far. keep it up man. :)

11-07-2004, 02:00 PM
Wow, your skills are good. The spider looks really good, the materials and lighting is great, thumbs up! Oh and, have you tried Area shadows to obtain a better reallness?

11-07-2004, 02:08 PM
very cool robot design, and impressive texturing.

Loved the concept you did, and now that it's being worked out it looks very impressive

11-07-2004, 03:50 PM
looking great.. man.. the metal on the spider seems a little too corroded. . maybe some more vaiation in it's surface also.. keep it up.. I love the suit design...

11-09-2004, 12:00 AM (

i´m finished the soldier skull i just need fix some bugs hehehe
this a litle test of composite...
C&C is welcome

11-09-2004, 12:13 AM
very good!


to impressionado com a evolução desse seu trabalho está ficando realmente fabuloso...

estamos aguardando mais atualizações :love:

11-09-2004, 12:19 AM
Very nice work !
I guess their (right) hands still need refining, am I correct ?

Looks like we've got a nice group of bad guys here anyway.:thumbsup:

11-09-2004, 12:24 AM

this is so F**** good!

very very nice! i'm impressed

keep going!

11-09-2004, 12:32 AM
huhu i love it !

it s from SW3 or what? ;)

Good work and continue man !!!

11-09-2004, 12:32 AM
hy guys!!

dark-elf2 - ok man... you win kkk.. thanks for the coment

SUN - very thanks sun!!

nobrain - i don´t know if the spider need or not more wepons... i realy don´t know.. hehe thanks man..

Kaksht - hi man.. i´m used area lights, but i need to work on lights and render.. is not a final render heheh

KennyM - thanks man... i try to make my better! heheh

teyekanik - uhmm i don´t know about the material.. i like this.. but i can change if necessari

erudito - very thanks dude!!

deadly force - yes i´m need to make the machinegun to fix this hand in currectly position...

well Very very thanks all

i´m back soon
c ya

paulo crumbim
11-09-2004, 01:43 AM
fala aeee brother! muito bom vein!! manda ve ae ups! ups! ups! - segue firme ae vein! t+

11-09-2004, 02:19 AM
:scream: Great work! Very impressive!!

Very Nice! Keep it up! :thumbsup:

11-09-2004, 02:43 AM
Ae D-3, meu ta mandando muito bem.. esse último post eu fikei de boka aberta ..... muito bom mesmo... cara, tu naum ta devendo pra ningume no contest naum hein??? parabéns garoto... e vai em frente nesse nível... q eu não saio mais desse post hauhauhauhauhauhau

arrebenta!!!:buttrock: :buttrock:

Wesley Schneider

11-09-2004, 03:48 AM
i think perhaps those "guns" could use some refinement lol... sorry couldnt resist, it may add humour to have them bludgeon their opponents to death with a cube primitive though...
In all seriousness, i still really like that design. it is just really cool

11-09-2004, 03:54 AM
storm troopers x10 hehe =) great stuff man

11-09-2004, 06:11 AM
Well, the guns arent looking very real, just kiding lol :) Man, those soldiers look awesome and the eyes are just stunning, really like the glow of them, keep up the great work! Thumbs up!

11-09-2004, 08:57 AM
agree on the blue eyes, they look very good :thumbsup:, they provide an excellent contrast with the overall brown orange tint of the scene

11-09-2004, 09:56 PM
The soldier model is very cool and that box that he's holding looks pretty dangerous!! heh heh:)

11-09-2004, 10:19 PM
I like the composition, the color is nice, I agree with the rest about the eyes, put good contrast on the picture.

I guess there any too many jokes about the boxes so I won't say a word about it... :D haha

keep it up!

11-10-2004, 02:29 AM
Patrick, your work is being each better than other.

The soldier are very very good. ;)/


11-10-2004, 02:32 AM
paulo crumbim - Valeu velho!! espero que apareça mais vezes

BiBiNhA - thanks my friend!!

Wesley Schneider - Valeu mano.. to tentando to tentando.. hehehe

stork - thanks man.. what is the problem? nice cubic guns no? hehehehe

vrhead - thanks man!!

Kaksht - thanks dude.. i´m realy liked the eyes... cool effects hehehe

KennyM - thanks to man... very thanks

pBarrelas - thanks dude.. u to going to say about my guns?! hehehe

plaguelord - thanks man!! and thanks to don´t say anything about the boxguns hehehehe

Thanks all!!

i´m modeled the guns but i forget in the studio.. i´m post tomorow! ok!!

c ya!

11-10-2004, 08:06 AM
Hell yes, very cool box guns!

Oh sorry :D

The soldiers look very menacing indeed. Can't fail!

11-10-2004, 12:13 PM
Hi Patrick - very martial and brutal (in a positive way):thumbsup: Looks very nice.
Keep that up:buttrock:

11-10-2004, 07:46 PM
GkDesign - very thanks dude.. hehehe

JamesMK - thanks man. guns guns... lot guns.. i'm show soon hehehe

Saschi0815 - thanks man.

11-10-2004, 08:04 PM
Fala manow!

Bom, to acompanhando....Ta ficando bao! Sem comentarios por enquanto...

Boa Sorte cara!


Itamar Ferreira

11-10-2004, 09:26 PM (

a composite to show the bad arm hehehe coments???
thanks guys

11-10-2004, 09:31 PM
Ha ha! Love it - very massive movie poster feeling there. A little hard to read since the background and foreground elements have similar colors, but certainly a very cool shot :buttrock:

11-10-2004, 09:32 PM
hy guys more images to show here!!! hehehe
click on the image to see bigger hehe (

Wall Paper 800x600 and 1600x1200 (

click on image to see bigger heheh (

that´s it.. thanks guys!!

Itamar - valeu mano!!

11-10-2004, 09:53 PM
That´s the man!!

As all the new post from him, a surprise.Everybody will agree the excellent work with no comments to say. It´s looking with a movie poster with scenes from a movie mix between terminator and starship troopers:scream:.
Man, continue with more inspiration showing more for us and "mete bronca ai pro persoar ver e babar".

Just waiting the final version!!

See u!! (

11-10-2004, 10:39 PM
Muito bom d_3, desculpa por não poder escrever em ingles. mas Pelo menos não deixo de dar as minhas felicitações pelo excelente trabalho. Achei a cena com muito fog. MAs vc deve saber o que ta fazendo. Flw velho.

11-11-2004, 08:05 AM
Hi Patrick. Really like your pic - it does have a very menacing feel to it but agree that maybe a slight variant in colour between the fore and back grounds might define the depth more. will keep watching and good luck. :thumbsup: Claireabella

11-11-2004, 09:11 AM
Wow, i must say that i'm amased, really, very very good job :) Really looks like a movie poster, heh.
Oh and i like the guns now lot better then before :scream:

11-11-2004, 09:32 AM
Great!!! :thumbsup: Looks excellent! Keep it up mate!

11-11-2004, 09:38 AM
Very nice. Only thing i don't like is that greyish/white-ish dust or mist at the bottom - that color simply does not fit with the rest of the image.

11-11-2004, 12:53 PM
Very good looking composition! :thumbsup: It's like an army recruitment poster!

"Join our forces now and benefit from our privileges!"

Agree with above comments thought concerning colors in the composition!

You have plenty of time to work things out and model more staff!:buttrock:

11-11-2004, 04:03 PM
Patrick blz!

Cara a cena está ficando muito boa, e acho que aimagem final vai agradar a todos que estão acompanhando o tópico, legal que sua produção está cada vez melhor não só na parte técnica mas tb na direção de arte.
Boa Sorte amigo.


11-11-2004, 08:04 PM (

hy guyes i'm remodeled the shark ship to take a more usefull aspecte.. c&C is welcome!!!

i'm back soon to talk about

11-12-2004, 01:33 AM
JamesMK - thanks man.. very thanks.. i´m agree abou the back and fore..

well the imagens is note a final imagens is just a composite to show the models hehehe

Blackman thanks dude... heheh

arcovoltaire Valeu velho.. muito fog.. bem sei lah ehhehe

Claireabella - thanks. i will try to take more deph and contrast thanks

Kaksht - Borro thanks hehe

azazel - thanks realy don´t fit !

terraarc thanks.. yes.. i will model more and more elements kkk

Valeu velinho.. vindo de vc sei que é cincero... hehehe

Thanks to all and Best luck

Click on the image to see bigger!! hehehe (

and this page in large version ok (

11-12-2004, 02:13 AM

I mean -- WWWOOOOWWW :scream:

Great work!!! :thumbsup:

Looking forward to seeing more of it!

Beijos ;)

11-12-2004, 02:19 AM
Awesome job. I really like that movie poster-like image, its very cool, and I like how you added the close-ups to show the detail. I agree about the color, it would look better if there was more difference. I also think it would be better if parts weren't as dark, for some reason it seems distracting. I also really like the newest images of that model.

11-12-2004, 02:38 AM
Nicccccce. :D
Reminds me a bit of Unreal Tournament for some reason.

11-12-2004, 03:14 AM
esse bagulho da ficando mt loko
nao para nao kra :]

11-12-2004, 12:08 PM
Wow, Patrick, extremely impressive stuff here! It reminds me a litte bit of the "Starship Troopers".
Very massive+brutal style. Really cool, man!!! :love:
I'm very excited about your final render !
Go on like that!:applause:

Heber G Conde
11-12-2004, 04:26 PM
Great Job Man!

I love the lights and the specular of the whole shot! The details on the ship add some really cool details to the specularity!

The lights under the ship are great, too!


Tá Muito bem iluminado, Patrick!
Curti muito a composição da cena (tomada e balanço de cores), tb gosto bastante do aspecto realista, muito legal mesmo!

Outro aspecto que convence é a funcionalidade da nave, ela tem uma estrutura bem interessante e funciona visualmente, bem legal !

Brother, acho que a fumaça pode ser mais volumétrica! Talvez mais variação na densidade ajude! Mas acho que vc ainda vai ver isso, né?!

Quanto aos soldados, gostei bastante da disposição dos homens! Parece que funcionarão bem a média distância, bem legal!

Me agrada também a luz tétrica de toda a cena! Boa escolha!

Manda ver brother! Tô de olho!


11-12-2004, 06:29 PM
hey man... i just want to tell you that your work is simply amazing, very heroic all that ships and soldiers...keep going:buttrock:

11-12-2004, 11:01 PM
BiBiNhA - Thanks girl... hehehe

Dead_Last - thanbks man... i´m dont going to lost time on this images heheh i´m need to make more models...

ArtisticVisions - thanks man.. remember the UT? well if you say.... i ´m don´t know much of UT, but thanks man...

erudito - Valeu velho!!!

Saschi0815 - thanks man... to me remember the hovercraft of matrix, and memember another sci-fi movies heheh very thanks dude.. but i´m have a long jorney to get my final image!! heheh

Heber G Conde - very thanks dude.. this is my prefered style... heheh
Valeu Heber!! cara eu curto muito esse lance tetrico, mono e tal... valeu pelo comentario ainda tem muita coisa que vou ver aos poucos conforme for chegando proximo de ter os modelos todos prontos...
Valeu mano

melkao - Very thanks man!! hehehe

Thanks all!! and best luck!

11-13-2004, 12:09 AM
hi Patrick !
great work, your scene is very beautiful, congratulation

11-13-2004, 12:14 AM (

i´m starte the model of a warrior.. womam of-course heheh
i´m working on the head.. but i dont resist and i´m tryed to make a skin shader using a default materials of max.. no MR or another renders... ok

coming nice shader i think...
thanks all

11-13-2004, 05:11 AM

Great entry man!! nice concept and modeling ;)

The mood seams a little bit dirty and noisy for my taste, but it doesn't mean that is not good.

Keep it up and good lucky!!

Mete bronca malandro!!

Vitor Vilela

Heber G Conde
11-13-2004, 12:20 PM
Great job!
I hadn´t seen the hole army - broken link!

Strong shot!

Congratulations my friend!

11-13-2004, 06:01 PM
wow.. amazing progress...
those shark ships looking sweeeeeet...

mad action!.. will be following from now on ;p

11-13-2004, 06:28 PM
hey patrick !!
great job !! like alot the bad guys and the spiders ... (nice composition ..)
the women looks great too and the shader is fine to me . keep up !


11-13-2004, 10:07 PM
really cool !

11-13-2004, 11:49 PM
i think that the neck of this man looks to thin... or it is just me... u decide :)
anyway ... nice progress + work is going here :bounce:

11-14-2004, 08:29 AM
Patrick, very nice work, Brazil rules !!!

I think that your starship need more contrast between the parts. You can use a ligher shader in some parts to make de volumes more visible and to bring the details out of the shadow.

The warrior have some strange proportions.....

As markovic said the neck is to thin and the upper part of the head it´s to small too.

Take a look in the ( site to some proportion examples

The shader is very good, but you need to simulate the blood under the skin. I don´t know how to make it in the Max, but you can try something like material layers or a map on the ambient color channel os the shader

11-14-2004, 03:33 PM
dude the Sharkship composition is awesome, superb texturing and lighting! :drool:

11-15-2004, 09:22 AM
Nice start on the woman model, the texture looks promising but I think you should rescale some parts of the face.:thumbsup:

Keep adding more stuff!

Background song: "We have all ....the time.....of the world..." performed by L. Armstrong for one of James Bond movies....

11-16-2004, 12:08 AM
I came back and I saw your image, it´s amazing man! really nice!Keep work!! Now just you have to detail more your ideia. It´s great art.

11-16-2004, 03:20 AM
hy all!! sorry for the slowly to reply you are. but i´m get a 3 days of vacation hehehe

dcmoutinho - thanks dude!!!

Vitor Vilela - very thanks dude!! taste is taste.. i´m realy like this heheeh Valeu Vitão!!

Heber G Conde - Thanks man!! i´m your fan dude!! and u know! hehehe

Versiden - thanks man!! i´m realy happy if you follow this entry man!! thanks!!

painkiller - thanks man!! i´m like to hehe the woman i need to work more on she!! thanks

gpepper - thanks dude!!

markovicd. - thanks man.. about the neck pf the soldier.. this guys is humam? heheh i don´t know heheh there is the question... hehe thanks man!

Deankovitch - thanks man!! about the ships.. i´m agree. i need to work more on the lighthing of this!!

About the soldier, is a style man.. small head like comics and manga! the proportion is correctly to me.

i´m a very hard student of anatomy and i´m know a litle of this!! heheh
another point of the soldier is.. there is a human? there is a humanoid

well the shader of skin i still working on this i need to painto some maps to put another aspects of the skin.. like more pigmentation, blood vein, SSS ... i´m still working on this!!

REaly thanks for yor coment is very helpfull!! thanks dude!! and BRA"S"IL RULES !!!

plaguelord - thanks dude,

terraarc - thanks man!! well the woman face is WIP i´m reale need work more on she!!
a will continues puthing more stuff!! hehehe

luciano berutti - thanks dude!! yes i need to explain more about my idea.. i will try to make more conpreessive concept to show the idea!! thanks man!!

Thanks to all !!
c ya!

11-16-2004, 06:35 AM
Hey Patrick that is some nice, detailed modeling man, keep it up !!!:thumbsup:

My CG Challenge XVI - Grand Space Opera - 3D Thread (

11-16-2004, 08:06 PM (

hy all i'm done the face modeling and texture shader for this girl.. coments&critiques??
Thanks all

11-16-2004, 08:09 PM
i am scared! :(
well nice but i dont like this spec... it looks like it is made out of stone... to much bump for my eyes! :eek: fix that !:)

11-16-2004, 08:12 PM
It looks like she is possessed , I like her. :twisted: The skin shade was better before IMO.

11-16-2004, 11:51 PM
Tudo bem, well, I think your work impressive and truely amazing. Just one thing, in the face i think you have to model the scars to add reality, just a thought!

Bom trabalho.

11-16-2004, 11:58 PM
wow those flyers look like movie stuff , very very good !!

11-17-2004, 12:34 AM
It looks great ...for a woman born out of granite.... I would use some SSS, I think thats only the thing which corrects all the other actual "bad" things (this isn't meant as "bad", u know....:) )...ahh btw: her teeth are whiter than my shirt (ok, after washing;-))) - I mean there is a too big difference between the face and the teeth....

...but this is critic on a high level - it looks great, man - just details to change here,hmm?
Best wishes, mate:thumbsup:

11-17-2004, 01:39 AM
What the matrix should of been.

Great work. Very good blend of manga/sci-fi styles.
Now Im inspired to work harder on my entry...

buena suerte amigo...

11-17-2004, 01:52 AM
as i told you, excelent

you're monster hehehehe

Abração veio tá duca meu Parabéns :thumbsup:

11-17-2004, 01:53 AM
faalaa mo fi!!

very nice dudE! keep on rockin!! this is really nice but thake a look at the shader she looks like a stone, but I'm sure that you will fix this!


11-17-2004, 02:15 AM
hey Patrick sam!!
High profile job man... congratulations my friend! what a quite freaking speed and quality!! I think u r one of my favorite! U deserve it!


11-17-2004, 03:20 AM
Conplete amazing textures! And also stupid models! C´mon man! Don´t you have friends? Girlfriend? Parents? Nobody loves you? How can a normal guy do something like this????

Simples! This guy is not normal ahhahahahahaha!

Neah! excelent work D-3! Just fantastic! :bounce:

11-17-2004, 10:38 PM (

more details of she.. hehehe

11-17-2004, 11:35 PM
markovicd. - i will try to make better, but i´m think this aspect is because of the pos productiom.. desatured.. i will try...

BartokDesign - thanks dude!!

high - Thanks man!!

Squibbit - wow realy thanks man!! movie stuff cool!!

Saschi0815 - thanks man!! about the SSS i´m thinked about this... but this fenomene don´t work easy.. and is a recent tecnologie in renders... and a big number of peoples will going to use this.. i´m just try make my art independent of tecnologie! heheh
and render SSS is very slow!!!

WazaR - thanks man!! and best luck !!!

uchimata - thanks man!!! i´m a monster?why? heheh

tabajara - thanks dude!! look like a stone? why? to me look like a desatured people!! heheh

Mobra - very thanks man!! I think u r one of my favorite! U deserve it! to! hehehe

AlexandroCastro - thanks man!! i´m a normal guy dude!! i have friends... i have a girl friend. love-me... well hes say love me heheheh

Very thanks for all!!

11-18-2004, 12:12 AM (

more details of she.. hehehe work man....i just think the specular on the eye spreads out a bit more than t should..... :) :thumbsup:

11-18-2004, 12:44 AM
DimitrisLiatsos - thanks man!! i think this to.. i wil try to fix the eyes especular tomorow... thanks man!! and best luck!! very impressive work, u have on your entry!! hy-profile !!

11-18-2004, 02:06 AM (

hy all!! this is a litle concept to show part of the scene! C&C is welcome!!

11-18-2004, 02:12 AM
amazing scketch man!!.about the render i aldo think the specular in the eyes is too high...the skin is much better...congrats!


11-18-2004, 03:37 AM
very nice my friend!
very cool concept

i want more ups ups ups ups :D

11-18-2004, 12:00 PM
JulianoCastro - thanks dude!! about the eyes.. i will try to fix it today heheh thanks dude

tabajara - thanks man!! take easy man.. i need to sleep, eat and another heheheh i´m a not irom man!!

thanks man!!

C ya